Determined. Comments

  • Allison Underdonk Peterman

    now that I am finally caught up. I am a new reader to this story. I love it. I am curious what he is keeping from her that he mentioned though in a previous chapter. Also why does he not listen and actually take in everything? I honestly have no idea how he is the strongest alpha and pack where he is so closed minded. it is cute how close he is to his mate but honestly he let a rabbit hit on him while chasing after his mate. that alone has him on my Sh*t list. I still haven't gotten over that. he doesn't seem loyal to me at all. I truly don't know if I want them to work out or not yet. She is strong and independent and he so far is controlling (alittle is cute), unloyal, hypocrite, temperamental. alittle caring but thats it. not many good qualities

    04/08/2021 18:43

  • Rebeca Castro

    is it a southern thing to day bloody with something when there mad and there wearwolfs right why don't them mindlink when something important happen or they need something I love the story by the way read it in like 2 days

    04/08/2021 15:58

  • Karina Marthinsen

    i just love, that she is so cool, and can put hun back om track

    04/08/2021 11:37

  • Lynora Crawford

    As much as I love Elijah, I'm hoping for some personal growth while Colt's there! The more I read, the more I enjoy. I can't wait for the next update! 😉

    04/07/2021 22:58

  • PirateSwag

    I started this yesterday and already can't wait for updates 🥰 I'm addicted to the storyline and am too emotionally invested 😅 this back and forth is killing me! GIRL 👏 LET 👏 BALTO 👏 LOVE 👏 YOU 👏 😂😂

    04/07/2021 22:40

  • amber sweet

    prefer them longer I could sit here for days and read I love your plot twists they're fresh and innovative

    04/06/2021 04:11

  • amber sweet

    amazing job you

    04/06/2021 02:19

  • amber sweet

    condolences I understand I have six fur babies and it would be devastating take your time write well and you have our support

    04/05/2021 17:00

  • amber sweet

    I like cool I like her a lot and I like her style

    04/05/2021 15:12

  • Veronica Medina

    why is there a error when trying to read

    03/31/2021 11:05

  • Lynora Crawford

    Darn it! The storyline has me on pins and needles! I keep telling muddled I need to give it the or for updates, then go read it, but I can't help myself! 😅 I love it! By the way, long chapters are amazing, and greatly appreciated!

    03/29/2021 03:28

  • Jennifer Tuttle

    LOVING this book!! I don't mind Long chapters! They help keep the suspense going.. making you want to keep reading until you cry because the chapter ended.... 😂😍

    03/27/2021 16:11

  • ALINE ALBUQUERQUE

    OMG what secret he's keeping from her?!

    03/27/2021 02:00

  • Sonia Mcleod

    love long chapters please thank you 🙏 getting interesting did Eli intentionally hurt her family

    03/27/2021 01:47

  • Amanda Jade

    I like the longer chapters and enjoyed the update.

    03/26/2021 19:57

  • Karina Marthinsen

    ohh, bomb drop by Colt 😳 i like that the chapter is a little longer

    03/26/2021 15:19

  • Niqua

    i love the longer chapters

    03/26/2021 14:31

  • olliesea_bengals

    Damn Colt dropping bombs.

    03/26/2021 12:04

  • Rose Asso

    I love this story I prefer the chapters long ❤. Glad colts about to avenge her brother and mother. Especially since he's a rapist at that he got to go.

    03/26/2021 10:59

  • Bri

    I actually like long chapters, personally. I’ve been really enjoying your chapters and character development in this book, can’t wait for the next chapter. :)

    03/26/2021 09:58

  • Amy Sabatino

    what secret is elijah referring to that he kept hidden

    03/22/2021 19:10

  • Lynora Crawford

    ou know I love your story, but I have a question...I hope you don't mind! You wrote that Colt poured out everything...did she tell him about Ross? If so, how did he react? This new bit with Elijah having a secret has me intrigued, though!

    03/22/2021 13:38

  • Sonia Mcleod

    so happy she called him he is special they just need to get to know one another trust be open and honest😘😝🇬🇧

    03/22/2021 05:45

  • reader2121

    This is a good story, but there needs to be some editing done. It’s distracting and sometimes downright confusing.

    03/17/2021 02:43

  • Tabitha Nichols

    I like that she is strong minded. I hope she does not give up all she’s accomplished for him

    03/15/2021 04:10

  • Reader-352296 Sonia3

    wow just as they make up two steps forward ten backwards he doesn't get a chance to explain

    03/05/2021 01:57

  • Lisa Essler

    Colt is a great character

    03/04/2021 03:31

  • Reader-352296 Sonia3

    well it's about time😁😁

    03/03/2021 05:08

  • Reader-352296 Sonia3

    wow really sneaky I feel bad for him why does she play these games with him if they are mated

    03/03/2021 04:59

  • Karina Marthinsen

    soo sneaky, i love IT 😂😂

    03/02/2021 12:53

  • Reader-352296 Sonia3

    he is a wolf and very fast he will catch her and I think she wants him to catch her

    03/02/2021 00:32

  • Nichole83pa

    YES!! Obviously Colt wants him and she just needs to give in! Update soon! This book is PERFECTION 💜

    02/26/2021 16:13

  • Lisa Essler

    You have done a good job of bringing in the background through dialogue and flashback. Try to keep in first person or third point of view. You can switch characters in first person pov. .

