FIX ME

FIX ME

victor phronesis

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Introduction

My name is Kharis Carter. I have been experiencing torture ever since my mom passed away. My stepmom smokes, consumes hard drugs, has a nasty attitude, and pours the entirety of her frustrations on my body. Well, I was leaving for good. I planned to move to Ma Cleopatra's house, work for two years and get paid, then travel out to continue college and get a prestigious job just like most successful women. This was until I meet my new boss.
“This is Kharis Carter. She is the perfect replacement I got for you”, Ma Cleopatra said to Mr. Frederick.
For two minutes, the man didn't utter a word. I felt frustrated. Maybe, I had not escaped from torture. This man constantly belittled me the few times we met. And here I was, in his house......
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  • Essie Morgan

    what happened to the daily updates

    05/19/2022 07:17
  • Roman Glory Winifred

    no more updates?????

    05/13/2022 00:52
  • SK Tong

    04/25/2022 12:07
  • Messa Gow

    OMG this writing style is terrible. I can't get past the first few sections. It flows like a highschool creative writing project.

    04/07/2022 01:55
  • bbbw61

    Uhhh, I have a problem with the 'nigga' stuff. Who talks like that? I don't like the repetitive views; just another way to bleed the readers for more money.

    04/05/2022 00:37
  • victor phronesis

    amazing story. I love every bit of it

    03/28/2022 16:22
  • Lizzy Jasper

    nice story so far. I love it

    03/21/2022 17:13
  • kacha

    A nice story. but too much of repetition of the same lines over and over again in terms of POV which is OFF. The writer can change that habit of repetition otherwise story is awesome

    03/21/2022 16:07