The Moon's Descendant Comments

Visitor

its really interesting

Visitor

very good story so far! cant wait to see what happens next

Visitor

Very nice Theme, I love Gunner, he is her Knight in shining armor.

Lewis Dougie

very interesting

Visitor

amazing

Brenda Kuehl

loved the book

Visitor

great

Visitor

loving it, it's a good read let's see how it's going

Maxine Goin-Kelley

This book would be better if we wernt doing each scene twice.

Visitor

great

Visitor

loving this story so far , let's see where it goes

Visitor

this is a great read! love it

Visitor

I love this book so far

Visitor

killing Cole pisses me off, I don't even want to finish! you did that poor boy so dirty

Visitor

I love this book so far currently on chapter 26

Jeamae Betit

some people might not like the book and there will be others that do. you might need to put a warning in the beginning of book about bad stuff / trigger warning because they are some people who get offended very easily and people like to sue. in my opinion so far it's a good read and hope you continue writing this book. keep up the good work.

Visitor

This is a good book, but I want to do to her father what he does to her.

Visitor

what is with all the minus minus minus stuff

Visitor

what this minus stuff when listening very annoying

Sarah

enjoy so far....

HauntedMachines728

I feel like these chapters are out of order. why are we going back in time to when she was hurt since in the last chapter she was healed? I love the story but this can be confusing

Visitor

is the other books about zelena and gunner,or about something else

Rhonda Gibson

volt not vault

Visitor

I love this story they are so cute

Visitor

I'm enjoying the storyline so much🥰. I only wish their point of views were closer to each other within the chapters. (She was beaten and felt him carry her then switch to his point of view of her being cared for by the doctor. I think it would help the flow better🖤)

Visitor

It is difficult to face and deal with abuse and very very difficult to get away from. bullying in is extremely difficult to deal with in school, for my children I had to make certain words a bad word in my household and teach them how to deal with bullying in school. a parent can not always be there to protect or deal with it all the time. I ended up teaching how to protect themselves and learn to deal with, but my husband or I would step when and where needed. it made school difficult for both of my children..

Murielle “P'tit Poisson” Honoré

Amazing. But her wolf did not talk to her ?

Barbara Paxson

I feel for Zelina! He dad is horrible. New kids are very interesting, seems to be good guys. Rest of students suck, they all think they're entitled. What's wrong with this small town, not looking after the children's health, wellness and safety?

Lisa Costa

when is the next book coming out?

Olya Alexandrovna

amazing book!! can someone tells me if it keeps on being redundant tho with the different POVs .. I really don't want to lose interest but so hard to read those chapters.

Sunflowher 🌻

I love this book. I love your writing style. the two different perspectives give a really clear picture of the story.

Vilma Carpin Buhawe

I can't stand reading like this extreme cruelty especially from a parent anymore. I've read lot with the same plots.I know it's fiction but the cruelty is too much and unrealistic and her wolf is not even helping her.

Vilma Carpin Buhawe

Why is her wolf not protecting her against her father?

Nikita Kamble

i like cole at the first place and thought that may be he will ended up with her but then this gunner came... now I don't know where this story will take

How will we know when the next one comes out?

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 10: interesting

Katrina Klingensmith

Very good!! Ended too quickly, but looking forward to the sequel.

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 5: something not right with Zee

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 4: the guys were waiting for her. did they miss her trying to sneak outta of her house to go to SCHOOL. how many teenagers do you know that sneak outta of their house to go to school?

I can’t wait for book two!!!

Trisha Reynolds

when is book 2 coming out

Jocelyn Soto

nvm, I just didn't read it correctly. my bad

Dianne Smallwood

This is really a great book

For the author Kay Pearson - please write more! This is a really really good story and I’d love to see more from you !

I really love this story 💜

Christine Barrett

I love the story but if the whole book is double chapters both perspective I will quit early I don’t want to re read every dam chapter. bring both together in the same chapter.

