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Bang-lish [1/2] [+ 2nd draft 09]

I felt the tickling of my eyelashes fluttering against my cheeks and the burn on my lower lip as I bit down hard.

"I can't get comfortable with you moving like that," Ethan spoke softly.

I stilled my gyrating hips instantly, not realizing I'd even been moving. It wasn't easy either. Every time he breathed against me, my heart felt like it was trying to escape through my rib cage and my thighs trembled to keep from clenching around his head. He hadn't even removed my underwear yet. If this continued, anticipation would be the culprit that killed me.

I watched as Seth moved towards Ethan, the subtle crisp pine scent of his cologne making me wiggle slightly in pleasure as he passed by like a feline about to pounce. He slipped his hand through Ethan's rumpled golden hair as he continued onwards. I pushed myself up; wanting to see where it was Seth was going and almost fell back down from my trembling. I managed to lock my elbows before falling and tilted my head to the side, my eyes following Seth as he straddled Ethan's lower back. Ethan's jaw clenched and he almost shut his eyes at the added weight against him. The position was surprisingly pleasant, Ethan's head between my thighs and Seth straddling Ethan's ass. I let out a breath and cautiously reached forward, touching the back of Ethan's head and applying just enough pressure to get him to focus again on me.

He smiled up at me and placed a kiss over my underwear. When his tongue dipped into the material, pushing between the folds of my pussy lips, my eyes crossed.

"Oh God," I whimpered but resisted the urge to close my eyes. I wanted to see what Seth was going to do to Ethan.

When Seth made a wiggling motion, Ethan dropped his flushed, burning cheek against my inner thigh, his hot breathing making me ache with need. He slid his arms beneath my hips and the bed, and held me tight, hugging me. His mewling and gentle jerking caused vibrations that hit my core and made me too curious. I had to ask. I needed to know.

"What are you doing?" I asked Seth as he reached for the back of Ethan's head.

I inhaled sharply as Seth shifted Ethan's face so that his mouth was hovering above my panties. My elbows shook, but I managed to stay upright. I glanced down the small space between my body and Ethan's, watching Seth's hand stroking Ethan's hair while still applying enough pressure so that his nose rested against me. When Ethan stayed still, I watch Seth's nimble fingers tugging at Ethan's jeans.

"Just taking his pants off," Seth said, with a teasing wolf-like grin aimed at me, but then his gaze shifted to Ethan's bareback and his grin turned almost sinister. "Remember Ethan, if you stop, I stop."

Ethan bared his teeth in a growl that vibrated against me. Whatever it was Seth was doing, Ethan was fully enjoying it. I couldn't help the niggling need making its way through my body, demanding I get a better view so I could watch them, but as I went to move, Ethan's hands grabbed my upper thighs so tightly his fingernails dug into me. I cringed slightly but remained still as he pushed me open more and pushed the tiny cloth of my underwear aside.

"It's a lot like a French kiss," Seth said in a gentle whisper against Ethan's ear.

Ethan snorted. "I'm not completely stupid."

"What?" I asked, suddenly having trouble breathing. I'd been so involved with the subtle movements Seth was making against Ethan and, of course, his mouth so close to my lady parts that I hadn't noticed they'd been talking.

"Then what's the hold-up?" Seth asked, ignoring my breathy question.

Ethan turned his head, letting the corner of his mouth play up into a smirk, but he didn't say anything as he lifted my legs and rested them against his wide shoulders. "Whoa," I said, shivering from the contact.

I swallowed holding my breath with anticipation as his mouth hovered, but he didn't move. The smirk on his face as his eyes darted up did me in. I collapsed and my upper body dropped against the warming sheets like a ragdoll. I spread my arms out on either side of me in limped disbelief.

I couldn't believe it. What a douche! "Would you stop teasing me?"

"This isn't teasing. If I was teasing, I'd start from the top and work my way down again," Ethan said. "Hmm, sounds like a good idea now that I think about it. It'll be a punishment of sorts, for your impatience."

It took a second for that warning to sink in, but when it did my hands shot forward, clutching Ethan's hair. "No! Please. Ethan. I won't be impatient anymore. I'll be good. Just..." I paused and gritted my teeth and pushed my hand into my stomach. "Please."

