My Stay With The Alpha Comments
Reader-090618
interesting story, but really impossible to enjoy it due to a lot of mistakes and unprofessional writing
08/22/2023 20:08John Robinson
#bookmegasale I am really interested in this story from the description and reading the beginning. It draws you into the story and you really feel for the main female character. As it's an ongoing story hope it's regularly updated as I want to know what happens next.
06/25/2023 09:34Elder Nameaka Roney
I’m so glad you added more to the ending. I was so unhappy and disappointed with the ending before.
06/19/2023 10:07tati
i never have enought bonus to unlock good partss goddd 😮💨
06/06/2023 19:10Domunique White
thanks for reading everyone! I have a new book out please add it to your reading list!
05/24/2023 00:15IceQueen
qwer yes yes and I can't stop reading lol I have not left my chair all day
05/23/2023 17:10Martial Flor
qwer absolutely LOVE this book (I started it a while ago), but the really short chapters are so annoying 😂
05/22/2023 11:21Reader-915774
qwer really liking this book so far … added to my list!
05/21/2023 19:14Michelle Duffin
qwer so close then a x walking in. Trouble ahead.
05/21/2023 19:05Michelle Duffin
qwer enjoying the story build up so far.
05/21/2023 13:33Chantal S
henry the eighth wasn't he Frances ruler not England
05/20/2023 22:39
Julie M-Schmitt
qwer love the beginnings but hate it’s ongoing!!!! please don’t be too long of a book, I really hate it when a writer drags on and on!
05/20/2023 15:28Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
qwer This story sounds interesting enough. Wary of the comment about future chapters, though.
05/20/2023 07:00Sglad
qwer. seems interesting so far.
05/18/2023 02:50icuovrthere
qwer this seems interesting, but I'm very wary due to other reader's reviews
05/17/2023 15:32
Bella Jersey 2
I’m so mad I just this religiously looking for updates on this book. never gave me any clue the book was updated
05/14/2023 14:03
AstarteLor
don't waste your money here people! author completely loses track of the story multiple times and turns every character into a loathsome mess. it starts off well enough. and like it's going somewhere, enough to go ahead and pre-purchase the thing for the discount. then it turns into a hot mess
05/13/2023 11:49Amy Young
do they not have spell check?
05/12/2023 02:40sharon Kruse
can we have this book and its twin in audio
05/02/2023 03:30
Sky💕
when is the other book getting updated?
05/01/2023 18:44Brandy McCown
x1c5 i love this book! I love this world.
04/23/2023 22:10Reader-350476
x1c5 what a good start with the intimate moments,I’ll surely love the books and looks like a good beginning for Cleo.
04/12/2023 19:42la_la_84@hotmail.com
x1c5 I have added this too my library as loving it thought it was a unlocked book so have to wait until I have enough credits to unlock more now as it isn't
04/12/2023 03:17Jules Marie
x1c5 excellent intro. I've added it to my "to-read list". Looking forward to reading it... Hopefully it's a good one.
04/11/2023 01:46Jenna Mc Augustine
x1c5 with an introduction like that this book will be hot. see some cold showers i some people future
04/11/2023 00:47
Sammy
x1c5 I felt the introduction was a bit rushed, but I guess we needed the history out of the way to get straight into the rest of the book. I've added to my library and looking forward to reading more
04/10/2023 22:15Gemma Butler
x1c5 Great book introduction. I’ve added this book to my library to read when it’s complete
04/10/2023 20:52Reader-072710
x1c5 well written
04/10/2023 18:19
Jan T
x1c5 #x1c5 oooohh wow the introduction is hot!!! very captivating and interesting. I'll add it to my library for future reading
04/10/2023 18:18
Cynfifi
x1c5 I love how it starts, it’s very intriguing to see how it will continue to play out. This is an amazing read so far. I can’t wait to read more
04/10/2023 17:25Sumriti Singh
x1c5 i really loved the introduction and i actually enjoy build up to get there so yup wud give it a try and just wanna see them together at the end
04/10/2023 13:03
Megan Phillips
x1c5 This book is well written it pulled me right in, I do hope she moves past her last relationship and gives this one a shot.
