Bound by Destiny with the Egyptian God
Scarlett Langley
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Introduction
Just because I glanced at the Pharaoh mask for a moment, I was imprisoned by the mummy.
I arrived at a mysterious royal palace; the coffin opened.
The mummy released its bindings, revealing a divinely handsome face.
He opened his eyes, his icy hand grasped my wrist, his gaze was both intense and shadowed:
"Don't try to escape, my dear Ankhesen Carmen."
I arrived at a mysterious royal palace; the coffin opened.
The mummy released its bindings, revealing a divinely handsome face.
He opened his eyes, his icy hand grasped my wrist, his gaze was both intense and shadowed:
"Don't try to escape, my dear Ankhesen Carmen."
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Megan Vander Pluym
I wish there had been more research done. I know that's not the purpose, but a little more research would go a long way to make this story better.
08/11/2023 10:56Hali Denenberg
The story has a lot of potential. I highly suggest using a spelling/grammar checker or enlisting a beta reader to help catch errors. You have several instances where you decided to change a word, but the original word remained and both words were joined together. Too many errors makes it hard to read.
08/09/2023 03:56Reader-998117
Sounds very original& exciting, I can't wait to read this one.
08/09/2023 00:08