Hot Erotic Sex Stories Comments
Awurabena Afriyie Asare
g9jo. the book is so interesting and lit. I really love the erotica in these stories. am looking forward to reading more of these stories.
04/22/2023 23:33Karooke
g9j0 der Buch Titel hört sich ja vielversprechend an... Die Kommentare der anderen sind aber nicht so gut.. Ich werde mal ein paar Kapitel lesen
04/22/2023 20:47Martial Flor
g9j0 I really tried to read this (because the synopsis was convincing enough) but I could even go past the first chapter - one thing is "this text needs some proofreading" and another is this: it's just impossible to read - it needs a serious round of editing before the proofreading. please consider doing it because the synopsis seemed promising
04/22/2023 19:02Irma Beck
g9jo having difficulty to read the first story no disrespect to the author but the grammar errors are just a bit much.
04/22/2023 16:36icuovrthere
g9j0 I wish there was a bit more editing with grammar. I'm not sure if it was translated or what, but some descriptions are hard to understand
04/22/2023 01:43Captain Obvious
Impossible to read with the amount of grammar errors in just the first chapter. Couldn't get past it at all.
03/18/2023 14:44Andrea Williams
definitely needs a lot of proofing. can't even keep reading
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