A pack of their own Comments

  • Visitor

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    07/22/2025 17:30

  • Visitor

    I just started the story I think it's good

    07/22/2025 12:44

  • Visitor

    good start of the book, I hope it gets more interesting as you go on

    07/21/2025 21:28

  • Visitor

    I’m really loving this book so far I hope jessie changes but dk we will see

    07/20/2025 22:14

  • Motso MATLHARE

    loved the story, hated the ending. felt rushed.

    07/20/2025 12:18

  • Julie Thompson

    so far im enjoying the story

    07/20/2025 03:18

  • alexis hampton

    good story I’m not finished yet but so far good story

    07/18/2025 21:43

  • Visitor

    so far it it is very good that I can't wait to read the next chapter. can't wait to find out what happens

    07/17/2025 14:54

  • Myda Matthews

    who thinks Jessie mate is Alpha of Stone Claw

    07/17/2025 04:56

  • Visitor

    right. this story is exactly the same as Invisible Bloodlines- just names have been changed. so weird. unsure which was written or published for but nevertheless weird indeed. for sure, brilliant story.. either you are called elara or keska...

    07/17/2025 02:57

  • Visitor

    I love this book.

    07/16/2025 03:06

  • Felicia Warner

    i love it

    07/15/2025 22:46

  • Visitor

    I really enjoyed the book. It left me with a clift hanger which I would like to finish the book once completed

    07/15/2025 13:05

  • Visitor

    great story so far. but a bit annoying that the chapters are so short.

    07/12/2025 13:38

  • Visitor

    This a very good and I teredti g story. it has a lot of plot twists that you do not see coming. it keeps you invested in wanting to read and finish the story.

    07/11/2025 14:16

  • Juliane Menze

    Nice story, unfortunately it takes a long time to make a progress because everything is being told from various POVs over and over again. a little bit too much for me

    07/11/2025 06:40

  • Visitor

    It is a good start. Waiting to see how I will enjoy it later on.

    07/08/2025 16:30

  • Visitor

    I could not stop reading this book. It was too captivating.

    07/06/2025 12:17

  • Visitor

    me encantó el libro , really enjoy the story , I love it

    07/05/2025 09:38

  • Visitor

    Good plot, it hooked me from the Start. can't wait to finish it...

    07/04/2025 05:01

  • Visitor

    nice story, feels rushed in the end. like the plot changed, or writer didn't plan the story ending completly. but al in al nice story

    07/03/2025 16:47

  • Cheryl Hurst

    love it

    07/02/2025 07:03

  • Visitor

    nice story I love it i hooked from the beginning and I can't wait to finish it

    07/02/2025 04:29

  • Cindy Walker

    Loved the book. Even though the plot seemed to change from when I started reading it, to when it was completed, I still enjoyed the finished story The ending of the story did seem a bit rushed (more detail was given about the brother's first time, than the main character's first time), but I did appreciate there were no loose ends.

    07/01/2025 15:42

  • Visitor

    Absolutely loving this book!! I was hooked from the beginning and I can't wait to finish it.

    06/30/2025 01:29

  • Visitor

    wonder read, I was hooked from the very beginning

    06/29/2025 12:36

  • Visitor

    amazing story, and it was wonderful to read it

    06/29/2025 12:32

  • Visitor

    Great story

    06/27/2025 05:57

  • Visitor

    Enjoying this book, so far. The author did a good job on keeping a reader engaged.

    06/27/2025 01:23

  • Visitor

    this is cool and easy to get hooked on. many thank to the Author

    06/25/2025 21:26

  • Visitor

    enjoying so far.

    06/25/2025 13:31

  • Esther Matthew

    I pray keska doesn’t forgive them

    06/25/2025 05:26

  • Visitor

    enjoying this book so far.

    06/22/2025 22:35

  • Visitor

    currently reading this book and enjoying keska's journey

    06/21/2025 13:01

  • Mercy Morley

    enjoy this book

    06/21/2025 04:35

  • Visitor

    finished the book! thought it was good except for the last few chapters, everything felt a bit rushed

    06/20/2025 14:55

  • Joanne Partlow

    I am enjoying this book. there are a lot of grammatical errors but otherwise a good read. I am very curious to see how it will end. I really hope Jessie gets what's coming to her. karma..

