The Devil Comments
Amy Nimtz
I am having such a hard time reading this! All these "s instead of actual quotation marks, it's all very distracting. The story line isn't horrible, but you can tell the author isn't very experienced and lacks details needed for certain scenarios.
10/31/2023 02:55Carolyne Zawojski (Carol)
doesn't anyone proofread these stories. It's so distracting all these (and quotes ) it's breaking up the flow of the story
09/05/2023 00:37
