Flash Marriage Billionaire Comments
Mirela
JUNE The begining is interesting. The girl got married as a wish of her grandma, but in reality nobody does that. Hope she has a great marriage.
09/05/2023 05:42Paula Almeida
June- what must be going through Shelley’s mind through this whole fake wedding. I have a feeling she will be happy in the end but there will be a lot of ups and down.
09/05/2023 05:41Stephanie Miller
JUNE The introduction for this book is very scattered and hard to follow. After piecing some of it together, it seems like the boom would be interesting, but I don’t feel drawn into reading it. The first couple chapters are also hard to get into. The writer has me a little confused.
09/05/2023 05:40Ashley
JUNE The introduction starts off good but then does not really make sense. It is like just chunks of what the story is about but no context. I usually would not read this type story and especially since the introduction is confusing I would not even bother.
09/05/2023 05:34Alice Pinto
JUNE unfortunately, I agree with the other comments. first, this book isn’t the genre I prefer to read, but I was intrigued by the first lines of the introduction. The rest of it isn’t good
09/05/2023 05:32Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton
JUNE The English used in this story is quite painful. Apparently, no one bothered to proofread this before offering it to the public. It amazed me that the English used in this story is so very different from the other stories if this author. It is as if someone else has written this story.
09/05/2023 05:31Kristen Lewis
JUNE This seems like it could be a good book! I like that the two of them aren't horrible to each other like most other contract marriage or marriage of convenience books.
09/05/2023 05:25KMKC11
JUNE So the synopsis of this book makes it sound interesting but the intro doesn’t follow. It’s confusing and I can’t say the characters inspire me to want to continue reading. I think I’ve passed on this author’s stories before and will do the same here.
09/05/2023 05:25Janaki Kollepalli
JUNE... the description is so confusing that I am unable to understand which direction the story is going... very complicated... book is not that touching at all... I don't recommend
09/05/2023 05:20
JUNE The description of this story and when I started to read the beginning of this book I found it quite interesting. It's a good attempt from an author who I assume English isn't their first language and will definitely read more to see what happens next.
09/05/2023 05:12
miss foodieeee😋😋😋
June-as ummm couldn't really understand what is going rather than she has a brother who loves her alott and her fake fiance wants to be her real husband but dosent either trust her with the house key or ..... am not sure where that is headed but all the best for ur future book ❣️❣️
09/05/2023 05:10
Karen V
June AS The book over all is confusing. it jumps from one topic to another. I definitely won’t be saving it. My mind is all over the place and I just can’t enjoy it
09/05/2023 05:08Daisy Francisco
JUNE I love the introduction on this book,it’s interesting and exciting to read and I guess more drama on the way
09/05/2023 05:01Valkentina
JUNE. I feel like the beginning of the story is ahead of the action itself, more natural for the readers would've been to have a throwback at least to find out how she meet him.
09/05/2023 05:00icuovrthere
JUNE the beginning of the introduction was intriguing, a little confusing, but I liked it. as it goes on, it's very difficult to follow and gets confusing. they talk about things that don't make sense, as they don't introduce the situation.
09/05/2023 04:58Reader-431917
JUNE I am not sure if I will read this book or not yet. the introduction seems a bit confusing and seems to jumps around amongst topics. it is also still an ongoing story, so not certain if I want to start it and be left hanging
09/05/2023 04:54jules kc
JUNE 2 I think Adrian is a bit weird, some times he acts as if he cared a bit about her and some times he seems as if he does not care for her. I am a bit confused about that
09/05/2023 04:54
Amal Samir
JUNE, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. The description of the story is interesting and it seems fun to read how they will deal with each other and how their story will end. It looks good
09/05/2023 04:54June The description of this story is and when I started to read the beginning of this book I found it quite interesting. It a good attempt from an author who I assume English isn't their first language and will definitely be reading more to find out what happens.
09/05/2023 04:53yes sir
June this book spick my interest I enjoyed reading it just few misspelling and the introduction need more clarification hopefully I can read more later
09/05/2023 04:48Brenda Kay
JUNE-AS what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.
09/05/2023 04:47Nedsa
June the story start pretty fast without context or description of what’s going on. Maybe to pick up the interest of the reader, to me is not a catch. But author should keep writing because they are readers that like this type is story. Best of luck
09/05/2023 04:46
Sammy
JUNE I read the blurb and the first chapter but unfortunately could not relate to the author’s writing style or the storyline. I hope that the author gets some assistance with proofreading as it seems that English is not her first language. Good luck.
09/05/2023 04:42Viking-Luna
"JUNE" Oh wow I totally love this first chapter ❤️ Reminds me of filling a wish for my own Grandmother. Her newest Great Grandson was Baptised before she passed away. Going to read another chapter 😃
09/05/2023 04:42Rafael
JUNE. it seems interesting book. I like the introduction and isn't seems to have many twists. I don't usually read this gender but I will added to my library for future read. I also don't like that it is ongoing. I don't like to wait
09/05/2023 04:42Vicki usher
JUNE I am not one who readily agrees with others reviews but I must say I do when it comes to the description of the introduction. I started off interested and intrigued but then became confused by it. I may try to read more to see I lf it gets better.
09/05/2023 04:42Aisha Ali
JUNE. I liked the introduction a bit confusing but still good I will read this soon enough just added it to my library and I will start as soon as I finish the current book I'm reading
09/05/2023 04:39
Joele G
June I’m sorry but I just couldn’t read this; it is a bit confusing alittle broken up in parts of the story; the storyline is confusing. I just couldn’t continue on reading.