    06/19/2025 23:22

  • Visitor

    I'm really enjoying this book. Jessie is a brat and she will get her comeuppence in the end ,nasty girl.

    06/19/2025 15:53

  • Nanna

    I love this book so far, I'm listening to the audio while I'm working and it's wonderful. The heifer Jessie is one twisted sister....why do she hate her sister so much is beyond me. Alpha Father and Luna Mother needs to get their head out their a#% and realize that Jessie is a vengeful, whiny biotch.

    06/19/2025 05:39

  • Ashley Naticchioni

    I love it can’t stop reading it

    06/19/2025 04:08

  • Visitor

    I love it so far! 😍

    06/18/2025 20:51

  • Visitor

    good book so far

    06/18/2025 13:21

  • Visitor

    really good read. I enjoy the book. but is very sorry foe kes. but she is a fighter

    06/18/2025 05:44

  • Visitor

    A good read so far

    06/17/2025 12:50

  • Visitor

    I'm enjoying this book so much. Love when Karma is being served!

    06/16/2025 23:06

  • Anesca Thys

    I really liked thos book 📖 enjoyed it

    06/15/2025 14:41

  • Visitor

    I really like this book. It's interesting. Keeps me anticipating for more.

    06/14/2025 16:49

  • Visitor

    extremely good book! 👏🏻 sad at some points but very good

    06/13/2025 19:53

  • Visitor

    Enjoy reading this book... good book

    06/13/2025 07:31

  • Josipa Dobrinić

    I enjoy reading this book

    06/13/2025 07:29

  • Visitor

    extremely good book that doesn't follow the typical story lines. it was impossible to put down

    06/12/2025 17:42

  • Visitor

    enjoyable book to read

    06/12/2025 06:28

  • Linda Passoni

    I really enjoy reading this book

    06/12/2025 00:57

  • Besökare

    really enjoyable book. many good twists and also believeble emotions.

    06/10/2025 17:58

  • Visitor

    very good book to read, i recommend it, definitely keeps you wanting more

    06/10/2025 02:39

  • Visitor

    Great book and a wonderful story. Well written and can't stop reading the story. Weldon and best wishes

    06/09/2025 23:17

  • Patricia P. Preston

    I'm enjoying this book thus far. Can't wait to see what happens next.

    06/09/2025 01:17

  • Visitor

    wonderful book,good story line, interesting,fantastic, best wishes to you

    06/08/2025 13:31

  • Visitor

    it’s really good so far. I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen as the story progresses.

    06/08/2025 12:00

  • Robin Moses Corum

    this was a good book

    06/07/2025 20:02

  • Visitor

    so far this book is good. not finished yet but will

    06/06/2025 21:50

  • Diane Addison-Martin

    This was a great read with an awkward abrupt end.

    06/06/2025 19:55

  • Patricia P. Preston

    I am liking the story so far. It's upsetting to see the blatant favoritism, & mistreatment between the kids. It's so unfair.

    06/06/2025 07:16

  • Niuris Ramos

    I'm greatly enjoying this book, I haven't finished it yet but it's great.

    06/04/2025 20:01

  • Felicia De Leon

    I loved this book but I wish the ending wasn't so rush and that they had couple of epilog.

    06/04/2025 18:50

  • Matthew Osborne

    I am loving this book. I can't wait to unlock all of it.

    06/04/2025 16:32

  • Shannon Marrone

    completely loved the store so wished it wouldn't end . would love to see how the pack turns out and read Liam's story.

    06/03/2025 12:13

  • Visitor

    I couldn't put it down once I picked it up!

    05/31/2025 19:32

  • Visitor

    lovely story

    05/30/2025 20:32

  • Erin Buelow

    love the book just wish there was a part two to it so we get to see there lifes a little bit more.

    05/29/2025 14:29

  • Visitor

    lovely story

    05/29/2025 13:59

  • Crystal Nightray

    the story is awesome. I enjoy how much character development is taking place across the board

    05/25/2025 21:56

  • Melissa Renfro

    I really like this story. I was really invested but I feel like after the attack the rest of the story got rushed, and there were a lot of loose ends.

