The CEO's Secret Wife Comments
Ana Rita Rocha
yes the story looks good but the righting is the worst i couldn't read anymore because i couldn't understand it foul
06/14/2023 00:05Strawberry 🍓 Plum
Hi author your storyline appears really interesting but the only downside is the English.. the sentence structure is really off and in order to understand what the dialogue is, it’s difficult to assume as a reader, if possible get an editor to help edit and fix the sentences even if your story is already completed. I believe your story will be read far and wide but in order for that to happen you’ll need to fix these little errors as they refrain readers from reading your story.. I really want to be able to read your work but I’m having a difficulty. love your reader❤️
03/25/2023 15:24