09/05/2023 04:39Lonnie Miller
JUNE How crazy can this get?? A woman rescues and saves a man she accidentally happens upon. He makes her an unconditional promise in gratitude for his life. She asks him to honor his promise by marrying her desperate to fulfill her Grandma's dying wish. It's so surreal, I actually want to read more 🤦
09/05/2023 04:35Justine Hedge
JUNE I was looking forward to this book based on the description, but the flow and word choice is hard to get past. I do hope this story gets its groove.
09/05/2023 04:35Donna Pember
JUNE This book is not for me. I can't get past the idea of strangers moving in together after getting married. The reason for getting married is not too clear in the first few chapters.
09/05/2023 04:30Bianca Bratu
JUNE This one seems like an amazing story. I loved it from the very first chapter and I will surely continue to read more and find out what happens next in this story.
09/05/2023 04:26Kobie Stroebel
JUNE good start
09/05/2023 04:25KKH
JUNE This definitely has an interesting start. She is trying to fulfill her dying grandmother’s wish by getting married. unfortunately the story is a little bit hard to follow because it seems like English is not the writer’s first language.
09/05/2023 04:22JustBee
“JUNE” I don’t think I’m a fan of Amelia Hart’s writing style which weird because I really like the third person pov. I see the idea and I strongly believe that the author’s book are inspired by dramatic telenovelas.
09/05/2023 04:20Awurabena Afriyie Asare
JUNE. I am so fascinated about this book. I mean one has chosen the choice to have a marriage of convenience but unfortunately events has turned such that Shelley has developed feelings for her supposed husband. But i believe her husband likewise likes her but fails to see that or he's not allowing himself to feel these feelings.
09/05/2023 04:14Leré Saunderson
JUNE I really like the story. This time its different and a little more original. I like it when an author ventures out and write outside their usual storyline. Adding this to my library to continue reading.
09/05/2023 04:13Brenda Kay
JUNE what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.
09/05/2023 04:07Mirela
JUNE The begining is interesting. The girl got married as a wish of her gradma. She wanted to see her having a family before she dies. In reality nobody does that. Hope she has a good marriage.
09/05/2023 04:06
Tricia Freligh
“JUNE” so I read the first few chapters. The story sounds good and I can not wait for it to be completed. I am looking forward to reading the this soon.
09/05/2023 04:06Caitlin Sullivan
June ... I'm a tad torn about this book. it seems like an ok one, but it jumps around and is rather hard to follow. it has potential though so I may try more
09/05/2023 04:06Kirsten Tooker
JUNE The introduction didn’t really do anything for me but I still gave it a chance by read the first chapter. Unfortunately things didn’t improve and I was bored shortly after I started reading the story.
09/05/2023 03:57Ashley Marie
JUNE THIS ISN’T MY TYPE OF BOOK SO I REALLY HATE WASTING MY TIME ON THINGS OR GENRES I DO NOT READ BUT IF YOU LIKE IT I LOVE IT I DON’T REALLY HAVE MUCH TO SAY THIS ISN’T MY FAVORITE I MADE IT VERY CLEAR I JUST WANT TO KNOW WHO PICKS THE BOOKS FOR EACH DAY SO I CAN TELL THEM TO LET US DECIDE AT LEAST…. WE ARE THE ONES STUCK TO READING IT
09/05/2023 03:55Helen M
UNE Again, this author's introduction leaves a lot to be desired. Not only is it confusing, but the English is a struggle to read. As with all of this author's stories so far (and this is day 6 of their books), it is not complete. I don't think I'll be reading any further on this one. JUNE
09/05/2023 03:43
LouValfa
June : I am sorry but I have not really understood the introduction, I am not bad in English (for a French) but this time it was hard for me. The story is not really interesting, nothing new. Wedding while they don’t know each other… and then… Bref (as we say in French) I won’t continue reading.
09/05/2023 03:42Valkentina
JUNE. 2. and saved his live and why he would accept anything, like marring a stranger. Also I know she wants to fulfill her grandma death wish but forcing a man into marriage is not the way, especially when you don't know anything about him
09/05/2023 03:40Hazel Honey
JUNE The description of the plot is somewhat difficult to follow, I would suspect the writer is not a native English speaker. Marriage of convenience turning into something else can be a great story to read though in this case the style of writing makes me choose to skip it.
09/05/2023 03:35
Lori Holden
June. intro good I will add it. I understand she wants to please her grandma but why would a grandma want her to marry a stranger. why does he all of a sudden want to make it a real marriage
09/05/2023 03:34Me Myself
JUNE the introduction of this book is kind of confusing and does not really draw me in to the plot or characters, nor does the first chapter due to the writing style.
09/05/2023 03:31jules kc
JUNE 4 But I am intrigued to find out more so I added the book to my library and will surely continue this book. I like the genre and the idea and the plot and the characters and I would love to find out more about her and adriens relationship in the future
09/05/2023 03:23jules kc
JUNE 3 Also the thing with his company, why does he want to keep it a secret? and what is about this secret designer and the "friend" she has. i did not feel very comfortable when I read that scene so I do not know what to think about it
09/05/2023 03:22jules kc
JUNE I like this book very much. It is a bit confusing to be honest but I like her character and I am sorry for her because of her grandma. she does not deserve that
09/05/2023 03:22
Aly_sohn
JUNE this story is painfully difficult to read and follow. the writing style does not feel natural or flow well. I think it could have potential, it I definitely needs polished up.
09/05/2023 03:07
