THE CURSED LUNA Comments

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The story is all over the place. Nothing makes sense. This story could have potential but it does not make sense. The info provided is all over the place. I had to stop because I just could not make sense of anything. Too bad because the story could be good if a lot of information is added to explain certain things and if the story lines were kept consistant. One minute she is adddessed as Luna at Axel’s pack and the next she is a stranger but we are not told when he actually made her Luna.