    05/21/2025 01:04

  • Visitor

    it is so cool you write about my home town 😆 🤣 😂

    05/18/2025 23:01

  • Visitor

    Really enjoyed this story,you did very well for your first time,get you a spell checker and start that second book🍾🎉🎊🌹❤️🙏. Congratulations 👏

    05/14/2025 00:32

  • Visitor

    I didn't like the ending. I hope there is a book 2.

    05/11/2025 19:36

  • Cassy Rose

    you need to either continue with a part2 or a book 2

    05/07/2025 03:06

  • Visitor

    The book was good. We didn't get to know how her parents felt that Jessoe is dead. Why didn't Keska get to confront her dad and mom because they enabled Jessie especially her mom. How do you forget you have a middle child? A lot of these were left unsaid. Why did her parents treat Keska like that? Why didn't her grandma talk with her daughter? just my thoughts.

    05/06/2025 18:44

  • Visitor

    I really love the book. I like getting everyone's point of view. I read a lot and I read fast. this is one of my favorite books. I get so giddy when a update comes. keep it up Author you are doing great!

    05/03/2025 16:08

  • Frances Smith

    any updates???

    04/29/2025 03:58

  • Jacqueline Alexander

    hoping for more updates. I'm now very invested in their stories

    04/28/2025 13:14

  • Visitor

    when will there be an update

    04/27/2025 19:31

  • Visitor

    Sara already said she didn't make the smoothie! That should have raises serious flags!

    04/23/2025 23:01

  • Stephanie Graziano

    the last few chapters have been good. can't wait for more chapters. at chapter 181.

    04/22/2025 01:44

  • Lil Sis

    we went from 20 chapters for the same half day to zooming through 3 months in a sentence. 🤦🏻‍♀️

    04/22/2025 01:01

  • Visitor

    For something tha is a secret, I am surprised at how many people they have told.

    04/21/2025 15:50

  • Visitor

    man, I've already binge read the book and keep wanting more. keep it going I'm getting antsy with what is going to happen next

    04/19/2025 14:44

  • Visitor

    Why does the writing keep going and the page is cutoff but we miss out on parts going to the next page?

    04/10/2025 13:02

  • Sapete Dodson

    umm Keska i'm not sure where you get your expectations. why would you expect to know everything going on in the pack.?? i mean nobody knows things going on in thier neighbors lives

    04/08/2025 22:42

  • Shona Bullock

    I really like the story idea and the characters and concept, but why is it moving soo slowly and filled with too much fluff ? You seem to be dragging the story along we already have a two year wait for the two girls to be of age but at this rate it will actually take two years to read this.

    04/08/2025 20:40

  • Michelle White

    I've become rather addicted to this story. I know your real life takes precidence, but I can't wait for more updates!!! Thank you for your sharing your creative mind with us.

    04/03/2025 21:36

  • Teresa Markee

    I'm ready for more chapters it's been a couple of days you normally do it quicker than that I think you got me biting at the bit the kid went upstairs waiting for more God bless you got good talent

    04/03/2025 07:54

  • Stephanie Graziano

    when will there be more updates? more then just 3 chapter of fluffy

    04/02/2025 06:44

  • Visitor

    can't wait for more please update soon love this story

    03/28/2025 01:53

  • Deanna Landry

    Alpha Carmen 23

    03/27/2025 10:01

  • Stephanie Armstrong

    *does

    03/23/2025 02:38

  • Maria

    why does the audio cut off for some chapters

    03/23/2025 02:18

  • Visitor

    I really would like to know more povs from Apollo and Jessie.. how the "taming" goes.. 🤣🤣 couple of povs from Mimi and Jessie exchanging complaints through the pnone about how others are treating them 😇😇😇

    03/22/2025 19:10

  • Rose Thorne

    Is this book still active?

    03/18/2025 13:08

  • Visitor

    my favourite book I'm only on chapter 26 but I can't wait to see what happens.

    03/17/2025 13:26
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