Our Forbidden Love Comments
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why would she get mad for Dylan having an ex it was before her time unless I'm missing something here
07/02/2025 22:14chelle fraser
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07/02/2025 20:36Maxine Goin-Kelley
I dont think the author understands what all but means. Using all but inplys you did not do the action, bit the author uses it as if it mean the do it. I am so torn, I like the basic story line, but am getting very frustrated. If you take out the all buts the story would run smoothly.
06/28/2025 19:42Maxine Goin-Kelley
Omg how many times can you say all but in one chapter!? I love the story, but repeating the same phrase over and over is really getting to me.
06/28/2025 19:10Jordan Davies
when you carry on update story
12/21/2024 01:59