The Vampire Kings Slave Mate Comments

  • janna dykierek

    nice and interesting Story so farbut please just decide if its neveah or nevaeh

    05/26/2023 20:48

  • Jody Nichols

    this is a good book I can’t wait to find out if marry is a vampire or maybe something els besides human can wait to find out.

    04/02/2023 18:42

  • Barb Austin

    4f5d Started reading an so far very descriptive and it caught my attention send exciting and different

    04/01/2023 04:23

  • Hayley louise

    4f5d I find this story not the usual same old. draws you in. I'm excited for what happens next now the vampire King has bought her as a blood slave.

    03/30/2023 11:51

  • Jopas

    4f5d I've never fell in love with a Vampire story until I read this one. It's amazing and hot. Great job the Author did put out here.

    03/30/2023 11:51

  • Chika Brooke

    4f5d This book is not your usual vampire book,It encompasses other exotic beings like fairys,dragons,werewolf etc.The story line is superb with so many twists that keeps you on the edge of your seat.I loved reading it and stopped till the end. Its a must read

    03/30/2023 11:01

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    4f5d This is a fantastic story ! I could not put it down after starting to read it.

    03/30/2023 10:56

  • Jan T

    4f5d #4f5d I read the first few chapters and I must say it is good! I'm not usually into Vampire stories so I'm keen on this story

    03/30/2023 10:39

  • middi

    4f5d - interesting that there is a slight twist on the usual vampire narrative. never seen a vampire that potentially has a mate, it's usually the werewolves. curious to see how it unfolds

    03/30/2023 10:21

  • Madelein Schoeman

    4f5d - another amazing book! love the 2 main characters but also live the fact that the author incorporates the second in command and his love slave as well as the Dragon Twins. You also don't expect the book to end the way it does!! Go Queen👑. The author also teases you with spin off stories mermaids and fairy kings.

    03/30/2023 10:19

  • zira

    4f6d omg...my heart's squeeze in anticipation...this book will be the death of me in a good way...😂😂😂...these is the second vampire book i had and i want more of it

    03/30/2023 10:09

  • Awurabena Afriyie Asare

    #4f5d# The fact that the King was able to protect the girl is very admirable. Wish every human is protected and treated with love and care.

    03/30/2023 10:09

  • Gemma Butler

    4f5d Very interesting book introduction. I’ve added to my library and can’t wait to start reading

    03/30/2023 10:06

  • Aneesahs

    he describes himself like a werewolf more than a vampire

    01/26/2023 06:44

  • L. Roy

    this is a great story so far can't wait 🙌 to read the remainder of this book 👏 🙌 👍 😄 😊

    01/26/2023 05:53

  • Aneesahs

    I don't like when chapters repeat themselves but just from a different point of view. it a waste of a chapter.

    01/16/2023 03:38

  • Liv

    ✅ Finished Sunday 3:48pm 22.11.27

    11/27/2022 20:49

  • Christina Ahlbrandt

    ending was too rushed, author should have taken the time to really show the happiness of Mary and cast. a little bit disappointed

    08/31/2022 15:22

  • Kristi RÕUK

    I love their friendship. The girls look beautyful but I'm cringing a little about putting together a silver-green dress and red-gold jewelry ...

    08/05/2022 09:22

  • Janet Bennett

    I am hooked

    07/29/2022 08:26

  • Janet Bennett

    only read the 1st chapter hooked already

    07/29/2022 07:52

  • LoveWins

    This was a very good book! I can’t wait for the coming sequels.

