The Moon's Descendant Comments

Sunflowher 🌻

I love this book. I love your writing style. the two different perspectives give a really clear picture of the story.

Vilma Carpin Buhawe

I can't stand reading like this extreme cruelty especially from a parent anymore. I've read lot with the same plots.I know it's fiction but the cruelty is too much and unrealistic and her wolf is not even helping her.

Vilma Carpin Buhawe

Why is her wolf not protecting her against her father?

Claire Morrison

loved this hard going reading double chapters but worth it

Reader-411492

loved the story would love to read part 2. where can I find it?

Christine Barrett

I love the story but if the whole book is double chapters both perspective I will quit early I don’t want to re read every dam chapter. bring both together in the same chapter.

Stacey Burrows

the other book arent on anystories? i can't find them

Marissa Hayden

will they be released here?

Kay Pearson

Check out my Facebook for the second and third book in this series. Kay Pearson Author

Lisa Costa

when is the next book coming out?

Gabriella Nastasa

i can't wait the next book, when it will be ready?

Rhonda Jean

interesting writing style. I like seeing both POV, I’m just used to being presented differently… like every other chapter, or to show more differences. I do however love the story!

Melissa Sturgill

why so much repeat?

miasiacheyenne

i will say I love the perspective switch but it throws me off with how far back each one’s goes. like I wouldn’t think it would go back that far and I have to redo everything again

Candice

when is the next book being released?

Alexandra Nala S

great book! can't wait for the second one

Lesly Martin

so good. really gripped me from the start

Dianne Smallwood

This is really a great book

Dianne Smallwood

Zee

Reader-161380

👍

Lusha Antoine

AraVido

really good so far. Instead of switching POV way after time has passed, I’d suggest to do it next to each other on the same timeline. but it switches after a while and it’s like you have to start back at the beginning. Restructure it so the different POVs overlap each other

Nichole Gray

I am not a fan of how it switches back and forth telling much of the story twice that being said this book was amazing I was hooked read it in one night and I'm mad that I have to wait for more.

KYK

chapter 67 read ex part 2. is this correct? where is part 1 of that then? unless I am missing something

TJ Gray

when is soon for the new book to start?

Kavita Thanky

❤️

Kavita Thanky

like the story so far...

Olya Alexandrovna

amazing book!! can someone tells me if it keeps on being redundant tho with the different POVs .. I really don't want to lose interest but so hard to read those chapters.

Stephanie Jade

I love this book so much put I find myself skipping the chapters that are in the other person's pov, amazing book but the extra pov isn't needed in my opinion 💗

AZ Trouble

This is a wonderful story, except for one thing: Rehashing the same scene, but from the other persons POV. In my opinion, this redundant and unnecessary. It’s like taking one step forward in the story only to go two steps back to relay the whole scene again from the other person’s POV. No problem with POVs…just run it concurrently within the storyline’s timeline.

Reader-148264

I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️

Reader-148264

I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️

Tarah Krainski

I love this story. I wish I could read th whole thing and no t have to stop

Vickie Lynn Puckett

I loved this story. I can't wait for the second book.

Sharla Johnson

love this story so far! can't put it down! good job author on keeping us wanting more :)

Socky

How will we know when the next one comes out?

Nikita Kamble

i like cole at the first place and thought that may be he will ended up with her but then this gunner came... now I don't know where this story will take

Aesthelia

...I really want Cole to get his happy ending too.... ;-;

Amy Middlemiss

cant wait for the next one!

Marie Perron

love it !

Margarita 🍹

I love this story but I don't like how it switches perspectives. It would be better to show perspectives within each chapter instead of retelling chapters.

Amanda Rowland

please tell me there is a hard copy I can buy.

April Borchers

have you written a book or is the book in a different app

April Borchers

I loved every minute of it thank you so much you are an excellent writer and I am going to read mother of the moon thank you

April Borchers

My thought says it Gunner is holding back Because he thought that she was raped by her father because when he found her she was just in a T-shirt with no panties on but he didn’t realize she had just gotten back from shifting and that’s all she could find so he’s holding off on them bonding because he doesn’t think she can handle it right now and she wasn’t even raped

Redangel19

I loved this book how do u find the second one mother of the moon I have to read it

Bella Jersey 2

it was wonderful seeing it from his POV. he sounds like good guy

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 10: interesting

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 9: Gunner so sweet but when all you had faced and seen is evil. it’s really hard to believe in good

Krissy

Thank you all so much for reading. Book 2 is currently exclusively available on GoodNovel.

Katrina Klingensmith

Very good!! Ended too quickly, but looking forward to the sequel.

Fredrike Hendriks

i read this entire book multiple times and paid for it, but now all my chapters are locked again. why! on the side note i really love your work

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 7: it looks like Gunner and the guys saved her. she also meet the moon goddess. not a long conversation

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 6: Zee had no clue what she was or is

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 5: something not right with Zee

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 4: the guys were waiting for her. did they miss her trying to sneak outta of her house to go to SCHOOL. how many teenagers do you know that sneak outta of their house to go to school?

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: I did love when she tried to self bash herself Gunner didn’t like it

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: the mini heart attacks aren’t cool. Gunner felt her pain when they were close. now that she’s that bad will he feel anything?

Trisha Reynolds

when is book 2 coming out

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 2: she is really stronger than anyone thinks

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: she’s so scared who can blame her

Kaylin Joye

this book was really great!

Stella Moon

I can’t wait for book two!!!

Jocelyn Soto

nvm, I just didn't read it correctly. my bad

Jocelyn Soto

so Zelena is a guy? this is good but kinda confused me

Kelly Rohrer

yay!! so excited for book2!

Kelly Rohrer

Go Zeeeee!!!!!

Minithe Libra

more please

Kelly Rohrer

For the author Kay Pearson - please write more! This is a really really good story and I’d love to see more from you !

Kelly Rohrer

I just paid again for 2 chapters I’ve already paid for

Kelly Rohrer

holy crappppppppp 🤛🏼🥷🏻🐺☪️

Kelly Rohrer

I really love this story 💜

Kelly Rohrer

so far I really like this story 😊

J.S. Teal Ribbon

Just a question but do you know how many chapters there will be? I want to read but hate to have stop and wait.

Rana

thank you for writing it ☺️❤️

Rana

Hello, I love this story like really I read it all in 30min I am wondering when the next Update is going to be ?