"I tried to scream but I couldn't, everything happened so fast and they treated me like a toy." Leslie said hugging her legs.

            "And can I ask what you were wearing that may have provoked them." the officer asked with a nasty look on his face.

             "I-I uhh.. " I looked towards Mom.

           "Did they touch you here." the officer said grabbing my mid thighs. "Did they grabbed you like this." the officer smirked while he caressed my back sending chills down my spine.

            "Enough of this." My mom said as she held me in her arms seeing me getting panicked.

            "Look, Mrs. Smith, I know things like this happens but we can't say it was their fault at all your daughter invited them by wearing those short clothes and was also drunk so these types of things happens when you are young." the officer said calmly like it was nothing.

            "I was raped officer and you're saying it's nothing." Leslie screamed half sobbing.

      Yes she was raped by the guy whom she trusted the most in the world. He tossed her to his friends like a toy and let them rape her until something happened, something that will change their life forever!

Falling For The Villain 

It’s an interesting plot but isn’t executed well. It’s a little hard to follow and names and pronouns are often mixed up/incorrect throughout chapters. I think with some editing it would be really good :)

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