My New Life Comments

  • Visitor

    i think i love the story,but it is so poorly written. i'm nt english but this gives me headache. i won't continue, sorry

    05/15/2025 13:05
  • Visitor

    Good book, great story idea, HORRIBLE editing! This book needs so much in the way of editing. I’m not even an English major and I’m getting a headache from trying to make sense of the grammatical and punctuation errors.

    05/15/2025 10:16