My Pickpocket Luna

My Pickpocket Luna

Manyo E

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Introduction

Being the Alpha of the Red crosses Moon Pack the whole of Beedadi, Ethan Jadiel Peterson is still single without a mate. So on his twenty-fifth birthday, he wishes for his mate to be found by him and his wish actually comes to pass after an encounter with Camilla Louis Taylor who is a pickpocket.
Being a humble but fierce Alpha, he immediately notices that his mate is a pickpocket and an arrogant lady but before he could do anything more, Camilla had run off and she met with a speedy car which runs her over.
Deluding to suffer amnesia she gets into Ethan's life and house to steal in order to save her comatose dad but fate catches up with her as she ends up falling in love with him and even having one nightstand which leads to her getting pregnant but Ethan's current girlfriend is bent on sending Camilla away so she outs in so many efforts yo see that happening.
Camilla will be tortured and will almost lose her baby after finding out that her father had gone missing but will she be able to tell Ethan the whole truth before it is too late?
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  • Althea Siefert

    I've read several chapters and I just can't read any more. The translation is poor, where there are strings of words that make no sense. The incorrect use of pronouns adds even more confusion to the story. I got to chapter 7 I think and the female lead's name changed at the beginning of it, but then it continues with just pronouns. It reads as if the chapter belongs in a different story. That's when I stopped reading. The storyline has promise, but the translation really needs a lot of work in order to turn this into an enjoyable read.

    04/03/2023 19:47