A Rogue For The Alpha Twins Comments
Amaris Gigi Marte
okay so I’ll just say this the story line is good and I like it but the only thing that is annoying is the writing and the editing is really bad and I mean very poorly written
08/26/2023 02:21Ade Nanette
The writing is bad, full of mistakes. This book was never proof read, it is very difficult to read. Too bad because the story could hav been nice.
04/07/2023 17:35
Reader-972889
poor writing and editing.
04/01/2023 05:30Ashley Lucabaugh
9p0a From the little bit I've read this sounds like an intruding book. I can't wait to see what happens as the story develops.
03/31/2023 11:59Lara Napier
9p0a this book is starting to get interesting! the first alpha I don’t like, he’s a jerk so I hope they go after him
03/31/2023 07:46Linda Strandquist
#9p0a how the editing gets better. the story is getting interesting. the first alpa is a jerk hope they go after him. love the reference to Sophia the First my kids favorite show growing up
03/31/2023 01:39zira
9p0a i like the story when one heroin or the hero is a rogue...it only shows that not all rogue are totally bad..
03/31/2023 01:39Terrin Garis
#9p0a# Only 3 chapters in and I just can't. I'm usually really relaxed with editing and what not but this books complete lack of it actually makes it super confusing and hard to read.
03/31/2023 01:26
Jan T
9p0a #9p0a I have been intrigued by this book for awhile now and will keep an open mind while reading it. I guess only time will tell when I read more of this story.
03/31/2023 01:16Rafael
#9p0a# an interesting introduction. I like the supernatural stories. the characters also seems interesting. I added in my library and I am going to reading it soon.
03/31/2023 01:15nakisha adams
I love the story but I want to cry for Sophia 🥹
12/27/2022 17:21Megan Marie Monge
Honestly im so caught up in the story I didnt even see the errors٫ you're doing a great job! id like to see any of these people that are complaining write a book and have zero errors✋
12/19/2022 00:34Felicia Byrd
it's shameful the way you ended this story after it just started getting good. and then another one?!?! girl bye
09/13/2022 02:50Michelle Carroll
very disappointing ending. very rushed. spoiled a good read
09/08/2022 14:33GiniaAnn
As disappointing as this ending is, hope your eyesight gets better because that is more important than more details about the birthday and everything else.
08/28/2022 10:55Nicole Morgan
I love the story and interesting.
08/11/2022 05:30
Anita Castle
I looked the book but I found that when it started to get really good and interesting that book just ended.
08/04/2022 20:19kata rihari
horrible read needs editing
08/02/2022 05:54
Free
difficult to read w all the grammatical errors
08/02/2022 04:23Isabelle Pilon
I’m crying for the past 2 chapters. Realy like the story, thank you
07/31/2022 08:42
John Doe
Dear readers, I want to first of all thank all of you for choosing to read my book. You don’t how much seeing all this reads inspire me to write better. I am a new writer and my book might not be as good or prefect as other writes yet you choose to read it. Thank you for choosing to read my perfectly imperfect book. More better books are on the way…..
07/29/2022 15:15Sharon Montgomery
Liked this book but the ending was very rushed
07/22/2022 14:27
Designergirl
Ok this book is good but very confusing bcuz Asa is also called Aiden 🤦🏽♀️. Now Lucy is being called gay, so is Lucy a transgender or just a girl being bullied by her former pack 🤔. I just need clarification on these issues.
07/21/2022 06:34
Mad reader
I love this book, been a while since I read a book this good
07/06/2022 06:40Teresa Patterson
some might be confused with how some of the wording is missing or wrong but seems like a good book
07/04/2022 20:27Shonda Stanneart
Love this story. Can't wait to finish it.
06/23/2022 14:56Olayinka Lawal Adelabu
yea you really need someone to edit your work too much grammatical errors
06/18/2022 21:12sharon dockery deane
the poor girl
06/16/2022 23:31Joanne Stinton
loving the story but the errors it's getting harder to decipher please get this proof read more people will read it 🙏
06/14/2022 05:42Irena Vodišek Smirčić
The book has potential, but English in it is ... sorry, I just can't read this. You need someone who can correct all your mistakes.
06/11/2022 07:46Sharni Mizzy
I really wanted to read this book as what I have read so far is good but I can not continue with all the errors. when something isn't proof read and has alot of errors I lose interest fast. I do hope this can be fixed.
06/06/2022 13:52Lola Weiskopf
its a good thought so far, I’m interested n seeing where it goes. just one thing if you are going to write in english learn more before u write the next book. try writing in your native language if you haven’t already
06/05/2022 04:06
Daniele lion
pretty woman 👘👠👠
05/27/2022 15:12Amanda Leopold
I like the story but so many grammatical errors, it makes it hard to read.
05/23/2022 19:26Marjorie Wall
if you need a proofreader I'm volunteering, your story has great potential, to read it with that volume of mistakes is painful and distracting.
05/23/2022 03:17Kathy Kinsley
where...as in where are the people sitting? (location) were...as in they were very nice people
05/21/2022 23:46Kathy Kinsley
rapped...as in knock on a door. wrapped....to enclose as in "he wrapped his arms around her"
05/21/2022 23:41Hilda Perez Bolde
When you write a book, it should always be in a language your are fluent in ...
05/19/2022 23:06TerriConnar Jensen
having a really hard time reading this with the broken English and all the mistakes
05/18/2022 15:47Corinne George
do the twins have last names?
05/11/2022 02:51that girl KJ
I did the same thing my first day working at a school with prek
05/06/2022 20:38Louise Williams
she already danced with them in the garden when they had dinner there...... also getting annoyed with changes in names - Sophia seems to have been called by a couple of other names since the start
05/01/2022 17:53Jana Kloppers
i am by chapter 44 now A Rogue for the Alphas twins is there more chapter to open A Rogue for the Alphas twins
03/02/2022 06:12Edwina Lewis
I cant eait for the update they they r fully mated I cant wait to see her parents see her. loving it
02/28/2022 05:40Jessica Bean
she still hasn’t even thought about xavier at all again
02/21/2022 22:27Jessica Bean
i feel extremely bad for xavier. his mate never thinks of him only of xiao
02/20/2022 23:04Jessica Bean
xavier always willing to forgive xiao for his errors but xiao never thinks of xavier and its both of their mate but xiao always monopolizes her
02/20/2022 23:04Ashley White
when is the next update
02/09/2022 00:58Ro.oks
Jeez! The grammar is getting worse with every chapter to the point where it's getting annoying trying to guess what the writer meant. Find better editors.
02/04/2022 15:54