    02/22/2021 08:34

  • Lisa Essler

    Author, you're doing a great job.

    02/22/2021 07:11

  • Karina Marthinsen

    i really like that they ser getting closer, even though i get the felling, that they do have a Long way and more obiticals in front off Them. best girls nigth, is once a year, when er go to a male strip show, first we go out on a girls dinning date, then a few drinks, while er wait for the strip show, afterwards we hit the casino and end up clubbing to the Early morning, where one of our boyfriends pick us Up, after we drunk Call Them, and let them know, er are ready for sleep😜😜

    02/18/2021 07:30

  • Karina Marthinsen

    i really like that they ser getting closer, event though i her the felling that they do have a Long way and more things to get settelt. vest girls nigth, is once a test, when er go to a male strip show, first er go one out girls dinning date, Them a few drinks, the strip show, afterwards er hit the casino and end op clubbing to late ord early morning, where one og out boyfriends puck us Up, after we drunk Call Them 😜

    02/18/2021 07:23

  • Nichole83pa

    Can you tell me how often you update this book? I started it last night and it’s so addicting!! Amazing and I need more 💜

    02/16/2021 18:02

  • Sophie Easton

    I really hope Colt finds out Eli didn't really have much to do behind the "attack" on her mom. I like them as a couple, even though we haven't seen much of it. I also think Colt acts like an immature girl at times with her temper and ranting off.. disrespectful

    02/15/2021 18:15

  • L.Tucker

    I love the audacity of the alpha 😂😂😂 I love the independence and strength of colt.

    02/14/2021 17:58

  • Lynora Crawford

    I am really enjoying this story! Could you please tell me what your update schedule is like, though? I read really fast, so the new chapters are finished within three minutes, lol. If looked like you were updating regularly, for a while, but it seems like they've slowed down some. If it's only once a week, I'll set it aside for a little bit, and come back to it. I'm not trying to be insulting or demanding, I COMPLETELY understand being subject to life and responsibilities - especially with kids! 😊

    02/11/2021 15:53

  • Sam D.

    this last update was so good! I've been so curious about the backstory around Ross and why Colt held Elijah responsible. It sure seems like both Colt and Elijah are each doing some legit self reflection right now so I think they have a fighting chance if they can keep being brave enough to grow and change.

    02/07/2021 23:01

  • olliesea_bengals

    I loved this last update. For there to be a real chance for Colt and Elijah, she needs to be 100% truthful and let him know what happened to Ross and in turn Elijah needs to let her talk and both need to take it one step at a time and allow each other the pace they need to go for the relationship to work and almost more importantly, last.

    02/07/2021 02:05

  • olliesea_bengals

    I’m so sorry for the loss of your beloved dog. Losing a pet is never easy. They leave paw prints 🐾 on our hearts.

    02/03/2021 02:28

  • Karina Marthinsen

    wow thats was some dream, he is hit hard ♥️

    01/29/2021 10:05

  • olliesea_bengals

    Dang. the end of that last chapter. what a dick. I hope she rejects him. she doesn’t need that in her life.

    01/20/2021 03:01

  • Bethany River

    Hi everyone, First off, thank.you so much for taking the time to look at Determined, and Thank you even more to those who have chosen to read and add her. I feel very blessed that she has been so well received. I decided to start up a little social media page on facebook. for my writing. It is just starting out and will get bigger. You can find it here https://lm.facebook.com/l.php?u=https%3A%2F%2Ffb.me%2Fbethanyriverwrites&h=AT1b04vePLbVcXq5ArFomRhRDm4LznEBjuFu0ZC897XCW-frhhfrW7TeHevr5TLXa_biIhx-jaC1DwfL69-pCaCHuC-CXKOcgeNx8JG_JHU7eRzmx6UhmbK79VZ2p7iv32bXf3uOAR09aUQ Once it has enough followers/likes I will start posting little sneak pieces of information about Determined. Your will also be able to get in touch with me and I promise to do my best to respond to anyone who does. I love reading what people think of the story and hopefully those who are reading can continue to enjoy it. Have a lovely day. B x

    01/20/2021 02:42

  • Karina Marthinsen

    this is well writting, i read All in one Day, just could not stop, thank you

    01/18/2021 04:44

  • Lynora Crawford

    This story has a great start! I'm looking forward to the rest! Can I ask how often you update, please?

    01/15/2021 07:21

  • Ciara

    okay thanks!

    01/15/2021 01:28

  • Ciara

    um I sorry to ask this and I know it’s rude to you authors who put these books together. but I don’t have any money and my parents hate that I read books all the time. so I’m wondering if I can read this book on another website that doesn’t cost money? it would mean a lot but by all means you can say no. thank you for your time and effort I have enjoyed most of this book.

    01/15/2021 00:19
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