Substitute Bride,Substitute Love Comments
Shirley Appleton
I like the story but it's entirely to much of back to back violence and abuse on this one woman and there has to be an something wrong with Patrick please stop jerking us around and tell us what is going on with him and Caroline
09/05/2023 00:15L H
Not to great. Storywise, it doesnt make a lot of sence. I do think the concept can be very cool.
09/04/2023 21:52kagura_06@yahoo.com
needs a lot of work why return to your rapist? the dialogue needs so much help. I hope you find an editor.
09/04/2023 21:13Shelly Mahajan
nice
09/04/2023 19:46Bebie Mondijar
nice
09/04/2023 19:04