"Hmm, Ethan, you're teasing me too. I've dreamed about this moment and you are spreading it out. If you're gonna continue being such a naughty boy, I'll have to go get the whip."

Oh fuck. I was overstimulated, so while I still made a show of begging I knew my body was thankful for the rest after the large electric jolt shot threw me from Seth's warning. I wanted to see them in their element. The image started a chain reaction and a wildfire of burning seared through me. I needed Ethan's mouth on me and his tongue inside me. I lifted my head to give them a pleading, lost look. Starting from the beginning would kill me for sure. It was just cruel unusual punishment at this point.

"I think you can take pity on her, Ethan. Just remember Cassie, when it's your turn to give him a blow job not to just dive in. Tease him mercilessly," Seth said.

A wet heat flooded between my legs and I bit my lip as it dripped down. Giving a man a blowjob had been the better part of my fantasies, which usually involved him sitting on my chest, and the idea that I might be able to try it soon lit my core even more.

I nodded furiously. "Yeah, when it's my turn to blow you I'm gonna make you suffer so bad-" My warning cut off as I felt the tip of Ethan's wet tongue dart between my hot swollen pussy lips. When he pulled away I almost sobbed from the loss. "God, yes, that's what I want!"

"It's not about the suffering," Ethan said softly, sounding slightly miffed. "I wouldn't make you suffer, Cassie."

Yeah right!

"Ethan..." The dramatic drawling of his name from Seth pushed Ethan forward. Or rather Seth pushed Ethan's head down further between my legs once again.

And suddenly, as he placed gentle, sucking kisses against me, I felt like I was in the middle of running a marathon. My chest was heaving from exertion that hadn't happened. And I had no clue what to do with my hands. So I settled them lower on my stomach than they had been, making the tips of my fingers brush against the curve of my Heart Attack cut.

"Watch her," Seth said. He spoke with such husky force and volume that it startled a tiny yelp out of me and caused my thighs to tighten around Ethan's head.

I quickly slackened the pressure and glanced down worriedly, knowing my face was red like blood and spreading down to my chest. "Sorry," I whispered.

He didn't bother with a response as he thrust his face into me so that his tongue could slip through the wet folds and his nose could bump against my clit. 'More' was the only thought in my mind as my eyes rolled to the back of my head and I struggled to stay still. I pushed my palms down and up, letting the pressure intensify the feeling of him licking me.

My hand lifted of its own accord, leaving its mate behind still resting on my hip, applying pressure, and before I knew what I was doing, I dropped it on top of his soft, fluffy hair. That very hair was currently tickling the insides of my thighs as he started French kissing me between my legs.

He had to be a pro. He had to be. It wouldn't feel so fucking good otherwise. My hand clenched in his hair as his nose hit my clit again. A muffled whimper vibrated in my throat as he did it again, causing my hips to pump forward.

"That's it." Seth's voice was so much deeper than before that my eyes popped open and I lifted my head to watch them. "Oh fuck, do you see it in her eyes? She's feeling it."

I wanted to talk dirty too. I loved it and Seth's words had a slew of them forming in my head, but I couldn't get the breath to say any of them. All I could do was bite my lip and pant like a bitch in heat. The faint smell of musk and sex only seemed to get me hotter, and I couldn't tell if it was the scent or the sound of him sucking my clit that did me in. I caved and lifted my other hand to his head, trying not to grip his hair too tightly.

I screamed when he pulled away and pushed his tongue inside me. How I had the lung capacity to scream was beyond me because my chest was burning from the lack of oxygen. I could not catch my breath. It wasn't helping that Ethan would flatten his tongue out inside me then switch to a darting spear.

"Your hand!" It was all I could manage and thankfully Ethan understood. He kept his tongue pushing in and out of me, but lifted his hand, managing to part my lips so that he could rub my clit with his thumb.

My neck arched backward and my mouth dropped open wanting to emit the scream that was threatening to escape, but no sound came out. My stomach and hips rippled, almost like I was belly dancing against Ethan's mouth, all the while pulling him closer.

"That's so fucking hot," Seth growled and before I knew it, he left Ethan and crawled to me, swooping down, capturing my lips in a smoldering kiss. My eyes widened and my back arched instinctually, pushing my head up so that I could kiss him deeper.

