The Stray Alpha Comments
ReaderRicecake
There are a lot of errors in grammar and word choice that have me mentally editing as I read. The writing style seems a bit rushed because of this; HOWEVER, it's so hard to stop reading. This is a unique and riveting story -- I'm aching to know what's next. It's really sucked me in. A bit more editing and it would, honestly, be ✨️GOLDEN✨️ #winbonus
09/02/2023 07:59