    07/22/2022 02:43

  • Beckie Treble

    Just finished your book after starting it on Tuesday. (it's now Thursday 1:22am) I thoroughly enjoyed this book but was hoping we'd have some more chapters after the Battle instead of the last. I will re-read it soon. Thank you ♡

    07/14/2022 00:23

  • Ada Gold

    your book is amazing. I just wanted to ask the book with Marques, Neveah and Kade is it out and what's the name and ofcourse the one with Ambrose. beautiful book

    07/08/2022 09:40

  • Dinchuks

    @Marriah Catherine Perry, I have started to read one of your books - The Vampire kings slave mate. It is very exited and great story, but there is one nuance to be corrected. As a person who speaks and reads in RU (its not my native language, but Im good at it) I have to write this to you: in RU the roots of the words for female and masculine genger are basically the same, but the endings of the words are different for each gendre, namely, there are different inflections of nouns and verbs for each of gendre. Google usually translate words and sentences in masculine gendre, so in the story, when Nikolai adresses Mary, the correct version would be for example "моя дорогая". As it is written down as it is now, it is like he adresses a male and not a female. I hope this knowledge will help you to improve your story. I will continue to read it with interest ♡

    06/27/2022 10:50

  • Reader-954199

    “glimmer of hope…”

    06/16/2022 23:51

  • Kathy Kinsley

    quiet knock instead of quite quiet - not loud quite- to a full extent. That was quite an experience.

    06/13/2022 13:20

  • Kathy Kinsley

    capture should be captor

    06/13/2022 12:40

  • MC Perry

    Let me start this note by promising that this story hasn't been abandoned, nor will it be abandoned; I will finish all the novels I've started. As a writer, these stories that I've created, this world that I've crafted deserves to be finished, and my readers on this platform have spent money on my books, and they deserve an ending, so I pinky swear this book, along with my other works will always be finished.

    06/04/2022 07:45

  • Amber-lee Stewart

    has this book been abandoned?

    05/31/2022 18:02

  • Analiza

    wga5 will happen now?

    05/21/2022 13:37

  • courtney braden

    is this the same Nikolai as in the unexpected Luna book?

    05/16/2022 20:34

  • MC Perry

    Just an update… I am working on the final chapters now for this book. There are about ten chapters left give or take and I will be positing them all at once. Thanks for staying with me along this bumpy ride. The second book I will be writing will be about Marques- The merman, but that is a tale for another time ;)

    04/14/2022 17:45

  • Ruby Moore

    l am happy about the contract. l really enjoy the book 🤗

    04/11/2022 00:07

  • MC Perry

    It’s moving week. We will be hitting the road today, giving me plenty of time to write. I will be uploading all new chapters this weekend

    03/15/2022 17:39

  • Analiza

    i hate it. mary is an idiot for trusting.... she is a human but do nit know Her kind?

    03/09/2022 14:12

  • Analiza

    what wull happen to mary?

    03/09/2022 14:01

  • Bella Jersey 2

    already keeping secrets no matter how small always comes to bite you in the ass

    03/06/2022 20:42

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I hope Mary put a stop to certain practices

    03/06/2022 20:38

  • Michaela Alaniz

    how often are the updates for this book?

    02/28/2022 23:58

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I see a nice loophole we’ll tell him when we save our guys. we will not make our guys meet him

    02/28/2022 18:00

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I think dad is gonna make me throw up

    02/28/2022 17:55

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I like how she’s trying to survive this situation

    02/26/2022 01:09

  • Bella Jersey 2

    just to state for the record when asshole gets his ass handed to him. I’m throwing a party

    02/26/2022 00:52

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I hope vampires don’t have OCD.

    02/26/2022 00:34

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Mom’s revenge or justice was something out of game of thrones

    02/26/2022 00:26

  • Bella Jersey 2

    yep selfish

    02/25/2022 11:35

  • Bella Jersey 2

    the same line the beta used when they killed Mary’s sister

    02/25/2022 11:01

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Elizabeth is already in trouble

    02/25/2022 10:26

  • Bella Jersey 2

    he’s a shity judge to allow people being forced into slavery

    02/25/2022 09:51

  • Bella Jersey 2

    can he also buy bethanie. please

    02/25/2022 09:45

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I hate how evil one race can become. then decided they can make humans slaves and sell them

    02/25/2022 09:40

  • Siobhain Shaw-Walker

    Started this book today and absolutely devoured it. I love it! So well written, with very few mistakes. I love the story and I can't wait to read more!!!

    02/24/2022 10:42

  • caimhe dineen

    read through them all in 3 hours, can’t put it down! any new chapters?