I darted my tongue out, touching the tip of it to his, only to have him grunt in approval. His hands came up, cupping my head, and pulling up at the same time so that my breasts brushed against his chest. Seth was lifting me off the bed, so I slipped up Ethan's face. I muffled my protests against Seth but stopped when Ethan followed my hips. His hands slipped under my ass, pulling me tighter into his face as he sucked and thrust at the same time.

I was suffocating, breathing so heavily I couldn't see how the kiss had managed to last so long. I had to breathe, so I jerked my head away. He let me pull my lips from his face, but Seth held me close still. His warm breath came in short staccatos against my cheek as he watched me, his forehead resting against mine. The swiveling in my hips was frantic in an attempt to orgasm. It was to the point where I couldn't decide if it was Ethan fucking me with his tongue, or me fucking his tongue.

Seth, still holding my head in place, forced me to make eye contact with him as he brushed his nose against mine, "Are you close?" he asked, his hot, peppermint tinted breath spreading across my cheek. I captured his deliciously flavored tongue and sucked before pulling away with a quick kiss to his lips, letting out a breathless sigh as an affirmative.

At least, I thought it was close, but it was just out of my grasp. I felt like I was losing my mind and my back started to ache from all the arching it was doing. Eventually, I slipped out of Seth's clutches, falling against the bed. I noticed, as I was falling, that Ethan had been staring at us, and his eyes followed as I fell.

I could feel my frustration festering. I was so close, but I needed more. "Seth. Touch me," I said, pulling a hand from Ethan's head to guide Seth's hand to one of my breasts.

He didn't hesitate and when his calloused fingers tweaked my nipple I knew it wouldn't be much longer. I felt I couldn't stand it anymore, but then my eyes slammed shut when I felt the wetness of Seth's tongue as he replaced his teasing fingers with his mouth. One swipe, two, three and time seemed to freeze as the knot that had built in my lower back snapped. I shouted out with surprise, my voice hoarse from a lack of water and air.

This wasn't the surprisingly gentle surface orgasm I'd had earlier either. This one was deep. So powerful that my entire body shook like I was having an epileptic seizure. My hips were rolling wildly up, straining to get every last bit of its exquisiteness. I gripped Ethan's hair, pulling him, pushing him harder into me as I rode his thrusting tongue. Oh my God and fuck, fuck, fuck, were the mantras flowing off my tongue. I didn't have time for anything else. My hips were wild beneath him and his hands, which had been gripping my ass, had to slide up around my thighs, onto my midriff to hold me down because I wasn't just riding his tongue anymore, but his face.

And it was still coming.

I frantically folded my thighs around the back of Ethan's neck, locking my feet together. With my thighs and hands keeping him in place as I fucked his face, another scream erupted from my mouth as the orgasm wreaked havoc on my system.

"Oh my fucking God!"

I squealed as it shot through me, my thighs clenching against Ethan's ears. His fingers dug into my ass, slipped up towards my thighs again, and jerked away to breathe. Ethan pushed against the pressure my hands were exerting on his head and managed to fully pull away, inhaling sharply. The massive breath he took released, puffing air against my already sensitive area. It was enough to make me cry out desperately from the additional stimulation and my hips jerked up one last time, knocking into his chin, before dropping to the bed.

Shivering deeply, I was gasping for breath, while my whole body continued to twitch. All I could think, as the seemingly never-ending aftershocks jolted through me, was that if I could just get to my side I'd be able to calm down. I managed somehow to do just that, my back facing Ethan and Seth, as I lifted my legs from Ethan's shoulders and curled my knees up into my chest wrapping my arms around them, holding them tightly to me. I released a hoarse whine as another wave, not as powerful as the first, but enough to make me think it was never going to end, shot through me.

"Cassie?"

It was Ethan, but I shook my head. There was no way I could explain as whimpers spilled from my mouth and then someone touched me. "Shit," I said, crying out as the touch ignited sparks along my extremely sensitive skin. "Please don't touch me. I can't stop..." My whisper cut off and I clenched my thighs tightly together. I could just imagine the picture I made, curled in a ball, wiggling as I gasped, moaned, and panted from this pleasure trip.

