The Alpha’s Desire Comments

  • Lori Overby

    I wish I had read this first. It is October and book isn't finished still 😩😩😩

    10/10/2023 21:28

  • Lori Overby

    Where are these people getting submarines?

    10/09/2023 15:11

  • Reader-475646

    the story has potential but dear lord get a proof reader. I tried to get invested because I saw that it could be very fun but I just couldn't because there are so many mistakes. Grammatical ones as well as using the wrong words altogether. English isn't my first language so I'm not trying to judge someone's English skills by any means. But make up for it by hiring a proof reader. you're trying to make money out of this so you should be ready to invest some as well..... I hope I will stumble across your stories later in my life again when maybe you did evolve in that regard

    06/23/2023 05:58

  • Jules Marie

    o9p5 The blurb makes it look interesting. I find it hard to start books that aren't finished. I may give it a shot afterwards.

    04/10/2023 02:07

  • KayCee Kai Malanos

    o9p5 i totally agree with yhe first chapter title.. bad things really do happen to good people and i wonder why..

    04/09/2023 18:39

  • nasnas

    o9p5 it seems like and interesting story but it's not yet complete. I will consider reading it once it's complete

    04/09/2023 17:07

  • Merle Langevoord

    o9p5 interesting story so far. want to keep reading it

    04/09/2023 13:57

  • Jan T

    o9p5 #o9p5 I'm going to wait for the book to be completed before I start reading so I can binge read. the storyline is interesting. good introduction

    04/09/2023 13:35

  • Reader-731248

    o9p5 interesting story

    04/09/2023 12:35

  • Jody Purple

    o9p5 I like the storyline, but it does need some editing, some parts could use more detail and could connect better emotionally but I like the story

    04/09/2023 02:06

  • Joele G

    o9p5 off to a good start; I really want to know how things turn out for her

    04/09/2023 01:53

  • Vicki usher

    o9p5# I can tell this story will have me on the edge on my seat, so better sit back and enjoy the ride.

    04/09/2023 00:17

  • Rachel Anne Patterson

    it can’t finish here I’m desperate to know the next part

    04/04/2023 16:12

  • Laura Vickers

    it reads like a child wrote it and it’s stupid

    03/11/2023 02:56

  • Vilma Carpin Buhawe

    the phrase used to inform her about her parents being dead is odd... ""i will likely to inform you that your parents dead bodies"

    01/16/2023 00:01

  • agnes

    great storyline!!!!

    11/25/2022 07:28

  • CiCiSwitch89

    are you continuing the story?

    10/24/2022 06:06

  • Margaret Sliva

    Xavron may end up loosing Ophelia IF he isn't careful.

    10/19/2022 07:03

  • Author

    good story, kept me on edge. writer please update

    09/30/2022 09:33

  • Mad reader

    Good story, when are you updating next?

    09/24/2022 06:41

  • beautypete

    so far, it’s interesting

    08/09/2022 23:46