His Rejected Luna Comments

  • Rikkia Renee

    I’m confused he marked her the completed the mate bond but she hasn’t marked him. is there a paragraph or a few chapters missing?

    06/30/2023 13:08

  • Reader-818529

    what’s up with the chapter difference

    04/25/2023 00:18

  • Sammy

    y6u9 Book has a good start and looking forward to completing this story. I've added to my library.

    04/15/2023 23:38

  • KayCee Kai Malanos

    y6u9 by the plot the book seems like a good read .. waiting for the book to be complete..

    04/15/2023 19:45

  • Reader-050352

    y6u9 it starts out interesting but it all happens very quickly. I think the beginning could be developed a little more to connect to the characters more.

    04/15/2023 16:08

  • Nadia Ogle

    Y6u9 Sofia showed then she is not the weak person they think her to be. Also the persoon she finds is much better suited for her then Terry.

    04/15/2023 14:25

  • Reader-778832

    y6u9. so far so good. not crying her eyes out but definitely a mystery in her background and his as well. who’s the other woman?

    04/15/2023 13:35

  • Me Myself

    y6u9 this seems like a good read. I hope this book is completed to the end so we do not have to wait for updates.

    04/15/2023 12:20

  • Vicki usher

    y6u9# I read a lot of rejection books a really enjoy them, but I haven't read this book yet glad I found it and added it to my library

    04/15/2023 07:06

  • John Robinson

    This looks like an interesting story, I am slightly confused as it goes from chapter 37 to 70, maybe it's just an error. I am liking what I've read so far though.

    04/15/2023 06:57

  • Debra Sykes

    y6u9 I can't wait to start this book just the intro has me interested hope there ain't to many mistakes in grammar

    04/15/2023 05:49

  • aly

    y6u9 rejection is my favorite in books specially if there's redemption and regrets to follow. i like how my emotions are on verge when im reading such books

    04/15/2023 05:19

  • Monique Swanepoel

    y6u9 story looks very nice

    04/15/2023 05:11

  • Tricia Freligh

    y6u9 - I am liking the story so far. there are some vocabulary issues but you can still figure it out.

    04/15/2023 04:44

  • Leila ElMayel

    Y6u9 what do you think you are doing why did you break the original story for another one i am really disappointed 😥

    04/15/2023 03:37

  • Courtney Christensen

    y6u9 "ridiculous, utterly ridiculous" -Chloe bourgeois, from miraculous ladybug

    04/15/2023 02:19

  • Oni Blah

    y6u9 i hope it’s changed with all the reviews. there weren’t too many errors but I don’t think I’ll be using my money on it

    04/15/2023 01:37

  • Loretta Lewis

    when do you plan on getting back to the original book because this is ridiculous

    10/01/2022 13:15

  • Peggy Pender

    very upset. the break with another story in the middle. i am not even enjoying the interrupting story. fortunately I only opened 10 chapters but that is still my money wasted. I will not continue reading. chapters 40 thru 69 are not of the original story.

    09/30/2022 02:21

  • Sabeeta Naraine

    writer needs to let us know what’s happening- not fair

    09/24/2022 21:36

  • Magsi Rawlings

    really confusing

    09/24/2022 20:23

  • Fauna Green

    I can't be the only one reading this book,it's a must try https://m.anystories.app/stories/62d180ddf9112c0012a79f49/zena-the-slave-lost-alpha?utm_source=af_app_invites&inviter_id=628bc1060632fa001209aa39&inviter_af_id=1657922072366-3674972236180973326

    09/21/2022 17:53

  • Joy Kelly

    why does it change to a completely different book?

    09/19/2022 22:53

  • Sandra White

    So glad I read the reviews first! this story is a hard pass for me

    09/19/2022 04:55

  • Michelle Fairbanks-goodsky

    thank you all! I was gonna read it but with these reviews I’ll pass!! is it even finished?

    09/18/2022 22:14

  • Kirsty Mccutcheon

    this book seriously needs editing, so many mistakes and duplicate sentences and I only got to chapter 7, can’t make sense if it anymore

    09/17/2022 22:43

  • L. Steele

    From chapter 39 to 69 it is a completely different story. Just be aware if you choose to read this book.

    09/12/2022 03:21

  • L. Steele

    What happened after chapter 40? All the characters names changed and it appears to be an entirely different story from the first 40 chapters.

    09/12/2022 03:12