"Damn. I knew your tongue was amazing, but now I'm pretty sure it's graduated to fucking spectacular," Seth said, his voice tinged with admiration. "First time I've seen such a hard orgasm outside of a porno." I heard a back slap before the edges of my vision seemed to be shifting from bright fireworks to dying stars.

I felt like warm Jell-O when Ethan bent down to lift me to his chest. I hummed in satisfaction, wrapping my arms around his neck and pointing the tips of my toes as I smiled brightly up at him.

He shook his head, a playful smirk touching his lips as he hugged me to his chest. "I gather you enjoyed that."

I snorted and wiggled my head. "Well, you gathered correctly. Are you sure you haven't done that before? My goodness..."

"I'm sure. How do you feel?" Ethan asked.

I'd never felt better or so alive. My body felt loose, relaxed—sluggish even—and I laughed my happiness. "My body is vibrating still!" I turned my head to look at Ethan. "It was so amazing, Ethan," I whispered and leaned forward to kiss him gently, desperately wanting to show him my gratitude. "Thank you."

Ethan lowered me to the bed as Seth took his position once again behind Ethan. Seth loomed over him like a dark genie come to grant me wishes. I bit my bottom lip with anticipation.

It was time.

"Are you ready?" Ethan whispered against my lips.

I raised an eyebrow. "Are you?"

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09: French kiss

Ethan bared his teeth in a growl and his eyelids fluttered. Whatever it was Seth was doing, Ethan was fully enjoying it. I couldn't help the niggling need making its way through my body, demanding I get a better view so I could watch them, but as I went to move, Ethan's hands grabbed my upper thighs so tightly his fingers dug into me. I cringed but remained still as he pushed me open more.

Full skin-to-skin contact was way better than I imagined.

"It's a lot like a French kiss," Seth said in a gentle whisper against Ethan's ear.

Ethan snorted a harrumph. "I'm not completely stupid."

"What?" I asked, suddenly having trouble breathing. I'd been so involved with Ethan's dick resting against my thigh that I hadn't noticed they'd been talking.

"Then what's the hold-up?" Seth asked, ignoring my breathy question.

Ethan turned his head, letting the corner of his mouth play up into a smirk, but he didn't say anything as he slid his naked chest against the tips of my breast. "Wh-where are you going?" I asked, shivering from the contact.

I swallowed and bit my lip as Ethan's wide shoulders forced my thighs apart, holding my breath with anticipation as his mouth hovered, but he didn't move. The smirk on his face as his eyes darted up did me in. I collapsed and my upper body dropped against the warming sheets like a ragdoll. I spread my arms out on either side of me in limped disbelief.

I couldn't believe it. What a douche! "Would you stop teasing me?"

"Since Seth interrupted, I'll have to start all over again," Ethan said, falling down to his elbows but keeping his lower body supported, in the air, on his knees.

It took a second for that warning to sink in, but when it did my hands shot forward, clutching Ethan's hair. "No! Please. Ethan. Your little kisses all over my neck and chest were great, but let's get this show on the road."

"I didn't interrupt anything. I suggested you decided, I encouraged. There was no interruption," Seth said with a pout. "You're teasing me too. Do I need to get my whip, Ethan?"

Oh fuck. I was overstimulated, so while I still made a show of begging I knew my body was thankful for the rest after the large electric jolt shot threw me from Seth's question. The wildfire burning through me was only simmering, but damn did I need his mouth on me and his tongue inside me. I lifted my head to give them a pleading, lost look. Starting from the beginning would kill me for sure. It was just cruel unusual punishment at this point.

"I think you can take pity on her, Ethan. Just remember Cassie, when it's your turn to give him a blow job not to just dive in. He likes the build-up," Seth said.

A wet heat flooded between my legs and I bit my lip as it burned through me. Giving a man a blowjob had been the better part of my fantasies, which usually involved him sitting on my chest, and the idea that I might be able to try it soon lit me to the core.

I nodded furiously. "Yeah, when it's my turn to blow you I'm gonna make you suffer so bad-" My warning cut off as I felt the tip of Ethan's wet tongue dart between my hot swollen pussy lips. When he pulled away I almost sobbed from the loss.

"It's not about the suffering," Ethan said softly, sounding slightly miffed. "I wouldn't make you suffer, Cassie."

Yeah right!

