Omega Bound Comments

  • Visitor

    In what universe do female werewolves NOT mark their mate?!? Having read werewolf books/novels for years, mates always mark each other.

    07/04/2025 22:06

  • Veronica White

    I just edited 10 chapters and submitted them to the platforms editor. If you point out any errors after the chapter "Reminder" it isn't as helpful as it would be before the chapter "Reminder." I know it is frustrating finding the errors, but I am frustrated as well learning the chapters are not edited prior to appearing on the platforms.

    07/04/2025 14:46

  • Presu 1215

    nice

    07/04/2025 10:59

  • Veronica White

    Will somebody NOT reading Lia's Redemption please do me a favor and read the about the book section (I don't know what it is called on each platform on how the layout is) and tell me if it is written well to draw the reader in or if I should change it. I am trying to get it seen and wrestled with not revealing too much about the book early because of the plot change. I wanted it to be unexpected and had difficult trying to work around that when describing the book. If you are reading it, you can also give me your opinion if I should change it and/or change it to talk more of Kane without with/wo revealing first major plot change. Thanks!

    07/04/2025 00:31

  • Linese Thompson

    so far so good...can't put it down.

    07/03/2025 20:30

  • Shanda Hernandez

    enjoying books so far

    07/03/2025 13:10

  • Visitor

    "underserving" should be 'undeserving?

    07/03/2025 05:55

  • Visitor

    around my waist - not "waste"

    07/03/2025 04:59

  • Visitor

    ...scraping - NOT "scrapping"

    07/03/2025 01:36

  • Visitor

    love the book so far

    07/02/2025 21:22

  • Visitor

    "...it alot to take in" S/B "...'it's'

    07/02/2025 20:59

  • Visitor

    around HERE - not "her"

    07/02/2025 20:23

  • Visitor

    rouse herself. NOT "arouse"

    07/02/2025 19:55

  • Visitor

    rouse herself NIT "aruse"

    07/02/2025 19:54

  • Visitor

    like it

    07/02/2025 07:14

  • Visitor

    S/B "can't" NOT "can" be ignored...

    07/02/2025 00:10

  • Veronica White

    2025-07-02 Somethings I am addressing related to comments: This book is not finished. I write a chapter and click to submit, then it shows up on the platform. This book is an omegaverse plot with wolf shifters. The heats are omegaverse type heats (lost in lust, begging for an alpha knot whether it is willing or not because of their biology) vs regular werewolf shifter heats. Omegaverse alpha/omega dynamics are different from shifter romance dynamics. However, omegaverses are usually RH's and this one is not due to the size of Thane's...ehem...knot. It is difficult to understand how Ayla can allow Thane to do the things they do together early on without understanding that omega's behave differently/bodies react differently when they are in the presence of an alpha. Had this plot not been an omegaverse trope, the omega would probably be the weak, bottom of the pack shifter in the old school werewolf romance and I didn't want that for her. Also, Della sucks.

    07/02/2025 00:04

  • Visitor

    What make Thane think Aylas brain is "little"? Even if he thinks that just because she hasn't verbalize words, her notes and texts should be enough to prove her intelligence. Give credit to the female protagonist!

    07/01/2025 19:23

  • Chantel Van wyk

    Great story so far, I am definitely hooked and so into the story!

    07/01/2025 19:20

  • Visitor

    "...around 'her'..." S/B "here"

    07/01/2025 18:46

  • Visitor

    Am really enjoying the book, however the goddess/moon goddess is never mentioned, just fate/fates. This is the only werewolf story I've ever read that doesn't mention the Moon Goddess...that's truly my only issue in this story. Everything else has been really good!

    07/01/2025 18:20

  • Visitor

    I honestly didn't think I would like this book but it's really good and the fact we have a funny guy name Cyrus makes better 😂

    07/01/2025 12:34

  • Veronica White

    not going to lie, sometimes it takes me a while to upload some of these chapters because I read it to myself so I can laugh at Cyrus............