04/10/2023 12:57Me Myself
x1c5 it is a well written story so far. I am intrigued and will keep reading this book
04/10/2023 11:21Lindsay Ameel
x1c5 added tot library
04/10/2023 10:55Irma Beck
x1c5 such an enthralling story line so far. keeps you glued to every page so far most certainly goung to put into my library and as a next read 📚
04/10/2023 10:01Bianca Bratu
x1c5 this story draws you in from the very beggining, it’s added to my library and I will surely continue to read it
04/10/2023 09:55Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
x1c5 This story needs some serious proofreading. At times, It is quite difficult to understand what the author is trying to say.
04/10/2023 09:42Reader-731248
x1c5 the introduction intrigued me
04/10/2023 08:41
Joele G
x1c5 intro just drawn me in to the storyline; it has catched my attention; intriguing story to read
04/10/2023 08:13Karen Akel
x1c5 i started reading it, it looks nice different from the werewolf stories can’t wait till the end to see if he can will win her heart. and what will happen when she knows everybody knows but she was left in the dark?
04/10/2023 07:46Merle Langevoord
x1c5 enjoyed reading the first few chapters. really looking forward to how the story will continue
04/10/2023 07:14Karooke
x1c5 die Story hört sich interessant an ...
04/10/2023 06:52M0ppiejj27
x1c5 love it🤗
04/10/2023 05:10Helen Buckroyd
x1c5 interested, but the grammatical errors are holding me back. retracting from the storyline....
04/10/2023 05:05Debra Sykes
x1c5 don't know if I will like this book but hopefully it will plague my interest on day
04/10/2023 05:03coleabm3
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04/10/2023 03:19ranger023
x1c5 her ex-husband is a complete ding dong if he is guilty as heck. ge divorced her while she was at the hospital I hope she gets her revenge
04/10/2023 02:04Reader-333971
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04/10/2023 01:53
Bizzybee🐝🌸
x1c5 this book is addicting
04/10/2023 00:43Moonsong
c1c5 well that introduction kinda just brings you in doesn’t it?!
04/10/2023 00:11Vicki usher
x1c5# This book looked interesting and raunchy so I added it to my library. I haven't started yet but I am planning on it
04/10/2023 00:10
Amal Samir
X1c5, it's a very interesting story
04/10/2023 00:01Bella Jersey 2
I think Cleo will look beautiful with passion twist
04/03/2023 09:36Bella Jersey 2
it is fun when the delusional characters live in never never land. the plan come with. yeah you have fun in delusional land. I’ll stay safe in reality
04/03/2023 09:06Bella Jersey 2
what song was Vintage singing?
03/31/2023 05:05Brianna Van Vleet
is there going to be more chapters soon?
03/31/2023 02:51Bella Jersey 2
mom is gonna be kissing my ass
03/29/2023 07:31Bella Jersey 2
damn dad is good new allow information to be used as a weapon
03/29/2023 06:32Bella Jersey 2
oh boy family dinner. you family are so calm and refreshing. no it’s now but I’m not getting food in my hair or on my clothes
03/29/2023 06:05Bella Jersey 2
I would love to read your take on dragon shifters
03/29/2023 05:42Bella Jersey 2
Cleo is not no damn dog
03/29/2023 05:30Bella Jersey 2
hold up hold up Robert TRAINED Cleo??? like she’s some kinda dog
03/29/2023 04:51Bella Jersey 2
I lost respect respect Valenzano here. this easily avoided but he hurt someone for his pride. I want Cleo to find out. I was not okay
03/29/2023 04:13Bella Jersey 2
you had to do it again didn’t you Domunique? making ugly I had to get tissues what hell
03/25/2023 04:53Bella Jersey 2
we are also lucky Cleo doesn’t has Sickle Cell. the way the were behaving with the blood. I was scared
03/21/2023 12:41Bella Jersey 2
sorry but it’s the truth
03/21/2023 12:31Bella Jersey 2