"Ethan..." The dramatic drawling of his name from Seth pushed Ethan forward. Or rather Seth pushed Ethan's head down further between my legs.

And suddenly, as he placed gentle, sucking kisses against me, I felt like I was in the middle of running a marathon. My chest was heaving from exertion that hadn't happened. And I had no clue what to do with my hands. So I settled them low on my stomach, making the tips of my fingers brush against the curve of my Heart Attack cut.

"Watch her," Seth said. He spoke with such husky force and volume that it startled a tiny yelp out of me and caused my thighs to tighten around Ethan's head.

I quickly slackened the pressure and glanced down worriedly, knowing my face was red like blood and spreading down to my chest. "Sorry," I whispered.

He didn't bother with a response as he thrust his face into me so that his tongue could slip through the wet folds and his nose could bump against my clit. 'More' was the only thought in my mind as my eyes rolled to the back of my head and I struggled to stay still. I pushed my palms down and up, letting the pressure intensify the feeling of him licking me.

My hand lifted of its own accord, leaving its mate behind still resting on my hip, applying pressure, and before I knew what I was doing, I dropped it on top of his soft, fluffy hair. That very hair was currently tickling the insides of my thighs as he literally started French kissing me between my legs.

He had to be a pro. He had to be. It wouldn't feel so fucking good otherwise. My hand clenched in his hair as his nose hit my clit again. A muffled whimper vibrated in my throat as he did it again, causing my hips to pump forward.

"That's it." Seth's voice was so much deeper than before that my eyes popped open and I lifted my head to watch them. "Oh fuck, do you see it in her eyes? She's feeling it."

I wanted to talk dirty too. I loved it and Seth's words had a slew of them forming in my head, but I couldn't get the breath to say any of them. All I could do was bite my lip and try to catch my breath. The faint smell of musk and sex only seemed to get me hotter, and I couldn't tell if it was the scent or the sound of him sucking my clit that really did me in. I caved and lifted my other hand to his head, trying not to grip his hair too tightly.

I screamed when he pulled away and pushed his tongue inside me. How I had the lung capacity to scream was beyond me because my chest was burning from the lack of oxygen. I could not catch my breath. It wasn't helping that Ethan would flatten his tongue out inside me then switch to a darting spear.

"Your hand!" It was all I could manage and thankfully Ethan understood. He kept his tongue pushing in and out of me, but lifted his hand, managing to part my lips so that he could rub my clit with his thumb.

My neck arched backward and my mouth dropped open wanting to emit the scream that was threatening to escape, but no sound came out. My stomach and hips rippled, almost like I was belly dancing against Ethan's mouth, all the while pulling him closer.

"That's so fucking hot," Seth growled and before I knew it, he'd swooped down, capturing my lips in a smoldering kiss. My eyes widened and my back arched instinctually, pushing my head up so that I could kiss him deeper.

When the hell had he moved away from Ethan?

I darted my tongue out, touching the tip of it to his, only to have him grunt in approval. His hands came up, cupping my head, and pulling up at the same time so that my breasts brushed against his shirt. Seth was literally lifting me off the bed, so I slipped up Ethan's face. I muffled my protests against Seth but stopped when Ethan followed my hips. His hands slipped under my ass, pulling me tighter into his face as he sucked and thrust at the same time.

I was suffocating, breathing so heavily I couldn't see how the kiss had managed to last so long. I had to breathe, so I jerked my head away. He let me pull my lips from his face, but Seth held me close still. His warm breath came in short staccatos against my cheek as he watched me. The swiveling in my hips was frantic in an attempt to orgasm. It was to the point where I couldn't decide if it was Ethan fucking me with his tongue, or me fucking his tongue.

Seth, still holding my head in place, forced me to make eye contact with him as he brushed his nose against mine, "Are you close?" he asked, his hot, peppermint tinted breath spreading across my cheek. I captured his deliciously flavored tongue and sucked before pulling away with a quick kiss to his lips, letting out a breathless sigh as an affirmative.

At least, I thought it was close, but it was just out of my grasp. I felt like I was losing my mind and my back started to ache from all the arching it was doing. Eventually, I slipped out of Seth's clutches, falling against the bed. I noticed, as I was falling, that Ethan had been staring at us, and his eyes followed as I fell.