    06/30/2025 22:55

  • Veronica White

    Update will take longer since I need to write two chapters for Lia's redemption to make the monthly writing requirement and technically none for this story. I know, it sucks. Just give me a hot minute. Because it is TOO DAMN HOT OUTSIDE. It's actually only 83 but that 98% humidity..........ew.

    06/30/2025 20:21

  • Visitor

    Great story so far. Looking forward to reading more of it.

    06/30/2025 17:38

  • MonstersCallMeMama

    literally so good. 10 out of 10 recommend to a friend. you’ll laugh, you’ll cry and you’ll laugh more whilst enjoy lots of spice 🌶️ 🌶️ ✨

    06/30/2025 13:15

  • Visitor

    I think that Ayla is his mate. Poor thing had been thru hell

    06/30/2025 11:41

  • Veronica White

    I am considering the start of the new character POV book 3, in the Omega Bound Series and I am considering Lia's Redemption is officially starting book 2 today. They will all be in the same book. It's just easier for everyone reading.

    06/29/2025 18:50

  • Visitor

    nice one

    06/29/2025 18:08

  • Veronica White

    I have a family reunion this morning and then I will try and edit a few chapters before updating. I think I am edited only up to the first pack ceremony. so like 100 more chapters ago. #lessonlearned

    06/28/2025 12:44

  • Veronica White

    I'm considering Lia going to Kane's pack the end of book 1 and the start of book 2 in this series.

    06/28/2025 12:29

  • Visitor

    very good book!!

    06/28/2025 05:03

  • Veronica White

    I am working on my updates but it is taking longer due my wolf excursion today.

    06/28/2025 01:58

  • Veronica White

    took my littles to a traveling wolf pack at the fair. Pheonix had to be shown first....beautiful alpha...tri colored........lone wolf because the alpha female of the wolf pack won't accept him and I don't know why because he was waaaay cuter than the other wolfs she had in her pack and way more personable. Gave me another book idea...hahahahha

    06/27/2025 23:40

  • Visitor

    very good book. can’t wait to find out what happens next

    06/27/2025 14:02

  • Visitor

    it was super captivating, the emotions are tangible. it captures you and get you hooked

    06/27/2025 06:58

  • Veronica White

    FYI I researched female stalker characteristics before the last chapter and the line: “I will use your kidney for sushi and your finger bones as chopsticks.” was written from one woman to a man she had one date with. like 150,000 texts after one date....so della could have been worse......but she still's carazay.

    06/26/2025 20:42

  • Veronica White

    Dear: @lynn asian baby girl. The moderator of the three reddit forums, The person lying on the internet and saying that my story is finished, the person that is posting links to another website to my story with a changed title, The person profiting off my book, and the person who blocked me because I called you out..... I found you and turned you into the attorneys for copyright infringement.

    06/26/2025 12:59

  • Visitor

    good reading

    06/26/2025 07:50

  • Veronica White

    Sorry, i had planned to get my chapters done early but i found my story pirated all over the web on other platforms with a name change.

    06/25/2025 19:08

  • Visitor

    im going to try

    06/25/2025 15:14

  • Elizabeth Hill

    👍

    06/24/2025 22:36

  • Veronica White

    I'm researching y'all......hahahahha....#darcy in “The Female Stalker” studied 143 cases, gathered from law enforcement, prosecutorial, and entertainment corporate security files, using the definition of stalking behavior as “two or more unwanted contacts by a subject toward a target that created a reasonable fear in that target.” They describe the typical female stalker as a single woman in her mid-30s, either divorced or separated, who has a psychiatric diagnosis, most frequently a mood disorder. Unlike the stereotype of female stalkers perpetuated by the media, they point out that in fact, she is more likely to pursue a celebrity, stranger, or male acquaintance, rather than a prior sexual partner. They note, however, that the existence of a prior relationship with the victim, whether sexually intimate or as an acquaintance, significantly increased the frequency of violence and threats.

    06/24/2025 22:31

  • Visitor

    I absolutely am loving this book. the characters each have their own strengths and weaknesses and the plot is terrifyingly terrific

    06/24/2025 17:30

  • Visitor

    this book has held my interest so far

    06/23/2025 22:05

  • Visitor

    does thanr and alya have a hea

    06/23/2025 20:39

  • Veronica White

    My second story updated uploaded incorrectly. I apologize for the confusion and I'm waiting on the company editor to delete it.