I was waiting for August to take control and hit West’s head
03/21/2023 12:24Bella Jersey 2
Jazz and Cleo are ride or die friends
03/21/2023 12:13Bella Jersey 2
that was such a big mistake that will bite her in the ass later
03/21/2023 11:57Bella Jersey 2
i literally saw this happen in real life in restaurant. one woman called another witch. me and friends who were near took two step over. we are not getting hit for those two
03/21/2023 11:51Bella Jersey 2
I never saw a man back peddle so quickly. I was wrong. I take it back
03/21/2023 11:39Bella Jersey 2
I can see Robert now cast as the hero Robert. the fans are cheering. get real buddy boy
03/21/2023 11:34Bella Jersey 2
Robert is getting pathetic and now he wants her back. I guess you should treat her right to begin with. oh well loser be gone
03/21/2023 11:31Bella Jersey 2
I’ll tell you what a gentleman Valenzano is offering his services. I thought DoorDash and Grubhub was good
03/21/2023 11:10Bella Jersey 2
chapter 58 has a complete part of beginning the salt and pepper hair
03/21/2023 11:03Bella Jersey 2
yes there is a problem in my location rabid werebear serial killers
03/18/2023 06:47Bella Jersey 2
not liking the spying
03/16/2023 06:10Rose SB
I read this book under another name up to the point where she left. It was under another name entitled Thirty Days with the alpha.
03/14/2023 07:23Bella Jersey 2
West move 20 damn spots up on my respect list
03/07/2023 23:47Bella Jersey 2
ugly cry again what the hell Dominique
03/07/2023 23:25Bella Jersey 2
I forgot all about Jodci they are on the play list now.
03/07/2023 22:26Bella Jersey 2
I still love weak by SWV
03/07/2023 22:18Bella Jersey 2
Dominique you are not playing fair you made me ugly cry
03/07/2023 22:13Bella Jersey 2
now it’s a party can somebody pass me the chips
03/07/2023 21:57Bella Jersey 2
you know Vintage and Valenzano are now here willing servants
03/07/2023 21:27Bella Jersey 2
I think I’m funny with book everyday I come at it. I’m only gonna read ONE chapter today. now too bad reader in me takes over. bitch you must be crazy we might just finish it today. buckle up buttercup
03/07/2023 20:32Bella Jersey 2
Jazz being Cleo’s ride or die friend I love it
03/07/2023 20:22Bella Jersey 2
if this goes sideways Valenzano a lot of blame
03/07/2023 20:21Bella Jersey 2
I love how Valenzano wants to care for Cleo with no sexual component
03/07/2023 20:17Bella Jersey 2
Avaya is such a bitch and she keeps on proving it
03/07/2023 19:51Bella Jersey 2
you know the other girls back up. because we know if another woman calls a female a bitch. you better move I’m not taking a hit for you
03/06/2023 08:16Bella Jersey 2
i remember leaving notes for my mom so she knew where I was. now everyone texts the notes got an upgrade
03/06/2023 08:08Bella Jersey 2
alrighty it party time and the assholes are coming
03/06/2023 08:06Bella Jersey 2
they left her alive on purpose didn’t they?
03/06/2023 08:01Bella Jersey 2
want Cleo backstory no more hiding
03/05/2023 08:02Bella Jersey 2
have to say if West is annoying and responsible in same way. him treating Jazz likes she’s made of glass’s is ridiculous. you know it’s like be with human and embrace it or step off
03/01/2023 22:48Bella Jersey 2
send out the prop same day different POV but not repeat conversation
03/01/2023 21:45Bella Jersey 2
I’m ready to let Cleo lose USA budget god knows we need the help. if not the whole country I’ll settle for my state New Jersey
03/01/2023 21:42Bella Jersey 2
can you imagine getting know each one human other werewolf. okay so how old are you to the human 30 years old. how old are you to werewolf. in human years I’m 35. human goes hold up how old in werewolf years 350
03/01/2023 21:25Bella Jersey 2
oh freak you by silk
02/27/2023 08:02
