King of the Underworld Comments

  • Dana Z

    #50%offread If I didn't need tokens to read he'd be out in one sitting ...too eager to know what's going to happen next☺️

    08/30/2023 06:03

  • Dahlia Wade

    this is great

    08/30/2023 05:37

  • Lindsi R

    so do I now need to buy chapters in the Queen of the Underworld? I know that part of that book was added to this one but not sure where the story continues in it. can someone shed some light for me?

    08/30/2023 05:14

  • Diana

    great

    08/30/2023 04:14

  • Christyna Lewis

    well written & a lot of fun

    08/30/2023 04:13

  • Reader-844384

    #50%offread, I am definitely hooked on this book. I have to stop myself or I'm staying up all night just to read it.

    08/30/2023 03:52

  • Maria Larmour-Ward

    love ths book!

    08/30/2023 01:18

  • Veronica A-J

    I'm really loving this story, but I do have one problem with it. Sephie uses more profanity than all six men put togetber. Call me old fashioned, but I find unnecessary swearing distasteful. When used to enhance your poit it's very effective, but when over used it has no value except to be annoying.

    08/30/2023 01:01

  • Nayeli Rocha

    love this book so far, only chapter 11 and I’m hooked

    08/29/2023 17:45

  • Kaitlyn Apostolos

    hooked 🤩

    08/29/2023 14:13

  • Sheron Rigdon

    I wonder if the bubble is suppose to be like his wings wrapping around her.

    08/29/2023 12:21

  • Pamela Tinch

    enjoying this book

    08/29/2023 10:45

  • amesr09

    #50%offread such a binge worthy book! and the fact you get to follow your favorite characters for more than one book is just such a treat!

    08/29/2023 00:56

  • Elizabeth Blanco

    god i love this guys 🤣🤣🤣

    08/28/2023 21:58

  • Reader-821792

    Really enjoying this 😊

    08/28/2023 20:08

  • FluffyStormE21

    I just love this book, & I love how it’s not overly sexualized. these days they consider a good book having way too many sex scenes., but this has the perfect amount.

    08/28/2023 18:50

  • FluffyStormE21

    I think she should tell them that the smell of her perfume made her flashback to the day of the attack, it might mean something, also they need to check & make sure no one came with her , they didn’t even know she was there either

    08/28/2023 18:42

  • Reader-638651

    will there be a second book so we can see what the final outcome will be? I loved this book so much!

    08/28/2023 16:15

  • Rachal Smith

    i love the book. but it is very repetitive. several chapters in a row repeating the same thing from a different point of view. I think that is needless and a waste of a chapter.

    08/28/2023 15:24

  • Sheron Rigdon

    why is it when they call someone into the office I get the mental picture of an uncomfortable wooden chair in the middle of the room like an interrogation

    08/28/2023 12:40

  • Lesley Mowat

    disappointed how it’s ended without ending

    08/28/2023 10:48

  • Sheron Rigdon

    so am I the only one who was a little disappointed she did not say "it doesn't hurt, just ask Ivan."

    08/28/2023 05:11

  • allison myers

    I feel like we need to keep an eye on tori…😬

    08/28/2023 02:13

  • Susan Doran

    I love this book. I hesitate reading large chapters books because they get repetitive and boring. this book though…your characters include vlad the pancake paradox. loved every bit of it. I hope you post what happens to every one including the other bosses. anyway I hope you keep writing. you are amazing at it. I am going to go re-read this now. there are definitely things I have missed.

    08/28/2023 01:50

  • Cayla

    How do I go about reading the whole book? I am hooked and would love to continue reading!

    08/28/2023 00:27

  • Vivian Chico

    it's driving me a little local, I'm addicted to this story, simply wonderful

    08/27/2023 22:07

  • Nongephi Nyobo

    such an interesting art of work,krrps me glued on the phone

    08/27/2023 15:48

  • Emily Alimaka

    Oh i loved the book!!couldn't help but kept on smiling.Looking forward a new chapter

    08/27/2023 12:45

  • Sheron Rigdon

    I sooooo love her explanations of a pinkie swear.

    08/27/2023 06:00

  • Jodi Corona Rogers

    First, I loved this story. I found myself identifying with Sephie in so many ways and it made me laugh out loud. I also found myself crying a lot, which surprised me because I don’t like non-realistic stories but I could see many parallels in the light and dark in people. I enjoyed how you developed your characters and brought me into their stories and their individual development. They only thing I noticed was a lot of repetitive POVs which made me feel like you were filling in gaps to extend chapters, which I felt were unnecessary with your talent of writing and storytelling. I’m not a writer so I only speak from a readers point of view. You’re clearly talented. The only complaint is using this platform to publish your writing. I spent a ton of money to read this book and if it wasn’t for your story of really pulling me in I would have just dropped it and called it a loss. This platform is clearly meant to get money from readers, but in my opinion only back fires on its self.

