Lycan's Mate (His Claim) Comments
Courtney Legrand
this is annoying at this point and it does seem like someone either did a bad translation or they stole the story because it's out of order and keeps skipping parts or just has missing parts
11/13/2023 19:30Chantel Jauch
r2e9 grammar this bad hints at second language or inadept plagiarism
04/08/2023 22:21Sammy
r2e9 I read through the comments and I'm a bit apprehensive about adding to my library. Many complained about repeated paragraphs, characters name errors and poor grammar. Sometimes this points to plagiarism. Really hope it the author's original work!
04/08/2023 22:12Debra Sykes
r2e9 I am liking this book so far I will save it to my library for later on just need to know what happens
04/08/2023 19:26Bianca Bratu
r2e9 this seems like an interesting story and pulls you in making you want to find out what happens next as soon as possible
04/08/2023 14:36Lindsay Ameel
r2e9 love it
04/08/2023 09:41pinkturtle
r2e9 definitely has a stronger male written voice.
04/08/2023 04:50Kat Waters
r2e9 looking good so far it sounds like it will be an interesting book to get into hopefully it all works out for her or them A
04/08/2023 02:51Joele G
r2e9 off in a great start in the intro; interesting story line; capture my attention in a bit.
04/08/2023 02:39Liliana
r2e9 Looking forward to this book. I am always interested at how humans react in this scenario. I think it shapes the book.
04/08/2023 01:58Sable Beale
r2e9 looks like a great book reading now!
04/08/2023 00:15Rebekah Bechard Wojahn
I’m only on 68 and I’m really tired of this “I’m not worthy…woah is me” self-martyr thing happening with Fiona. Feedback from readers…does it get better or change soon? otherwise I’m done 🤷🏻♀️
01/08/2023 21:48Reader-453194
are there going to be any more chapters
10/30/2022 20:39Carrie Pearsall
And the chapters there are two 96 and two 98 and three 99 what's up with that
08/25/2022 06:20Carrie Pearsall
yeah I keep getting confused when you change the characters names from Fiona to Rochelle to Rocky
08/25/2022 06:18Jennifer May
where is chapters 100-103 it jumps from 99 to 104 and get lost in story because of this jump in chapters
08/25/2022 03:35Debra A Jackson
When are going to update?
07/10/2022 14:26Cathy Martin
yes from what I have read so far, it indeed jumps through out the whole book. im only close to chapter 30. i am so confused.
06/24/2022 22:46Samantha Rickards
you have 2 chapter 69 repeated no chapter 71 is missing between chapter 70 and 72 please get this fixed or loose your readers/fans
06/16/2022 22:29Nicole Schwartz
Idea of story is good. Story needs a lot of editing. wrong names appear throughout. duplicate chapters throughout. Then after kidnapping there huge timeliness gap with missing information...story Def needs a lot of work.
05/31/2022 05:45Carrie Pearsall
I can tell you really get into your writing . But you need to keep your caricature straight cuz it gets real confusing
04/25/2022 23:21Carrie Pearsall
you keep going back and forth between Blake and Marcus as Fiona's mate makes it really confusing
04/22/2022 01:46Dark Reader
good story, but chapters and names are all over the place.
04/17/2022 23:43Reader-198787
Last 2 chapters have parts repeated and is not part of this book
04/11/2022 01:51Dark Reader
good start... chapter 10 is a different book though! please fix it.
04/10/2022 18:57Reader-148264
good story so far looking forward to reading 🙌🙌♥️
04/08/2022 23:56Alicia Vertrees
great story so far ❤️
04/08/2022 19:00