The Rejected Luna's Second Chance Mate Comments
Nightfury Blizzard
This is so poorly written, I don't understand who is saying what and what's even happening. Did nobody proofread this because the writing is a mess. You don't know the timeline of events or anything tbh. It's a difficult read and even if the story itself could be good, the writing is diminishing it's quality.
07/15/2023 07:01