April Borchers

My thought says it Gunner is holding back Because he thought that she was raped by her father because when he found her she was just in a T-shirt with no panties on but he didn’t realize she had just gotten back from shifting and that’s all she could find so he’s holding off on them bonding because he doesn’t think she can handle it right now and she wasn’t even raped

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 9: Gunner so sweet but when all you had faced and seen is evil. it’s really hard to believe in good

Gabriella Nastasa

i can't wait the next book, when it will be ready?

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: I did love when she tried to self bash herself Gunner didn’t like it

Rana

thank you for writing it ☺️❤️

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 3: the mini heart attacks aren’t cool. Gunner felt her pain when they were close. now that she’s that bad will he feel anything?

Rhonda Jean

interesting writing style. I like seeing both POV, I’m just used to being presented differently… like every other chapter, or to show more differences. I do however love the story!

TJ Gray

when is soon for the new book to start?

AZ Trouble

This is a wonderful story, except for one thing: Rehashing the same scene, but from the other persons POV. In my opinion, this redundant and unnecessary. It’s like taking one step forward in the story only to go two steps back to relay the whole scene again from the other person’s POV. No problem with POVs…just run it concurrently within the storyline’s timeline.

Kavita Thanky

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Kavita Thanky

like the story so far...

Tarah Krainski

I love this story. I wish I could read th whole thing and no t have to stop

Jocelyn Soto

so Zelena is a guy? this is good but kinda confused me

Vickie Lynn Puckett

I loved this story. I can't wait for the second book.

Lesly Martin

so good. really gripped me from the start

Dianne Smallwood

Zee

AraVido

really good so far. Instead of switching POV way after time has passed, I’d suggest to do it next to each other on the same timeline. but it switches after a while and it’s like you have to start back at the beginning. Restructure it so the different POVs overlap each other

Stephanie Jade

I love this book so much put I find myself skipping the chapters that are in the other person's pov, amazing book but the extra pov isn't needed in my opinion 💗

Aesthelia

...I really want Cole to get his happy ending too.... ;-;

Amy Middlemiss

cant wait for the next one!

chapter 67 read ex part 2. is this correct? where is part 1 of that then? unless I am missing something

Claire Morrison

loved this hard going reading double chapters but worth it

yay!! so excited for book2!

Go Zeeeee!!!!!

Minithe Libra

more please

Margarita 🍹

I love this story but I don't like how it switches perspectives. It would be better to show perspectives within each chapter instead of retelling chapters.

i will say I love the perspective switch but it throws me off with how far back each one’s goes. like I wouldn’t think it would go back that far and I have to redo everything again

Melissa Sturgill

why so much repeat?

so far I really like this story 😊

J.S. Teal Ribbon

Just a question but do you know how many chapters there will be? I want to read but hate to have stop and wait.

Reader-411492

loved the story would love to read part 2. where can I find it?

Stacey Burrows

the other book arent on anystories? i can't find them

April Borchers

I loved every minute of it thank you so much you are an excellent writer and I am going to read mother of the moon thank you

Redangel19

I loved this book how do u find the second one mother of the moon I have to read it

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 6: Zee had no clue what she was or is

Marissa Hayden

will they be released here?

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 1: she’s so scared who can blame her

Kaylin Joye

this book was really great!

I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️

I was hoping part 2 would continue the story with Zeleanas and Tobias and the rest but I don’t think thst story has ended ☹️

love this story so far! can't put it down! good job author on keeping us wanting more :)

Nichole Gray

I am not a fan of how it switches back and forth telling much of the story twice that being said this book was amazing I was hooked read it in one night and I'm mad that I have to wait for more.

Marie Perron

love it !

Rana

Hello, I love this story like really I read it all in 30min I am wondering when the next Update is going to be ?

Bella Jersey 2

it was wonderful seeing it from his POV. he sounds like good guy

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 7: it looks like Gunner and the guys saved her. she also meet the moon goddess. not a long conversation

Bella Jersey 2

chapter 2: she is really stronger than anyone thinks

Candice

when is the next book being released?

Alexandra Nala S

great book! can't wait for the second one

Reader-161380

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