    06/23/2025 05:54

  • Veronica White

    fun fact. I can write assholes in the comments, and it isn't flagged by the company for 'sensitive words' but I can't write s-t-u-p-i-d

    06/22/2025 23:32

  • Veronica White

    Some thoughts going through the comments: 1. Thane does admit he is s-t-u-p-i-d for not seeing the clues about his tie to Ayla. 2. Thane's sister is DEAD not cw tv dead, where everyone on the show can come back alive several times, but...dead dead. I am exploring something along these lines as a plot twist...may be this book or my second or none at all...not sure yet. 3.I may have started to seggsy time between Thane and Ayla too early in the book, but apparently, I was in my horndog feelings early since it wasn't planned. Actually, very little of this book has been. 4. I'm not a writer. I'm pretending to be. ITS MY FIRST TIME WRITING ANYTHING SINCE 2003 and that was a college essay. Please, give me a break. THIS IS MY FIRST BOOK. My second is up and probably has issues. If I find out my favorite book on these platforms wasn't finished by the author (it was abandoned a long time ago. werewolf heartsong I think) due to assholes, I would totally understand now.

    06/22/2025 23:31

  • Joan Osaretin Dottie

    This book has a suspenseful vibe to it and makes you want to keep reading. You just do not know what comes next.

    06/22/2025 21:23

  • Visitor

    This book is wonderful! Great details and amazing story. You can really see it happening as you read.

    06/22/2025 21:02

  • Veronica White

    When I tell you I panicked because I remembered Ayla's birthday is in June (17th) and I missed writing her birthday party........I had the whole chapter in my head and why it was a late party then I remembered it is winter in their world. Someone remind me later.

    06/22/2025 20:54

  • Visitor

    wonderful wording and great flow. very intriguing

    06/22/2025 13:40

  • Visitor

    starting off on a great foot. a lot of people don’t have the capacity to write like this!

    06/22/2025 05:02

  • Kitty Sedam

    very good piece of art. keep up the good work.

    06/22/2025 04:29

  • Jordon Liebert

    very good!!! edit as she tugs at my hair not are hair

    06/20/2025 23:44

  • Amanda

    this book is forsure a great read !! love the humor in this book and how it goes from hot a steamy to extremely funny to action. Great job !!!

    06/20/2025 14:04

  • user2505274893

    Is very intriguing and interesting too stop reading.

    06/20/2025 04:01

  • Visitor

    just started this book an am enjoying it so far.

    06/19/2025 21:13

  • Visitor

    so far so good

    06/19/2025 03:37

  • Caroline

    loving this story can't wait to read more

    06/18/2025 16:12

  • Veronica White

    I have now used translate to respond to comments in 9 different languages. TOO CRAZY! Never imagined....

    06/17/2025 22:57

  • Visitante

    me encanta

    06/17/2025 18:33

  • Yahav Aripol

    honestly such a good book, keeps you wanting more each chapter. love it

    06/17/2025 10:47

  • Visitor

    I love this story, been absolutely binge reading it and now I’ve caught up! Can’t wait to continue!

    06/17/2025 05:18

  • Visitor

    intriguing so far

    06/16/2025 20:35

  • Visitor

    Amazing character interactions.

    06/16/2025 19:09

  • Visitor

    interesting so far can't wait to read more

    06/16/2025 13:34

  • Visitor

    good book so far, hope Ayla kicks Dallas ass at some point

    06/15/2025 23:24

  • Visitor

    love this book, I keep wanting to read more

    06/15/2025 21:06

  • Veronica White

    my updates will be late because of fathers day.

    06/15/2025 20:04

  • Visitor

    Enjoying it so far. Hoping for Ayla's wolf to return soon and to get more of her backstory

    06/15/2025 16:50

  • Visitor

    just love the book it seems we having a alpha omega mate bond

    06/15/2025 14:00

  • Emily Good

    I am loving this!

