The Hybrid Witch's Twins Mate Comments

Bethany River

Couldn't quite follow along properly. gave up after 3 chapters. It's kind of jumpy, needs a bit of formatting and it feels like there are some details missing to be able to keep up with the story. yes a few grammatical errors or name confusions, but that can be over looked if the rest is in place well enough. Sadly though, this work needs some extra attention to be able to join the dots and make an enjoyable fluid reading experience. good luck author with your editing 😊