I could feel my frustration festering. I was so close, but I needed more. "Seth. Touch me," I said, pulling a hand from Ethan's head to guide Seth's hand to one of my breasts.

He didn't hesitate and when his calloused fingers tweaked my nipple I knew it wouldn't be much longer. I felt I couldn't stand it anymore, but then my eyes slammed shut when I felt the wetness of Seth's tongue as he replaced his teasing fingers with his mouth. One swipe, two, three and time seemed to freeze as the knot that had built in my lower back snapped. I shouted out with surprise, my voice hoarse from a lack of water and air.

This wasn't the surprisingly gentle surface orgasm I'd had earlier either. This one was deep. So powerful, in fact, that my entire body shook like I was having an epileptic seizure. My hips were rolling wildly up, straining to get every last bit of its exquisiteness. I gripped Ethan's hair, pulling him, pushing him harder into me as I rode his thrusting tongue. Oh my God and fuck, fuck, fuck, were the mantras flowing off my tongue. I didn't have time for anything else. My hips were wild beneath him and his hands, which had been gripping my ass, had to slide up around my thighs, onto my midriff to hold me down because I wasn't just riding his tongue anymore, but his face.

And it was still coming.

I frantically folded my thighs around the back of Ethan's neck, locking my feet together. With my thighs and hands keeping him in place as I fucked his face, another scream erupted from my mouth as the orgasm wreaked havoc on my system.

"Oh my fucking God!"

I squealed as it shot through me, my thighs clenching against Ethan's ears. His fingers dug into my ass, slipped up towards my thighs again, and jerked away to breathe. Ethan pushed against the pressure my hands were exerting on his head and managed to fully pull away, inhaling sharply. The massive breath he took released, puffing air against my already sensitive area. It was enough to make me cry out desperately from the additional stimulation and my hips jerked up one last time, knocking into his chin, before dropping to the floor.

Shivering deeply, gasping for breath, while my whole body continued to twitch. All I could think, as the seemingly never-ending aftershocks jolted through me, was that if I could just get to my side I'd be able to calm down. I managed somehow to do just that, my back facing Ethan and Seth, as I lifted my legs from Ethan's shoulders and curled my knees up into my chest wrapping my arms around them, holding them tightly to me. I released a hoarse whine as another wave, not as powerful as the first, but enough to make me think it was never going to end, shot through me.

"Cassie?"

It was Ethan, but I shook my head. There was no way I could talk as whimpers spilled from my mouth and then someone touched me. "Shit," I said, crying out as the touch ignited sparks along my extremely sensitive skin. "Please don't touch me. I can't stop..." My whisper cut off and I clenched my thighs tightly together. I could just imagine the picture I made, curled in a ball, wiggling as I gasped, moaned, and panted from this pleasure trip.

"Damn. I knew your tongue was amazing, but now I'm pretty sure it's graduated to fucking spectacular," Seth said, his voice tinged with admiration. "First time I've seen such a hard orgasm outside of a porno." I heard a back slap before the edges of my vision seemed to be shifting from bright fireworks to dying stars.

I felt like warm Jell-O when Ethan bent down to lift me to his chest. I hummed in satisfaction, wrapping my arms around his neck and pointing the tips of my toes as I smiled brightly up at him.

He shook his head, a playful smirk touching his lips as he hugged me to his chest. "I gather you enjoyed that."

I snorted and wiggled my head. "Well, you gathered correctly. Are you sure you haven't done that before? My goodness..."

"I'm sure. How do you feel?" Ethan asked.

I'd never felt better or so alive. My body felt loose, relaxed—sluggish even—and I laughed my happiness. "My body is vibrating still!" I turned my head to look at Ethan. "It was so amazing Ethan," I whispered and leaned forward to kiss him gently, desperately wanting to show him my gratitude. "Thank you."

Ethan lowered me to the bed as Seth took his position once again behind Ethan. Seth loomed over him like a dark genie come to grant me wishes. I bit my bottom lip with anticipation. It was time.

"Are you ready?" Ethan whispered against my lips.

I raised an eyebrow. "Are you?"

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If you think the 2nd draft is more your style of reading, then watch out for the rest of the chapters. I'm either going to make a second book here or put the rest of the 2nd draft chapters in this story after the last update!

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