Between The Brothers Comments

Katieisright

I’m sorry but I can’t. This has so many grammatical errors that it actually doesn’t make any sense and is really hard to keep up with. the first paragraph alone is rife and the run on sentences mixed with grammatical inaccuries fried my brain. I read stories with mistakes and errors all the time but not multiple in the one sentence. This needs a complete review and overhaul.

Caitlin Sullivan

5c9f...I'm not sure about this book. it seems like wanting to have your cake and eat it too from the intro

Caitlin Sullivan

5c9f...I'm not sure about this book. it seems like wanting to have your cake and eat it too from the intro

Caitlin Sullivan

5c9f...I'm not sure about this book. it seems like wanting to have your cake and eat it too from the intro

Ashley

5c9f I think that love triangles are interesting to read about however I can't help but want everyone to have their happy endings and that isn't always the case with love triangles. I will have to see where this goes.

Vicki usher

5c9f# That was an interesting, intriguing introduction has a little of everything in this story. I wonder what will happen

Megan Phillips

5c9f the introduction is interesting but unfortunately I'm struggling keeping up with the book since I believe thw author doesn't typically speak English so it's a little difficult to keep up

Stephanie T-H

5c9f I gave the first chapter a shot as this has the potential to be an interesting read. However, the writing style is rife with grammatical errors and strange speaking cadence between the characters. I can't read it as currently written, perhaps if it gets edited I will come back to the story.

blubelle Reads

5c9f definitely on the bookshelf for a read soon

Kash Kash

5c9f I appreciate the writer's romance concept and writing.The woman works at the company who was in a complicated relationship with the first son of her Boss.Later on, the Boss' second son enters to become the new leader of the company to replace his father and become her current boss now.The question is who will win the heart of this beautiful woman Savannah. Though, I feel it's not like a first english based language when you read the lines.It really needs some more editing.

Susan Long

5c9f I am having trouble understanding the beginning, maybe it's me but I can't seem to get into this story.

Kristin Christensen

5c9f struggling with a story with the grammatical errors, and sometimes third person writing will keep reading

Janaki Kollepalli

5c9f... It is impossible to understand what is being written in the first chapter... went above my head

Linda Strandquist

5c9f nice start let's see where this goes. adding it to my library to read when I finish othersbinhave started

Mirela

5c9f - Very interesting. She works to much, so she needs a break. And a good break is in the hands of a man or maybe two.

5c9f interesting introduction. I'm curious as to what is the dream the main character is talking about. the tags are intriguing

Alice Pinto

5c9f i like the intrigue of this book, but I feel like I won’t be able to go on with the reading because I can’t seem to figure out how the author writes

Syl Xiao Lin

5c9f It seems like the first chapter badly needs edition. I added it to favs but I will wait in hopes it gets edited.

5c9f I’m not sure if I should go ahead and and say “ English is not the author’s first language”. I at least feel that the books that we are given to review should be checked before short listed.

Kitty-694016

5c9f. the lead sounds like someone who gets that she controls her own destiny. A love triangle between two brothers may make for interesting read

Lynn Johnson

5c9f- The introduction seemed interesting but a little confusing. After trying to read the first chapter, would not recommend this book to anyone. Don't the author knows English. It definitely needs some serious editing.

icuovrthere

5c9f I had a hard time following the synopsis and I'm not sure what the first chapter actually said.

yes sir

5c9f the first chapter confusing a little and is it she or he the editing not very good

Karooke

5c9f naja das Intro hört sich nicht wirklich so spannend an und die Geschichte scheint nicht interessant zu sein...

Joele G

5c9f read the intro seems to be very interesting; it really does seems to be a really good read; hard to follow

Reader-431917

5c9f this book introduction sounds very interesting. I will add it to my library to read after my current book 📚

Gemma Butler

5c9f I’m not sure if English is maybe the authors first language as I struggled to read the book’s introduction. I love the concept of this book though

Me Myself

5c9f I do not like to write negative reviews but this book is so poorly written that I had to read the first sentence three times.

Reader-350476

5c9f This is really amazing love triangle story, it’s quite interesting and exciting

John Robinson

5c9f The description for this book is interesting which brother will she choose? I started to read the beginning of this book and I believe English may not be the author's first language as it isn't flowing that well although anyone writing in a language not their first has my admiration.

Reader-778832

5c9f the blurb had me confused as I had to read it twice before realising it’s the authors style.

Doobies

5c9f - Sounds interesting based off the intro, but I’m a bit hesitant due to all the awkward, minor grammatical errors that my eye caught while skimming the opening chapter.

Tricia Freligh

5c9f This sounds like it’s going to be a good story. I’m going to add it but I hope it will be a completed story soon.

Fiona Hsu

5c9f Yay! looks like an amazing story

Sammy

5c9f I read the blurb and the first chapter but unfortunately could not relate to the author's writing style or the storyline. I hope that the author gets some assistance with proofreading as it seems that English is not her first language. Good luck.

Lonnie Miller

5c9f The FL appears to a strong woman who knows what she wants and isn't afraid to go after it. The sentences seem disjointed and there isn't a flow from one to sentence to the next.

Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

5c9f Reading this story is extremely painful. It is so painful, I get a headache just trying to figure out what the author is trying to say.

Bianca Bratu

5c9f Great story with an interesting story line. It has really peaked my interest so I added it to my library and I will surely continue reading it

Amal Samir

5c9f, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen in this love triangle. It seems interesting 😏