    08/27/2023 03:45

  • kmoney

    this book is amazing, I love how she has a connection with all the guys and has little inside jokes #50%offread

    08/27/2023 03:20

  • Robin Wade

    I wasn't sure what to expect when I first started reading this book, but I am so glad I am. I have never laughed or cried so hard, often at the same time, as with this fabulous storyline! Please continue their journey, I will happily follow them along their next lifetime with your beautiful mind sharing their lives. Thank you and never stop writing!!!

    08/26/2023 19:12

  • Morgane Garaud Lassaux

    by the way that book has been amazing for my expectations in life the next guy to come into my life isn't ready hahah I just love that book

    08/26/2023 16:46

  • Morgane Garaud Lassaux

    it says its complete but the book isn't finished we don't have the ending! does anyone know if the author is still working on it and we just need patience or if she doesn't want to finish it...?

    08/26/2023 16:44

  • Reader-414964

    I have only just started reading this, but darn it if I’m not already hooked! Persephone’s humor is just my vibe! love it! #50%offread

    08/26/2023 09:27

  • Dark Phoenix Gamez

    As a sarcastic blue eyed ginger, I'm loving Persephone.

    08/26/2023 05:18

  • Katlynn Smith

    This book has ruined me on how I want a guy to treat me. my expectations are so high because of this book. I enjoy reading it so much, among the best book I ever read.

    08/26/2023 05:12

  • Elizabeth Blanco

    i am dying here cant help it to freaking hilarious 🤣 😂

    08/26/2023 05:07

  • Lavada Gentry

    hello ma'am (Ms author) I don't mean to bother you, and I do apologize if this seems as an inconvenience, however, I was just wanted to know if you do weekly updates or if you was going to do a large dump all at once so to speak. I did see that it was posted that you do updates on Instagram, however I do not have an Instagram account. that is the reason why I am posting here. again I do apologize if there is any inconvenience. I have thoroughly enjoyed the book thus far and can patiently wait on the rest. thank you for what you have posted so far. keep doing you because you are awesome!

    08/26/2023 04:42

  • Rhett

    I have a feeling tori might slide some info to enemy

    08/26/2023 00:14

  • Familia Salgado

    ok, this book has me hook!!! please tell me that there is more to come. I have read 514 chapters, and i am ok with waiting, but please author tell me there is more....I need more!!!... lol... you are giving me an obsecion, I love everthing about this book, I need me a russian entorage! please tell us you are working your magic with more!

    08/25/2023 21:25

  • Mary Ross

    I am so enjoying this story it sucks you in

    08/25/2023 18:56

  • Lexidareader

    I’m enjoying reading this a lot. Everything about this story is wonderful. Amazing writing and intriguing story! Round of applause for the author!

    08/25/2023 15:36

  • Adele Rosencrance

    The flow is WONDERFUL, like all the different characters. The humor is so unexpected that it just makes the story flow even BETTER, GREAT writing!

    08/25/2023 12:18

  • Dian Clark

    it's got all you need for a nice cosy night reading

    08/25/2023 12:16

  • lollipop

    the book is perfect I love the kind of books well written characters are the best

    08/25/2023 02:26

  • Courtney Eagleton

    so what does it mean that you haven’t finished this book??? when I get to the end of the last chapter is there going to be more to buy????? or will we get notices of when you add chapters???? thanks in advance🙏🏿

    08/24/2023 20:07

  • Michelle Thompson

    I'm starting to think that Stephen is a undercover cop...🤔🥺💔

    08/24/2023 19:29

  • mollienxx

    love this book so far, need ability to get subscription as read too quick lol

    08/24/2023 18:43

  • Dena Bloem

    i love this book so much, it is so good it keeps me reading, day and night

    08/24/2023 15:47

  • Terra Hartmann

    love this book

    08/24/2023 15:44

  • Kirsty Tunstall

    loving this book so far

    08/24/2023 11:54

  • Tiffanie “MrsMaverick” Napoli

    Omg I'm so obsessed with this book! I'm lying in bed reading (when I should be sleeping lol) literally lmao trying not to wake up my husband!!!

    08/24/2023 06:13

  • Brianna

    I am in love with this story so far. I have laughed, cried actual tears, felt sympathy for each of the characters. one of the best books I have read in a while

    08/23/2023 23:21

  • Dee Wooden

    I really hope there us a sequel, I would really love to have that final resolution. I love these characters so much, they are dynamic and totally awesome.

    08/23/2023 22:20

  • Samantha Nichole Fletcher

    i want to know the end to it please keep Wright this book love it so much want more about to start rereading it now

    08/23/2023 20:43

  • Hela 24

    I laugh, I cry…… I’m loving this story. thank you RJ Kane ❤️

    08/23/2023 18:40

  • Lynette McGowan

    is there a ending to this story like them getting married ect!

