Owned by the Lycan Prince Comments
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why is she being sent to jail? this makes no sense. there needs to be more detail and less rushing of scenes. it’s a good plot with great potential just needs to slow down
08/23/2023 22:05Reader-205280
There’s several errors in the story. Not just grammatically but also scene mix-ups. Leon is the Prince but in one chapter he is referred to as the King. In another chapter Emily is supposed to eat breakfast with the Queen but suddenly they’re eating dinner and drinking wine. It’s kind of confusing.
07/24/2023 20:22