Graham's mind went blank. He was met by the most beautiful she-wolf he had ever seen. He let his eyes trail over her body. She was short and lean but had curves in places that made his mouth dry and his pants tight. 

As he took in her face, his eyes met her ice blue ones, and he stopped breathing for a moment. 

While he was frozen, his wolf was ecstatic and tried to push him forward. She looked just as surprised as him. He took two strides and ended up inches away from her.

 “Mate!” he growled, never breaking eye contact.

***Bella is an omega, lowest in rank of the pack. But she has accepted her place in life. Graham is the alpha, top of the rank. Strong, fierce, and determined to do what is best for his pack. In his mind, he doesn’t have any time for a mate. Yet they meet each other in the midst of the biggest conflict between the packs and rogues to date. 

From omega to luna

Bonus: Dean's mission

How often do you update, or add chapters? 

can’t wait for the next chapter, already blasted through todays one! great job. 

Mawgan Neaves

I try to update with two new chapters daily.

Dripping Creativity

Connie Jones

a couple of times you have patients which are sick people or clients for doctors. The word you want is patience.

April Williams

First paragraph  2nd herd is for a herd of animals,  heard is for hearing. If foreign to English language easy way to remember with words about ears is the word ear is in it like heard or hear. depends on which tense you are using. 

you are a good writer.  the story has good flow and has nice character development.  good job.  definitely enjoying.  😉

2TheBeachIGo

2 mistakes.... form should be from and stamens should be statements..... sorry again 

if you'd read my reply to the author  you'd have seen that I'd apologised and blamed the translation or spellcheck. Being a novice writer myself I understand and the author knew how I meant it. I wasn't intending on nitpicking, only trying to help because English is the hardest language to learn with our nouns, pronouns, tenses, verbs, adverbs and that doesn't include one word sounding the same but spelt 5 ways then it depends on the country you live in. So before abusing me read my apology to her and her reply. Most new authors ask for help with mistakes online if you read it. But you assumed I was being awful to her when in fact it was one writer to another helping. I've stated what I said and why and the only person who I'm answerable to is the author who understood and was fine with it. No need to say nasty things when you don't know the full facts. Find out 1st before abusing. Author and I have no problems. Why do you? That's right only your opinion counts not the author's. 

Writer said English was their 3rd language but your nitpicking. Your not going to find perfect editing in online books. Stick to perfect paper editions. 

Tia R.

 I really wasn't t trying to criticise ar ll. I as I said figured it was to do with a technical fault or translation fault. I  tried to do it in a way to explain the differences and the meanings as English though widely used is supposed to be the hardest language to learn. Even we who have Eglish as our native tongue get confused. I  really was not blaming you or criticising. I was trying to help especially when I realised it was spell check or translation. I am trying to write myself and know how hard it is and the fear of is it good enough. I haven't been game yet. One day I will. I apologise again if it seemed I was picky and rude. It wasn't my intention. But trouble with writing is trying to convey emotion. A sentence can be read in a thousands ways.  Obviously my intentions was taken the wrong way. I do love the story. I love the promise of the story to come. I  suggest only to check your translator and/or spell check. All the best and I look forward to reading more.

In 2nd paragraph  of 4th chapter should be Luna's  not lunas lunas is plural. 