My Sex Student Comments

Simone Oliveira

I completely agree! I was reading it in Portuguese, and it was exactly as you described. I switched to English to see if it would improve, but it's the same. 🤬. Not to mention that the narrative is confusing, rushed, and poorly written! The story had so much potential, what a shame!

Is this an auto translation? Because that’s how it reads…just awful! I say this because there are still phrases in another language that have not been translated yet in this novel. The pronouns are all messed up and half the time instead of a pronoun the noun ‘it” is used. Also, the sentence structure and English translated meanings do not make sense. This author is in desperate need of an English language editor. But the story is complete, if you can manage to make it through to the end, and it’s not bad.