Luna Lola-The Moon Wolf Comments

  • Lulu Belle

    OK so I enjoyed the story. the story wasn't my issue. I can't handle "I want to jump his bone" like 5 times if not more. the childish giggling like they are children. the I'm embarrassed cheeks red blah blah blah and the dang crying I can't even explain to you how terrible it was to watch her threaten people with death and then cry so many times in this book I literally wanted to slap her myself. I did finish the story but I swear my eyes hurt from rolling them so much. def needs editing.

    07/26/2025 00:43

  • Visitor

    I kike it

    07/25/2025 08:08

  • Visitor

    it's good and could be edited to make more sense. feel like the two main characters need more, I don't know maybe dialog... he is an alpha if he was so worried about her why not talk to her or even others to get an idea about how she was dealing... just a thought

    07/22/2025 01:11

  • Visitor

    How old is the author, this book is really good but the author and the writing style isn't that great. Hopefully, she or he takes this well

    07/19/2025 13:16

  • Visitor

    this book is realy a great book I can't put it down really enjoying it

    07/14/2025 19:56

  • user2507142459

    this book is great. i love it

    07/14/2025 04:59

  • Visitor

    this is such an interesting book. i really want to continue reading it!

    07/13/2025 23:13

  • Visitor

    he hurts her bad and she let's him off too easy. I would have liked him to suffer more as he deserved before she accepted him. she accepted him too easily. one moment she didn't want him and the next she did. he didn't do anything to earn it either.

    07/12/2025 06:55

  • Visitor

    Great story!

    07/07/2025 00:05

  • Visitor

    love this story so far!

    07/06/2025 06:47

  • Visitor

    amazing

    06/28/2025 20:40

  • Visitor

    I love the story so far

    06/25/2025 22:03

  • Visitor

    i like it, great story

    06/22/2025 05:04

  • Visitor

    great story so far,

    06/07/2025 11:01

  • Visitor

    very interesting book,

    06/07/2025 00:44

  • Visitor

    I did read this book and it is very interesting, I doesn't drag and it doesn't have alot of pages, I really liked it

    06/04/2025 19:44

  • Lobbeke

    Even though there are some mix-ups with names, the storyline is very nice! loved reading this!

    06/04/2025 18:47

  • Visitor

    This is awful, and basically unreadable. I tried. I really did. But the author doesn't even know their own character names; the male lead is a man child who is somehow deemed worthy to be the best person to be the next king of the alphas; NOBODY actually communicates, which is a terrible way to lead; and now manboy is taking credit for Lola's personal growth? ("I forced her to grow.") Wow. I guess emotionally abusing your mate is a good thing, huh? Maybe he'll become King of the Alphas and kill off the whole race. He's certainly killed it for me. Seriously, don't waste your time. One other thing: I reread this comment before I posted it, found a typo, and FIXED it. The author should be strongly encouraged to do the same.

    05/28/2025 17:25

  • Visitor

    I liked the story but can't read anymore, the mix up of names is to annoying, And that to the fact that the story changed between the characters at the beginning.

    04/14/2025 02:54

  • Visitor

    Too immaturely written, reads like a child has written this..... can do so much better cause it's a good story

    04/01/2025 09:59

  • Sharron Dinsmore

    please please please settle on names!!!

    02/06/2025 21:52

  • Visitor

    I hate this fls who doesn't speak the whole truth

    12/02/2024 01:19

  • Tammay H

    Ok so it got a lil intense!! lol had to take a breather !!! Now let's see what those bums want and what they get and how it's handled!!! (Lol I am rambling)

    10/20/2024 01:53