The Wallflower & The Alpha's Comments

  • Martial Flor

    8s5r it's an interesting idea because of the Veela thingy, but I'm not really into the whole alpha = school bully thing (or in general school things too much - not the age group of reference 😂) also, the story could use some proof reading

    05/14/2023 08:20

  • Tricia Freligh

    8s5r the intro has a lot of potential just a little editing to make it flow better but it does sound interesting

    05/14/2023 08:00

  • Reader-431917

    8s5r this introduction sounds very interesting, it may need a bit if editing though. but the story like sounds very good, I will read a few chapters and see if I like it 😊

    05/14/2023 04:36

  • Kash Kash

    8s5r The girl is a hybrid and was always bullied from the people in her school. There are four handsome males that bully her but overtime the goddess bless them as her mates. It's a journey how the men will win the heart of their mate.

    05/14/2023 04:13

  • Ashley

    8s5r The introduction needs editing but it's an interesting storyline. I've never heard of a Veela before so I'm curious as to what kind of creature that turns out to be.

    05/14/2023 03:30

  • Lori Holden

    8s5r this book sounds very interesting. I don't what she received at 19, have never heard that before.

    05/14/2023 03:16

  • Doobies

    8s5r - Premise is ok but story is kinda confusing. Seems like it could use a proofreader or something.

    05/14/2023 01:36

  • Irma Beck

    8s5r a little confusing at times and the sentence structure and grammar make it a little difficult to follow the story. otherwise it's a good story so far

    05/14/2023 01:35

  • MechEMa

    8s5r. honestly I’m a little confused. I don’t know what a Gemini is in this story abba it jumps around the timeline and the point of view often. maybe it is more clear the further in you read

    05/14/2023 00:31

  • Karooke

    8s5r naja wenn ich schon höre, dass es mehr als einen Gefährten gibt, dann interessiert es mich nicht mehr

    05/13/2023 22:08

  • Jan T

    8s5r #8s5r there are three books with the same title and from 3 authors with the same name so this is a bit confusing

    05/13/2023 20:14

  • Caitlin Sullivan

    8s5r... well this appears to be a somewhat standard theme. former bully to mate and the bullied is expected to forgive

    05/13/2023 19:08

  • yes sir

    8s5r poor girl but it's interesting to read and I enjoyed the few chapters I read

    05/13/2023 18:24

  • Aisha Ali

    8s5r damn that's heartbreaking to know that they hid that and bullied her for years will read this soon

    05/13/2023 18:15

  • Janaki Kollepalli

    8s5r... to know that she has four mates and those too her bullies... poor girl... how will she cope up...

    05/13/2023 17:29

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    8s5r This story is not for me. It is very slow paced and the English used is not quite right.

    05/13/2023 16:24

  • Amal Samir

    8s5r, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. I hope Avery got her happy ending

    05/13/2023 14:15

  • John Robinson

    8s5r Poor Avery, reading the beginning of this story the main female character is bullied and then finds out she has four mates, hoping for her happily ever after.

    05/13/2023 12:19

  • Vicki usher

    8s5r#This sounds like such an interesting and intriguing story after just reading the introduction. It seems to have a bit of everything in it and has definitely peaked my interest.

    05/13/2023 12:15

  • Lorrie Lee Losoya

    i can't wait to read this book. it sounds so interesting ND one i will love.

    04/10/2022 00:50