    02/23/2022 06:11

  • Taylor Burnside

    I am hoping for a new chapter soon but I also hope the author is well! Your chapters help me so much to destress between college tests and work! You are awesome!

    02/20/2022 20:07

  • Analiza

    bastard Ash. i am hoping the coronation will go on....

    02/09/2022 12:20

  • Analiza

    wow.... i am hoping the updates will be soon....

    02/06/2022 09:54

  • Joann Ramirez

    I have to say at firstA I wondered if this story would be any good but I have to say I love reading it so far hope it stays like this

    02/02/2022 14:31

  • MC Perry

    ***WRITING UPDATE*** I have been super busy with some exams for school, now that that is over I’ll be writing at least 4 new chapters this week. I’m hoping to have all 4 chapters posted by Friday at the latest,

    02/01/2022 03:54

  • Analiza

    the sooner the update please....

    01/28/2022 14:09

  • Analiza

    yeah i also hate the wolves.... i am hooing the coronation went well....

    01/28/2022 14:07

  • Chicken N A Biscuit

    I’m hating the wolves in this book! I always love reading werewolf books, well not this one.lol. I am LOVING the book so far!

    01/26/2022 23:09

  • Chicken N A Biscuit

    anyone know how often this is updated? thanks

    01/19/2022 04:22

  • Sarah Clift

    when's the next update I'm really enjoying this book

    01/18/2022 00:04

  • Lareina Abercrumbie

    this is GOOOOOOD

    01/16/2022 15:21

  • Tamara Hicks

    lol they are funny

    01/14/2022 05:38

  • Emmalene Delta

    is the younger sisters name Anya, Vanya or Avaya? I'm getting confused in the first chapter

    01/14/2022 02:15

  • Lux Foxy

    how often are the updates?

    01/14/2022 00:23

  • Plasma

    "Nikolai's blood had caused her to orgasm" I haven't even started to read this omg that notification was savage

    01/14/2022 00:14

  • Analiza

    Happy New Year... God Mary is an idiot...

    01/01/2022 03:54

  • Analiza

    Merry Christmas to u too Marriah... excellent chapter.... godbless

    12/24/2021 04:29

  • Analiza

    omg i really like this... i am hoping the updates will ne soon..

    12/17/2021 09:23

  • MC Perry

    wanted to let you all know that I am working on the next update today. the kids and I have a stomach bug so it’s delayed my writing schedule.

    12/16/2021 16:49

  • Analiza

    i like it. hope the update is soon

    12/14/2021 05:52

  • Analiza

    some more updatr please im dying to read😂😂😂

    11/25/2021 08:53

  • Analiza

    wow amazing story....

    11/24/2021 23:45

  • Analiza

    i am hoping they will meet

    11/23/2021 13:13

  • Cypher

    Thank you for writing such a great story, I check for updates daily... Looking forward to how the story develops 😊❤️

    11/22/2021 10:35

  • Analiza

    the chapter is short

    11/20/2021 22:45

  • Desirae Justine

    update please ? 🥺

    11/20/2021 18:11

  • KayJay

    chapters 11 repeat on chapters 13, and there’s no chapter 12.

    11/20/2021 02:54

  • Analiza

    yeah the chapters are short

    11/19/2021 05:47

  • Analiza

    are they mates? i really like this story

    11/19/2021 05:24

  • Firdaus Issah

    I really love this story and can't wait for the next update but the chapters are too short

    11/18/2021 21:42

  • Jamie Berry

    I am loving this story, please continue

    11/17/2021 19:08

  • GiniaAnn

    Her sister’s name keeps getting changed from Anya to Vanya and now it says Avaya. Just wanted to let you know.

    11/16/2021 09:29

  • Angel Pugh

    when does the next chapter come out so ready for it

    11/15/2021 20:40

  • Analiza

    wow.... i cant wait the next chapter.....

    11/13/2021 14:43

  • Analiza

    i just finished reading this chapter and im excuted....

    11/13/2021 14:02

  • Analiza

    chapter 3 only?

    11/12/2021 15:30
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