My New Life Comments
Visitor
umm when did she get burned and mask on and can’t see right. when did this happened? Im confused 😵💫
05/29/2025 01:50Visitor
is it just me or is the story all over the place. wasn’t the mother dead from a fire? so many betrayals and confusion going on 😫🤨
05/28/2025 17:42Visitor
i think i love the story,but it is so poorly written. i'm nt english but this gives me headache. i won't continue, sorry
05/15/2025 13:05Visitor
Good book, great story idea, HORRIBLE editing! This book needs so much in the way of editing. I’m not even an English major and I’m getting a headache from trying to make sense of the grammatical and punctuation errors.
05/15/2025 10:16