The Alpha's Unwanted Mate Comments
Rosswife
can she reject him yet
08/01/2023 23:35KD5643
#bringeread
07/30/2023 23:52Bridget Geraghty
chapters are so short
07/30/2023 21:37Alessia Andrea Salvalajo
I never get angry reading something, but damn I was angry during the first couple of chapters! that girl Celeste deserves much better! I really hope she turn into a baddass during the story #bingeread
07/26/2023 16:27Estrella Snijder
#winbonus
07/25/2023 12:40Marie
Am I the only one who doesn’t know what knotting means?!
06/15/2023 09:43Sammie Panda
#6j7k# I loved this entire book! I loved the many storyline within it and how it twists along the way. Celeste was such a great female lead character in this- I love her!
04/01/2023 09:14Salma Ajaib
6j7k - I usually only like reading books once they are complete as I hate waiting for new chapters, but the first few chapters have me hooked so this has definitely been added to my library!
04/01/2023 01:58Julie Schmitt
6j7k The first two chapters sucked me in. Damn how is it twin sisters are not close, I sure hope the nasty one gets what she deserves.
03/31/2023 15:47Bianca Yetzke
6j7k the beginning looks interesting. I really hope the story turns around and she gets what she wants.
03/31/2023 12:38nakisha adams
6j7k. from the very beginning of this book i was crying how can they be soo crude to her she is so sweet and caring I wanted to reach in the damn book and slap them all.love Celeste though she is super strong
03/31/2023 12:12Ashley Lucabaugh
6j7k When I first started reading the snippet I wasn't too interested until the last line. That grabbed my attention and I've added it to my library.
03/31/2023 11:26
Kitty-694016
6j7k. I haven’t gotten very far but I hope Celeste gets what she should have. I always felt overshadowed by my younger sister. Having your mate want someone else is heartbreaking
03/31/2023 09:01Irma Beck
6j7k life terms to be unfair to some but to be blatantly mean is not nice. hope this book gets better
03/31/2023 09:00John Robinson
6j7k Already sympathise with Celeste, sign of a well written character, hopefully she will get her happily ever after.
03/31/2023 08:24Martial Flor
6j7k this is the sort of heart breaking situation you really struggle to power through even as a reader. a rejection from a love interest hurts, from a mate it breaks your heart - but even from your family? that's just soul shattering
03/31/2023 08:22zira
6j7k ithurt to feel not needed and feeling less by someone means too much but what's important is how to be strong at the end...
03/31/2023 08:21Emily
6j7k rejection is absolutely crushing but to see your mate pinning for your twin sister has a harder sting to it
03/31/2023 08:19Louise Sranan
6j7k This story is a beautiful one I had read awhile ago. I will recommend for other readers as well
03/31/2023 08:18Jachdiel Van der kust
6j7k sad to see when people are strongeling to get attention from a lover. and the lover is blind to see that too
03/31/2023 08:16Awurabena Afriyie Asare
#6j7k# to be rejected is hurtful but to be rejected and not wanted by your mate is really more stinging and bashful than expected especially in this story where one is liked over by no other than a sister.
03/31/2023 08:14Marvin Vanderkust
6j7k love this story very much. as a reader I did enjoy the work of this author. lol 😄
03/31/2023 08:07Vicki usher
6j7k# I found this book and because for the reviews had a look, was worth it. Nice to see the weak becoming strong.
03/31/2023 08:06Lacy-ladybug Thomas
love your story I have it on 2 different apps. I know times are crazy around the holidays but I really do hope you finish the story.
12/31/2022 04:47
Jennifer Stevens
when will the book be updated? love the story!
12/31/2022 03:58Mary Hall
I love this book and can't wait to finish this reading journey 💯💯💯❤️❤️❤️
12/18/2022 01:32Mary Pownell-Styer
I guess I won’t continue reading because it looks like the book hasn’t updated in a while.
12/08/2022 22:30Amanda Moorefield
it's December, and as a writer myself I would say that even if the comments are dragging, use them to better yourself, I just finished the last chapter you wrote and ever since you took out the notes from yourself the flow has been pleasant and consistent, please continue this story. I'd like to see how it ends.
11/17/2022 02:41Christine Grijalva
I am glad she said what she said. I hope she stays strong. I think she should not do the dishes she didn’t do the mess.
