Ace Shelton fooled Unice Venixe when she noticed that he was selling a house on social media. Despite having experienced hardship as a child, Ace did not expect Unice to change his entire life. The Heils Family, a relative of the Shelton Family, murdered his parents.

He met Unice Venixe and resided in his mansion's basement. He tricked her; she was first afraid of him because Ace said he was a killer. After all, Ace had no idea this was the girl who had taken his bait on social media. Everything changed when she trusted him after being at his house for a few months because she didn't have a place to stay, and the thing that changed Ace was to love her. He fallen for her and was obsessed with her; he don't want anyone to like her; He want Unice to be his lover, and he didn't expect her to fall for him as well, and this is where his story changes.

Dirty Little Secret

The story has potential. I like the storyline, but the writing could use some work as I found the quick turns in the beginning a little confusing.
The erotic scenarios could use a little more emotion and a little less manual feel of them.
But a good start.

Dripping Creativity

Hi there writer. so, I have been mulling over this for a few weeks now but I feel that in order to help you, I need to say this. Please edit your book. just in the first chapter there are so many inconsistencies. Also some of the things that happen just don't make sense. There is no emotion. it's like reading a list or a user manual. The storyline is over complicated and again, doesn't make sense. You clearly want this to be a success but, that isn't going to happen with your book in its current state. Instead of posting on loads of apps and making next to nothing on all of them, try focusing on proof-reading the chapters and doing some considerable editing. 

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