Mafia King Innocent Luna Comments

  • Stacy Miller

    so this needs to be edited and proofread before publishing, very hard to read

    07/04/2024 06:07

  • puppy

    d4f7 not really my kind of story. what makes me think is it's always the females that get abused. maybe one day the switch can happen.

    04/19/2023 23:03

  • Reader-472492

    d4f7 not my kind of story. the way the introduction was laid out didn’t grab my attention

    04/19/2023 21:01

  • Mirela

    d4f7 - The introduction seems to be ok. I am thou curious, what happens when they meet. Will the darkness conquer the light, or will the light subside the darkness.

    04/19/2023 18:20

  • Marvin Vanderkust

    d4f7 always intrigued with women characters that are virgins. This one is a must read for me.

    04/19/2023 16:02

  • Amal Samir

    D4f7, I don't know the intro has a lot of violence in it. However it intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen to her

    04/19/2023 12:51

  • aly

    d4f7 im scared to start reading this book🤦 because of the introduction..but i like the story like only the rudeness of it im not sure i can manage but i will try for sure to read it

    04/19/2023 10:11

  • Joele G

    d4f7 intriguing storyline caught my attention from the start; just wondering if this book is still ongoing or is it completed.

    04/19/2023 07:00

  • Leila ElMayel

    d4f7 i hope the female character won't be a hopeless helpless weak person we need creativity

    04/19/2023 03:51

  • Leila ElMayel

    d4f7 i am a fun of mafia world but still don't like the amount of violence in those books

    04/19/2023 03:48

  • Leila ElMayel

    d4f7 let's see if it worth reading generally those kind of books are very surreal 😏

    04/19/2023 03:47

  • T Malloy

    d4f7 I like the intro hopefully I will say in it the comments got me worried though

    04/19/2023 03:38

  • Kassie

    I like it could use some editing but I will keep reading!

    01/02/2023 05:12

  • T C

    when you have words inside "double quotation marks" it means they are talking to a person 'single quotations ' means it is a thought. maybe read a book and comprehend how they write the story. this is disjointed and abrupt. so far what I've is a good plot you just have to get better at the way you tell it

    05/05/2022 22:39