Shattered Girl Comments

  • Visitor

    is there going to be more updates?

    03/11/2025 22:09

  • Trista

    are you going to update this book soon!! I hope so it's really good!!

    03/03/2025 07:12

  • Rebecca Ku

    I luv Jake

    02/17/2025 02:36

  • Visitor

    Just love this book

    02/16/2025 10:58

  • Visitor

    why won't the settings let you make the words font bigger?.

    02/13/2025 06:48

  • Veila Gutierrez

    update?

    01/31/2025 02:45

  • Ashlee Rutledge

    Is there a second book? Maybe about them starting their life together?

    01/25/2025 02:19

  • Visitor

    they really went for it first couple chapters... I'm blushing like a school girl...

    01/08/2025 01:57

  • Visitor

    this book is so weird. like four brothers find this girl a massive turn on, we haven't had her build up to be a massive heroine, she hasn't built up to be a massive beauty in fact I don't event know what she looks like she's just a young girl that these four brothers have decided to pray upon like a play thing. no explanation why her mother left her, no reason the brothers now work as a team to pray on women just here she is now they all want to have sex with her. she has left one abuser to another four. also said she was a virgin but half way through she suddenly isn't. it's just a bit much

    11/24/2024 22:25

  • Visitor

    When is the next update?!

    11/24/2024 20:16

  • Lola oh

    ANY UPDATES?!?!

    11/24/2024 17:14

  • Visitor

    I really enjoyed this, but I do wish it went more into more detail when her dad kidnapped her and the guys rescue of her.

    11/21/2024 18:02

  • Visitor

    please update. it's so good. we need to know what happens. to invested in the characters

    11/20/2024 13:30

  • Visitor

    This book is very good. I have enjoyed all aspects of the story line. Keep writing books like this.

    11/19/2024 00:11

  • Visitor

    ANY UPDATES?

    11/18/2024 11:38

  • Lesslie_Michele

    @Brandi Rae are there going to be anymore chapters?

    11/15/2024 21:50

  • Visitor

    so, I have broken my arm multiple times, gotta say, she sure is using her arm and hands way more than she should, especially that soon after breaking it... js

    11/09/2024 22:16

  • Joyce

    I'm just starting this story I haven't read it before.But I saw on line that people was saying that its a good story and for some reason. I really like story's like this so I'm checking it out.

    10/29/2024 00:47

  • Rebecca Harris

    While I am kinda fond of the characters, the storyline is incredibly vague and we've got accidents, hospital visits and a sex diary but nothing I could actually say this book is about. is there a story or is it an ongoing drama saga?

    10/28/2024 16:26

  • Visitor

    book 2???

    10/22/2024 20:58

  • Visitor

    anyone else think asshole when it says "tight hole" instead of vag? also- when is that going to be prepped!?

    10/16/2024 21:11

  • Caryn L. Pervine Eddards

    first it's Jake then Josh then Jake.

    10/16/2024 14:49

  • Kathleen Moran

    I thought Jake was gone when she came out of the bathroom?

    10/13/2024 13:34

  • Visitor

    it's not fair that there is not more rewards to earn so I can read I love the book so far.

    10/12/2024 22:53

  • Visitor

    More chapters after 141 ?

    10/10/2024 03:11

  • Visitor

    what a great guy Jake is 😊

    10/06/2024 14:30

  • Visitor

    OK. The oldest 2 have to return overseas, The youngest 2 are leaving for college. So who's going to protect her from Mommy Dearest and her Evil sidekick??

    10/06/2024 07:50

  • Visitor

    amazing 😍

    10/01/2024 04:16

  • Visitor

    Wow 😲

    09/25/2024 18:57

  • Maxine Goin-Kelley

    Omg the last two chapters have been annoying to listen to. Because all the spacing issues after the period it keep saying dot

    09/24/2024 05:11

  • Angie

    OMG I love ❤️ it.... But I thought they put a down payment on a house already 🤔? Or found a house they all wanted?

    09/17/2024 19:49

  • Visitor

    Daniel? I thought his name was Andrew, or Drew for short.

    09/17/2024 02:45

  • Heather Macy

    Author, do you know how many more chapters your book will be? I'm very Interested in reading it but have been burned so many times by unfinished books...

    09/15/2024 19:20

  • Visitor

    Who is Daniel??

    09/15/2024 17:05

  • Jayandmarty Huggins

    this book is very good and I want to finish reading it. why does it take so long to post more chapters. I need more than one chapter away! 😪

    08/23/2024 12:30

  • Angie Cara

    Wow didn't see that coming

    07/17/2024 19:44

  • Visitor

    hi is this book finished or will be? xo I eant to read already lol

    06/29/2024 17:30

  • Visitor

    The book is great so far! I'm very glad I found it. I saw that you said your mother had a stroke. I'm so sorry I hope it didn't effect her to much. Hope she feels better soon. We all have only one real mom, they are truly important. Everyone should be patient. Saying prayers for her...

    06/16/2024 08:04

  • Visitor

    I love this book so far. I wish there were more updates because I can't get enough. 😍

    06/14/2024 06:45

  • Brandee DiPiero

    I try and update at least 5 chapters a week M-F.

    05/08/2024 21:20

  • Carol Lanier

    when is the next update this book is fire 🔥🔥🔥

    04/23/2024 00:45

  • Visitor

    omg I want to start reading this book!!! is it going to be finished? when's the next chapter?

    04/22/2024 21:12