    06/14/2025 17:04

  • Visitor

    ❤️

    06/14/2025 09:53

  • Visitor

    i love love cyrus, im finding myself laughing out loud almost everytime he says something

    06/13/2025 21:06

  • Visitor

    I love this book ❤️❤️❤️

    06/13/2025 19:23

  • Karen Beene Wise

    I love it so far

    06/13/2025 15:48

  • Veronica White

    My book updates will be later this evening.

    06/13/2025 13:27

  • Jennifer Suess

    really good writing

    06/13/2025 06:57

  • Visitor

    phenomenally thought out. fluid. fast paced and edgy

    06/13/2025 05:02

  • Visitor

    good

    06/13/2025 01:44

  • Visitor

    a really nice book

    06/13/2025 00:07

  • Emelie Frisk

    a really good book

    06/12/2025 23:09

  • Visitor

    love this! I can’t stop reading!

    06/12/2025 18:35

  • Visitor

    I am truly looking forward to continue reading your story. I can honestly say you are a great and amazing writer and I truly enjoy reading your book so far. your story is very well written and I love It so far. im falling in love with the characters! keep up the great work and I look forward to keep reading your story! 😀

    06/12/2025 02:05

  • Veronica White

    Author notes while editing: 1. Proof reading in the evening while I've had my bedtime "gummy vitamin" really was a horrible idea. 2. I apologize.

    06/12/2025 00:22

  • Veronica White

    As I'm editing the story from the beginning, I think it is important to remember that: 1.Thane has NEVER had a relationship 2. He's broken and hurting/suppressing his grief and self-medicating with booze before Ayla (I know, not typical in a shifter story) 3. He is developing as a character as he helps Ayla through his trauma 4. All of the characters are growing for the better with each other, but it doesn't start off that way.

    06/11/2025 23:57

  • Veronica White

    Attention: if you are looking for a wolf book that does not have a modern spin. (think fantasy with amenities but no cars phones etc.) I have Lia's Redemption. It starts slow with world building and quick spice buuuuuttttt that first plot twist is a big one. That is all.

    06/11/2025 19:37

  • Bezoeker

    Just starting with this book i'm at chapter 8 and i can't wait to see what will happen

    06/11/2025 19:02

  • Veronica White

    I have officially been approved to have my word count limit lifted. So now I can actually edit my chapters and I don't have to conform to their suggested word count.

    06/11/2025 15:46

  • Deneene L Krehlik

    your mole is Della... you weren't around her a lot

    06/11/2025 15:33

  • Deneene L Krehlik

    notices her scent hours after she left?.. but didn't know she was behind him when she walked in? ... not his mate... still think its a set up

    06/11/2025 02:52

  • Visitor

    just atarted reading today and I am really liking the book so far. good story line and easy to follow. keep up the good work. thank you!!

    06/10/2025 22:36

  • Deneene L Krehlik

    your chapters are like a skipping record... there are missing sentences and in getting confused as to where we are in the conversations... need to proof read please!

    06/10/2025 18:57

  • Visitor

    can't wait to continue reading this book it is really good so far. really enjoying the story line

    06/10/2025 18:09

  • Visitor

    just started this book but so far so good can't wait to read it all

    06/10/2025 18:07

  • Visitor

    Hooked ,can not wait to start next chapter.. good job done!!

    06/10/2025 17:35

  • Veronica White

    1. I have started the process of thoroughly editing the story. If you have been reading and following the story for a while, you know that I was under the impression that the editor the platform gave me was editing after I submitted to chapter. I was not aware that it went straight to the platforms. 2.You would also be aware that I comment daily that I can't go back and edit because they put a word count on me and it would cause the excess words in my earlier chapters to roll over into their own chapters, thus affecting people that unlock chapters. 3. I put in to be exempt from the word count limits but I can't take the daily comments about the editing. So, I'm starting the process then they have to be reviewed by the editor and changed. I think it is only three times a week they approve the changes. 4. No need to comment after each chapter that you don't like it. It just isn't the story for you. Find another.

    06/10/2025 14:58

  • Nicole Wheeler

    only read a few chapters and im hooked, love your writing skills. can't wait to see how it ends

    06/10/2025 10:18
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