Unwanted and Unloved by alpha Kane Comments

  • Fka Noyfb

    If she's going to be another doormat character then let know before I start reading

    08/22/2023 02:22

  • Gemma Rookes

    q1w5 I've really enjoyed the start to this book. I love that it gets straight to the point and that summer is a strong woman who sounds that she won't take anything from anyone

    04/02/2023 13:27

  • Debra Sykes

    q1w5 really enjoyed what I read so far really hope Kane doesn't mess up but going to keep reading to find out

    04/02/2023 12:52

  • Gemma Butler

    q1w5 I enjoyed the introduction to this book but I don’t start books that are ongoing. I’ve added it to my library to read when it’s complete

    04/02/2023 12:20

  • John Robinson

    q1w5 I love Summer the main female character, beat that's not the last we heard from Olivia it was way too easy, hope Kane doesn't hurt Summer again. Think it's going to be an interesting story.

    04/02/2023 12:14

  • Sabrina Bray

    I'm only on chapter 2 but feel like it should be the end of the book. this book definitely needs more of a back story before the happy reunion

    02/25/2023 17:32

  • Sandra Saß

    Chapter 1: ..he hugged her clothes to him?!? was it meant to read ...he hugged her close to him? because it makes no sense with clothes 🤪

    10/13/2022 18:05

  • Catherine Favor

    I would love to read this but can't afford to. is it available in hard copy or another format.

    06/25/2022 11:54

  • Joanne Hess

    I'll pass on this one. it sounds good but as an English major I've had it with these stories where Grammer and punctuation is non-existent

    06/24/2022 16:19

  • astrea

    SHONE is the past tense of shine

    06/24/2022 14:28

  • Amanda Marie

    I could barely get through the beginning. An abundance of grammatical errors. Punctuation is important. I could see an amazing story if it was edited accordingly.

    06/24/2022 10:05

  • Hanna

    oh no the old best friend is going to come back making drama. I love the story …

    06/23/2022 08:57

  • Stina

    Bata? Seriously, spellchecking is not for the week. Still, good plott.

    06/23/2022 03:23

  • Marie Peat

    I can't read this there are far to many grammatical errors that it ruins the story. I enjoyed what I managed to read

    06/11/2022 06:18

  • Reader-457952

    it’s wolfsbane not wolfsvain. wolfsvain makes me think of a vain wolf

    06/02/2022 08:37

  • Teresa Patterson

    I like the story so far it's good but it needs to be rewritten because the flow of the story has too many stops and starts and doesn't transition well from one thought to the next. I wrote a story in a notebook and I loved it but I knew I had to rewrite it because of the flow so I started rewriting it and it came out a little better of course I lost that book and one of the hasty moves from house to house but it's a good storyline.

    05/09/2022 14:00

  • Reader-619706

    It’ll be easier to read with punctuation especially when people are talking.

    01/08/2022 01:30