SUBMIT TO THE ALPHA KING Comments

  • Nadya Garay-Thompson

    I loved the introduction of a female character, who was strong enough to stand for herself, despite of being told that she is nobody. Please complete the story.

    09/23/2024 14:02

  • Mical Perez

    If the "Lucifer " Alpha is so strong so why he have the smallest pack? no makes sense

    05/08/2024 11:28

  • Mical Perez

    They need to fix the grammer,no only that,the names of Lucifer and Demoni,is like Demonic,i think that's is no names for a werewolf,i think is ridiculous names

    05/08/2024 11:25

  • Mical Perez

    Lord Lucifer??? lol why the author have to put that name for a werewolf haha

    05/08/2024 11:16

  • Jessica Cobb

    you should go back and read your story and edit it. you repeat statements and the grammer needs work.

    10/14/2023 04:58

  • Rebecca Fairburn

    This book repeats itself many times

    09/05/2023 05:16

  • Avd

    x1c5 This is a really exciting book! The story is very intriguing and hot! I am really in love with it

    09/05/2023 04:15

  • Irma Beck

    x1c5 it seems like a good story so far. interested to see how the story unfolds. definitely added to my list of library to read books

    09/05/2023 01:33

  • Me Myself

    x1c5 it is a well written story so far. I am intrigued and will keep reading it

    09/05/2023 00:48

  • ranger023

    x1c5 something tells me this girl will be no ordinary omega. I like the scene had a little medevil feel to it

    09/05/2023 00:42

  • Marvin Vanderkust

    x1c5 I have added this book in my library because I don't like to start reading stories and await eternity before it's finished.

    09/05/2023 00:42

  • Reader-072710

    x1c5 well written

    09/05/2023 00:39

  • x1c5 based on the intro and comments, it looks like it's worth a read. Adding it to my "to-read" list.

    09/05/2023 00:24

  • Bianca Bratu

    x1c5 this story makes you love it from the beggining. I am really intrigued to find out how the story plays out.

    09/05/2023 00:23

  • Diana

    x1c5 so far I like it. It's funny how the alpha can't take his own medicine.

    09/05/2023 00:23

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    x1c5 This is a another story that requires serious editing. I get a headache trying to figure out what the author is trying to say.

    09/05/2023 00:10

  • Sumriti Singh

    x1c5 i like the writers not that this story is not about your typical werewolf so yup i will surely give it a go bcoz i like an edge to the story

    09/05/2023 00:04

  • Megan Phillips

    x1c5 this story is rather intriguing. I am hoping they both give each other a chance to see where the relationship could go.

    09/05/2023 00:03

  • Jenna Mc Augustine

    x1c5 with a cover like that this book should be exciting. she is in need of some friends

    09/04/2023 23:50

  • Gemma Butler

    x1c5 I enjoy the sound of this book. I’ve added it to my library to read when it’s complete

    09/04/2023 23:44

  • Kat Waters

    x1c5 been awhile and no updates why do I bother 2 read any more I hope she finds a second chance mate

    09/04/2023 23:43

  • Nadia Ogle

    x1c5 interesting so far chapters are short. She has guts and courage it seems. Can't wait to read further on how she defies him more.

    09/04/2023 23:38

  • x1c5 #x1c5 it's quite entertaining to see Lucifer's rejection got interrupted. very interesting introduction. I like how the author states what the story isn't about.

    09/04/2023 23:31

  • Joele G

    x1c5 very interesting from the start; intrigue how the story comes together; will be adding to the library

    09/04/2023 23:10

  • Kerry Graham

    X1c5 the book sounds Interesting so far and I cannot wait to see how the story evolves

    09/04/2023 23:08

  • Merle Langevoord

    x1c5 enjoyed reading the first few chapters. really looking forward to how the story will continue

    09/04/2023 23:01

  • Reader-731248

    x1c5 the introduction doesn’t give much away, but it still peeked my interest…

    09/04/2023 23:00

  • Vicki usher

    x1c5# so of course I added this book to my library anyone would after reading the introduction, the only reason I haven't started it is because I need to now when it will be finished I have no patience and don't want to forget about the if its taking to long to finish

    09/04/2023 22:53

  • Sam Davies

    please update

    09/04/2023 21:01

  • Mercy Uwaifo

    I wonder how they were able to dress her up with ease when her hands were tied up 🤔🤔

    09/04/2023 18:41

  • Reader-229738

    please update soon I’m soo loving this book 🥰

    09/04/2023 18:13

  • Leta Beard

    wish it was all unlocked

    09/04/2023 17:41

  • Kateřina Šimerdová

    i like this story 😊 cant wait for unlock next chapters 😉

    09/04/2023 16:24

  • is she really ugly?I'm confused,he called her innocent cute perfect under the ugliness. is there more chapters coming?

    09/04/2023 16:16

  • Hanna

    I honestly love this book. third time reading it while waiting for updates….

    09/04/2023 15:32

  • it’s a fine story and I can get past the editing mistakes but I don’t understand going from ugliest to beautiful back and forth

    09/04/2023 15:24

  • Big Bugjo

    nice so good please update

    09/04/2023 15:14

  • Dee dee

    Why is all the chapters locked all of a sudden

    09/04/2023 15:00

  • I really really really like this book. So please keep writing on this story.

    09/04/2023 14:34

  • Theresa Albany

    awesome please update

    09/04/2023 14:16

  • is the story updated regularly?

    09/04/2023 14:07

  • Aisha Razi

    soo good!!! Pls update soon!!!

    09/04/2023 13:24