Alpha Xander’s Human Mate Comments

  • Marina Rina

    Cute story, very basic. Like others mentioned it was probably written by a teenager who wants to write. Lots of grammatical mistakes.

    12/16/2024 00:39

  • gloria cristello

    it's a great story so far! but omg! the Grammer is so bad I almost don't wanna finish it. I'm sorry 😞. not trying to be rude, but its very hard to read sometimes. but the story line is 👍

    03/13/2024 14:26

  • Agustina Cruz

    The story was so so good! I liked it very much! Cute and entertaining, the best combination!

    12/03/2023 19:50

  • Phidola Phileshna

    I've never liked goodbyes

    09/04/2023 21:26

  • Tritana Graham

    cute story, it was vey entertaining and thoughtful and clean. 💐💐💐💐💕💕💕

    09/04/2023 19:24

  • Victoria E

    Please ignore miss Virginia's comment, she apparently thinks everyone has to be able to write a chapter coherently the first time and not miss any mistakes.

    09/04/2023 13:25

  • Victoria E

    Just like autocorrect on any phone, not everything works all the time

    09/04/2023 13:05

  • …but is there going to be a part 2? 🙃 I want to know the rest of their storryyyyy

    09/04/2023 13:05

  • Virginia Cunningham

    Dont bother unless you like to read childish dribble. no editing dont even think they read it before posting it. Think it was written by a 10 year old.Facts keep getting mixed up.

    09/04/2023 13:00