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  • Christine Wybo

    yeah just wanting to know when so many people became so perfect with their writing skills just read the story do not worry about where a stupid apostrophe goes or grammar pacing

    09/10/2023 23:50

  • DeniseC

    #bingeread Definitely enjoying it so far. I like the concept of the story, and the buildup between characters is enjoyable. It’s got some issues with grammar, pacing, and character development, but I’m still enjoying the journey so far.

    07/27/2023 23:18

  • Denise Corey

    can the apostrophe be removed from the title?? it's incorrect....

    07/18/2023 14:27

  • Helen DeVore-Hill

    #bookmegasale This is the kind of book that I like to read. Just from reading the introduction you can tell that it is going to be an interesting book. Two alphas purchasing a single "slave" that is their mate. You can tell that there is going to be trouble somewhere along the way.

    06/25/2023 17:22

  • John Robinson

    #bookmegasale I like this story very much. The writing style of the author makes it very easy to read and the beginning isn't too drawn out. It says it's complete so no waiting for updates which I like, will definitely be reading more.

    06/25/2023 09:47

  • Marie Gilkey

    decent book starting here. keep up with new chapters.

    06/05/2023 08:46

  • Lile Goderdzishvili

    characters are dumb af and everything is too predictable come on. writing isn't even edited go look for better stories to read

    05/27/2023 05:35

  • karen durfee

    when is there going to be more chapters

    05/03/2023 19:38

  • Ade Nanette

    Thé characters are shallow, they seem dumb. The writing is not edited, go look for better stories…

    05/01/2023 13:28

  • yes sir

    s7e2 I read this book long time ago I like it but the dramatic change is to much

    04/24/2023 18:52

  • Diane Talbot

    rather juvenile so far. Pair of hypocrites for Alphas, poorly edited.

    04/24/2023 08:48

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    s7e2 Sounds a bit too juvenile for me. This story is not as badly written as other stories, but would greatly improve with good editing.

    04/01/2023 06:10

  • Mirela

    #s7e2 I really like the love story between the human girl and the alpha twins. Hope they will pass all the chalenges in their life.

    04/01/2023 03:50

  • Linda Strandquist

    #s7e2 love the concept. too bad that she was just about to escape. but hope the twins pull it together and support her as she's needs to be.

    04/01/2023 01:12

  • Reader-529162

    #s7e2# New to this book but based on reading the first chapter, seems like an easily digestible book.

    04/01/2023 00:42

  • Martial Flor

    s7e2 this is a somehow odd Cinderella meets reversed harem meets "alpha's human Mate" sort of situation. haven't read that much yet (and the other comments make me wonder), but hopefully the Alphas will behave ;)

    04/01/2023 00:22

  • Jody Purple

    s7e2 I have been enjoying this story, I agree that the ideas are there and could you a little polishing I have looked forward to continuing each chapter and the character development

    04/01/2023 00:10

  • Rachel Moore

    while the writing isn’t complete the story line is good. however, the inconsistency that happens a lot does need help. I still want to know what the writer envisions with plot maybe she can clarify some of these faults. this book has potential.

    03/24/2023 04:41

  • Bethany Seiley

    Childish. Incomplete ideas and facts that don’t match.

    03/23/2023 02:55

  • Robyn Valdez

    Already, I won't read it because the boys names rhyme. Haven't even started it.

    03/18/2023 03:26

  • Princess Arielle

    I can't read past chapter 8 the skipping around, incomplete sentences... it's more like you gave us the main idea of a book and we should plug in the main pieces.

    03/13/2023 14:24

  • Carol Baker

    Ya know... teenagers use contractions usually. i.e., less "I am" and more "I'm."

    03/13/2023 04:11

  • Thetruealphaof allteenwolfsandwolfbloods

    keep it up

    03/10/2023 14:31

  • Playfulpj

    why is it every time one of these council member come Ariel doesn’t read their minds… it’s just odd that she has this “gift” that she blocks out and never ever uses

    02/20/2023 20:28

  • Playfulpj

    chapter 84 2-20-23

    02/20/2023 11:53

  • Phoenix14

    This story is to fast and not well thought out.

    02/18/2023 02:24

  • Alex

    very immature fast paced written story, lost interest after few chapters

    02/18/2023 02:10

  • Becky Grymes

    please up date your other book too please!!! love both of them.

    02/13/2023 02:23

  • Krisima Eastham O'Neil

    when is more of this story coming enjoying it so far

    01/25/2023 03:38

  • Krisima Eastham O'Neil

    does this author update regularly

    12/21/2022 02:22

  • agnes

    wow. sweet!

    12/20/2022 03:42

  • Robin

    Hold up. So they tell him to teach her a lesson and then punish him for doing their bidding? Nope 👎🏻

    11/06/2022 16:52