My New Life Comments
Heather Hudson
I feel like there's a lot of inconsistency. First, her heart condition was fake caused by grandfather poisoning her chair, but later she needed surgeries to fix her heart. She remembered all the pain from being drugged and ra*ed at 17, but later she couldn't remember anything after her 12th birthday. Her next attack being ra*Ed and burned wasn't mentioned until later when she's going through surgeries and therapy, but she has a daughter she's been raising but not mentioned until she was 2?
01/17/2026 13:57
Visitor
umm when did she get burned and mask on and can’t see right. when did this happened? Im confused 😵💫
05/29/2025 01:50
Visitor
is it just me or is the story all over the place. wasn’t the mother dead from a fire? so many betrayals and confusion going on 😫🤨
05/28/2025 17:42
Visitor
i think i love the story,but it is so poorly written. i'm nt english but this gives me headache. i won't continue, sorry
05/15/2025 13:05
Visitor
Good book, great story idea, HORRIBLE editing! This book needs so much in the way of editing. I’m not even an English major and I’m getting a headache from trying to make sense of the grammatical and punctuation errors.
05/15/2025 10:16