    08/23/2023 09:37

  • Courtney Raschdorf

    beautiful characters!

    08/23/2023 01:39

  • Mandy TheDuchess

    this book has EVERYTHING! I run the gambit of emotions. “crimes against cruciferous vegetables?!” haaaaahhahahaahah!

    08/23/2023 00:01

  • Danielle Pratt-Wagner

    love the book

    08/22/2023 20:42

  • Brianna

    I am absolutely loving this book!! I’m not gonna lie Ivan is my favorite and I was so scared that he was gonna die that I stopped reading it for a day to get myself together!!

    08/22/2023 18:52

  • Anna Latimer

    So far so good

    08/22/2023 16:59

  • Reader-547084

    just wow! I am so in love with these characters and this story. I am in aww with RJ_Kane 🫶🏽❤️

    08/22/2023 12:37

  • Amber Johnson Coomer

    I'm to the end and I feel like Stephen just crushed my soul 🤣 without doubt waiting on the rest of the story ❤️

    08/22/2023 04:45

  • Vanessa Knight

    RJ_Kane is there a second book?

    08/22/2023 04:27

  • Julie Harris

    This is a great story. also the gorgeous man they call Ark is great on the eyes. It's just when you start enjoying a story and it gets to the best part, they're asking for money.

    08/21/2023 17:45

  • Kelly Langford

    good story so far

    08/21/2023 17:17

  • Lazz Lala

    oh this broke my heart.

    08/21/2023 14:34

  • CK118

    DO NOT BUY ADDITIONAL CHAPTERS!! GO TO HER INSTAGRAM RJ_KANE

    08/21/2023 10:23

  • Kelsiee Oakes

    it was such a great book I reread it multiple times. I wish we got to see there wedding or how they all find someone.

    08/21/2023 01:06

  • Hannah Cross

    when will the next part come out ?

    08/21/2023 01:00

  • Reader-206010

    love

    08/20/2023 23:17

  • Darci Flint

    I’m pretty jazzed to see where this goes…..

    08/20/2023 22:45

  • Liza Burch

    I’m loving the story so far. I’m hooked

    08/20/2023 19:32

  • Angel

    Mr. Kane can we please get this in a movie! Netflix will for SURE sign u!

    08/20/2023 18:41

  • Angel

    She’s gomna be a great spy. She was trained well.

    08/20/2023 18:40

  • Kaleigh Banning

    great so far

    08/20/2023 12:26

  • M. “Shed” Daniel

    I am enjoying the start of the story.

    08/20/2023 10:57

  • chantal bernicchi

    So far I can’t get enough, wow amazing work 🥰

    08/20/2023 10:11

  • Reader-597757

    I am loving the storyline and the writing on this one

    08/20/2023 07:00

  • Robin Kight

    Thank you for writing this book. I really enjoy the characters and the style in which you write. I also enjoy the plot twists that you have placed periodically. Just one question, is there a piano in the penthouse?

    08/20/2023 01:52

  • Jamie Shipman Fulk

    It’s really getting good!

    08/20/2023 01:02

  • Ania Walkowiak

    mmm i love it so much

    08/19/2023 23:21

  • DeAnna M

    I am hooked on this book...loving the story line

    08/19/2023 21:09

  • Hannah wilson

    love this so far!

    08/19/2023 20:01

  • RoseMary DeSemple

    This book is really well written and there have been very few mistakes. congratulations!

    08/19/2023 15:31

  • Mars👽🛸✌🏼

    love this so far!

    08/19/2023 15:08

  • Reader-097582

    great start to reel you in wanting more

    08/19/2023 13:18

  • Tonia Cole

    is this book complete.

    08/18/2023 18:02

  • Veronica O'Brien

    I love this story. But I find the chapters are to short.

    08/18/2023 16:57

  • Leanne Martin

    love this story so far !

    08/18/2023 13:37

  • Reader-163262

    Nah I got to the end of this chapter and now I can’t read anymore bc I’m broke 😭😁

    08/18/2023 10:53

  • dawnauselman@hotmail.com

    Absolutely 💜 this story

    08/18/2023 10:11

  • Chris Harris

    nice story line so far

    08/18/2023 06:24

  • Reader-535948

    Seriously getting sucked in!!

    08/18/2023 05:17

  • Courtney Eagleton

    sooooo sweet!

    08/18/2023 00:54

  • Eva McHale Wilson

    Is there a sequel to this book? It seems there are too many loose ends.

    08/17/2023 19:43

  • Jasmine Rachel Brewster

    I don't like how my emotions was just played with 😭

    08/17/2023 17:44

  • Mikayla Terpstra

    i love this book but I can't unlock the rest 😭

    08/17/2023 15:33
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