Omega Bound Comments
Jennifer Suess
really good writing
06/13/2025 06:57
Visitor
phenomenally thought out. fluid. fast paced and edgy
06/13/2025 05:02Visitor
good
06/13/2025 01:44Visitor
a really nice book
06/13/2025 00:07Emelie Frisk
a really good book
06/12/2025 23:09Visitor
love this! I can’t stop reading!
06/12/2025 18:35Visitor
I am truly looking forward to continue reading your story. I can honestly say you are a great and amazing writer and I truly enjoy reading your book so far. your story is very well written and I love It so far. im falling in love with the characters! keep up the great work and I look forward to keep reading your story! 😀
06/12/2025 02:05Veronica White
Author notes while editing: 1. Proof reading in the evening while I've had my bedtime "gummy vitamin" really was a horrible idea. 2. I apologize.
06/12/2025 00:22Veronica White
As I'm editing the story from the beginning, I think it is important to remember that: 1.Thane has NEVER had a relationship 2. He's broken and hurting/suppressing his grief and self-medicating with booze before Ayla (I know, not typical in a shifter story) 3. He is developing as a character as he helps Ayla through his trauma 4. All of the characters are growing for the better with each other, but it doesn't start off that way.
06/11/2025 23:57Veronica White
Attention: if you are looking for a wolf book that does not have a modern spin. (think fantasy with amenities but no cars phones etc.) I have Lia's Redemption. It starts slow with world building and quick spice buuuuuttttt that first plot twist is a big one. That is all.
06/11/2025 19:37Bezoeker
Just starting with this book i'm at chapter 8 and i can't wait to see what will happen
06/11/2025 19:02Veronica White
I have officially been approved to have my word count limit lifted. So now I can actually edit my chapters and I don't have to conform to their suggested word count.
06/11/2025 15:46Deneene L Krehlik
your mole is Della... you weren't around her a lot
06/11/2025 15:33Deneene L Krehlik
notices her scent hours after she left?.. but didn't know she was behind him when she walked in? ... not his mate... still think its a set up
06/11/2025 02:52Visitor
just atarted reading today and I am really liking the book so far. good story line and easy to follow. keep up the good work. thank you!!
06/10/2025 22:36Deneene L Krehlik
your chapters are like a skipping record... there are missing sentences and in getting confused as to where we are in the conversations... need to proof read please!
06/10/2025 18:57Visitor
can't wait to continue reading this book it is really good so far. really enjoying the story line
06/10/2025 18:09Visitor
just started this book but so far so good can't wait to read it all
06/10/2025 18:07Visitor
Hooked ,can not wait to start next chapter.. good job done!!
06/10/2025 17:35Veronica White
1. I have started the process of thoroughly editing the story. If you have been reading and following the story for a while, you know that I was under the impression that the editor the platform gave me was editing after I submitted to chapter. I was not aware that it went straight to the platforms. 2.You would also be aware that I comment daily that I can't go back and edit because they put a word count on me and it would cause the excess words in my earlier chapters to roll over into their own chapters, thus affecting people that unlock chapters. 3. I put in to be exempt from the word count limits but I can't take the daily comments about the editing. So, I'm starting the process then they have to be reviewed by the editor and changed. I think it is only three times a week they approve the changes. 4. No need to comment after each chapter that you don't like it. It just isn't the story for you. Find another.
06/10/2025 14:58Nicole Wheeler
only read a few chapters and im hooked, love your writing skills. can't wait to see how it ends
06/10/2025 10:18Bezoeker
this story is getting better and better with every chapter
06/10/2025 09:45Visitor
I am only a few chapters in but so far I can not wait to see what happens next.
06/09/2025 18:32Visitor
love it so far. can't wait to read more
06/08/2025 15:56Visitor
love it so far. wouldn't be good if Ayla was the alphas mate
06/08/2025 13:36Visitor
it's a spicy romance novel duh of course there's spicy sex
06/08/2025 09:19Visitor
Really enjoying this! Very sad topic but feeling hopeful for a happy story
06/07/2025 20:30Veronica White
***WARNING THIS IS A DARK, SPICY BOOK. DARK ROMANCE WITH PLOT. DARK. CHECK YOUR TRIGGERS***
06/07/2025 19:11Veronica White
IF you are looking for another read to fill in the gaps of OB, I have a second story started called "Lia's Redemption." It builds slowly but I just threw out a plot twist that had one reader commenting: "What the hell did I just read?!?" :)
06/07/2025 02:03Daniëlle van Eijk
awsome
06/06/2025 22:57Veronica White
I submit the chapter as soon as I write it and it is immediately sent to the five platforms that it is on. It will take me a while in between chapters to upload if I write more than one.
06/06/2025 21:43Veronica White
sorry the update took so long. the company's servers were down, and we couldn't upload!
06/06/2025 01:31Visitor
So far so good! I do wish dialogue was formatted a bit differently, but the story itself has my attention for sure. I am looking forward to seeing what happens.
06/05/2025 18:17Visitor
So far I'm only 9 chapters in and I'm already hooked!
06/05/2025 03:40Veronica White
I am trying to write today's chapter, but it is making me cry!
06/04/2025 20:30Cami Zink
I think it's an alright book so far we will see how it turns out
06/04/2025 12:28Veronica White
I'm mouring with ya'll and I wrote it!
06/03/2025 22:14Veronica White
I was going to do another chapter today, but I was almost done with one and I shut my laptop and it didn't save and auto save was off and I can't find it and I am too mad and disgusted to attempt to write it over right now.
06/02/2025 22:58Veronica White
Trying something new with a dual pov chapter because my brain changed the pov twice and I got tired of trying to fix it so apparently it is supposed to go down like this!
06/02/2025 21:45Visitor
very good book keeps me reading eagerly to find out what is going to happen next. love the caricature
05/29/2025 22:09Visitor
Really good read. Slow paced enough that you're not rushing through the story but not too slow that it's boring. Love this
05/29/2025 20:10Visitor
This book is amazing I cannot get enough of it.
05/29/2025 05:10Veronica White
I am going to try and update today. I have my daughter's 8th birthday party.
05/25/2025 17:46Rebecca McGrath
absolutely loving this.. has the right amount of everything in it. cant wait to read more.
05/24/2025 11:07Veronica White
FYI The company has initiated word limits for the chapters which is why I no longer do 1500-1800 word counts but I have no idea if my earlier chapters have a few paragraphs from each one that roll over into their own chapter because of the word limits. I apologize for the inconvenience and frustrations.
05/19/2025 22:18Veronica White
I found several issues with the larry's chapt. I submitted it to be fixed
05/17/2025 19:37Veronica White
Be sure to check out my new book on the Apps. It is called "Lia's Redemption."
05/16/2025 03:13Veronica White
Sorry my update is taking longer today. I started re-reading ACOTAR *insert laughing emoji*
05/14/2025 00:23Veronica White
The new book I am working on is now on the apps. Check out Lia's Redemption!
05/12/2025 18:14Veronica White
I will probably be unable to load chapters Saturday as I am a maid of honor in a wedding and will be gone all day, but I will try!
05/02/2025 17:30Veronica White
It has come to my attention that my Pen Name is also used by another Author that has written a lot of Karma Sutra books. We are not the same. Sorry!
04/28/2025 17:57Veronica White
Happy easter
04/20/2025 23:10