11/16/2022 16:11
Bonib2
The storyline is good but the inane commentary every single darn chapters is putting me off from liking it.
11/11/2022 10:37
Reader-339300
thank you for continuing with the story.
11/08/2022 14:57Jeannetta Kirksey
not Xavier but Liam is with them
11/07/2022 12:07Sini Cnair
good story
10/31/2022 06:32Lee-Ann Cameron
loving this book where can we get the rest of your chapters?????
10/28/2022 08:30Ingri Tejada
sorry you feel bad about the comments , but not let this b@#$@ wow, is a book not real 💯💯✍️✍️✍️🦸♀️🦸♀️
10/28/2022 06:11Reader-967725
please write better your characters are idiots and I’m more an idiot wasting my money reading your book
10/26/2022 08:16Reader-967725
celeste is stupid
10/26/2022 08:12Reader-967725
is the story going to get better? is she going to be such a loser forever?
10/26/2022 08:02Debra Heston
"get rid of my repetition " Do you know what repetition IS? How about 'repeat' ? gah.
10/24/2022 22:09Debra Heston
That expression is reversed and does not make sense as written. It should be more like : She doesn't act like even a distant relative, much less as a sister. Perhaps you could try a variation on words that seem so over familiar that they grow tired and worn. How about this: Family is supposed to look out for each other, but she had only looked out for herself. Bad enough that she ignored the well being of others she ought to be protective of, she had shown herself willing to hurt her own sister if she stood to gain from it... even something trivial and petty. This describes the character more explicitly. It is also foreshadowing of something that may be explained later in the story. It becomes a hook to draw the reader in a little wondering what happened. When will it be revealed and how may it tie into future events? 🤔 Needs work. I may try another page or two before I give up, but it doesn't seem promising.
10/24/2022 22:02
Yolanda D. Glasgow
Your characterization of this character is pathetic. I just can’t keep reading it! 😞
10/16/2022 20:14Mary Hall
I can't with her and Xavier Sheila Xavier and her sister Celia play her I can't do this this book sucks now
10/12/2022 23:11Mary Hall
can I just kill Celeste for being stupid
10/12/2022 23:02Shannon Brown
Why is the daughter of a Beta an Omega help me to make it make sense?
10/06/2022 20:48Andrea Smith
I wish there was a way for her to reject him and break the mate bond, then he will find out that her sister is only good for one thing.
10/04/2022 20:51wolfygirl19
when r new chapters being posting
10/02/2022 00:54
Tony zhang
good
09/20/2022 03:27Tony zhang
o
09/19/2022 12:38Tony zhang
good
09/19/2022 12:37Rita M Reynolds
I like the book but what don’t like is when you use a chapter saying the same thing again!
09/09/2022 05:24Reader-589828
I thought she was the little girl. Now she just needs to tell him that too. Celine you better brace yourself.
08/30/2022 03:57wikkedgoddess1
hmm this book isn’t complete? well hell
08/30/2022 00:32shaireen
next update?
08/24/2022 16:28
Lucy
how often are the updates? loving this book
08/20/2022 07:57
Sandi Krajeski
I am so sad for Celeste. I want to cry as my heart breaks for her.
08/16/2022 01:13Theresa Calhoun
I like to read this book but you making it hard keep.cutting it short and asking question and repeating same things over and over
08/15/2022 15:27Catherine Johnson
she needs to reject him.
08/12/2022 20:30Amanda Moorefield
the author notes seem as if you're just trying to fill I'm the required minimum word limit per chapter. it makes the book appear unprofessional.
08/08/2022 23:37Mary Hall
I feel bad for Celeste, she is getting treated so wrong and for what
08/03/2022 01:03Louise Welsh
This book needs work and chapters are too short. Zillon hasn't even spoken to the twin yet and you have them sleep together. I think you need re-write this book because alot is being repeated and not being mentioned. I do like the story line. It'll be better if you put an effort to it
07/03/2022 13:34Amanda Jackson
why did it have to stop there come on maybe I should wait until the entire book is done before I try to read it so far it's good
06/25/2022 12:55BARBARA ANN TWOMEY
hard to know weather it's going to be gd or not rite now I'm more pissed that I'm waiting for updates sorry
06/20/2022 05:00
