In love with alpha Comments
Regina Ellis
This appears to be a collection of sample stories thrown together by someone who either doesn’t understand English and doesn’t know what they copied in an attack to steal someone else’s work or just doesn’t care. A lot of it repeats and doesn’t have anything to do with any of the other stories. It is definitely a hot mess.
09/17/2023 13:38Tina Böhmer
Holy fuckin shit....what is this? This doesn't even belong to the story! You totally messed up everything. The story isn't that bad, but stop writing the end of the last chap as beginnibg of the next..and there also is a mess up somewhere at the beginning. Go gins someone to edit it with you and start again!
07/07/2023 06:00Brandy Mulder
Don't start this hot mess, the first few chapters are ok but need editing. the problem is that after that it's a big jumbled mess from what appears to be 4 or 5 other stories
06/29/2023 03:37