Lucia was destined to spend her life with Kaden; everyone knew it as a fact. Yet, on the day of the mating ritual, he chose another woman to be his Luna, instead of his predestined mate.
Feeling rejected and humiliated, Lucia resolved to leave. The only problem was that despite not wanting her, Kaden refused to let her go. He claimed he would rather die than watch her walk away.
A mysterious man who has entered her life became her second-chance mate, will he be strong enough to protect her from Kaden's irrational behavior? Is he truly a better option? Will Lucia find acceptance in her new home?

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Patricia Carter Lee
I cant stand Sam. she deserves what she gets for being a terrible friend.
02/05/2025 22:21
Erika potter
You went from the king sobbing to her leaving bc of hurtful words. But didn't talk about what actually happened to make her leave. You have to share those details.
01/12/2025 20:06
E T
Honestly I don't think the author listen to our thoughts on the writing. They don't give time lines on how long time has pass. POV are different. Also Lucia character is really annoying Honestly. It a good boom but it is so hard to get through with these issues. Especially trying to listen to the audio
12/12/2024 15:54
Danielle Geeslin
I'm really enjoying the concept of this story. I would recommend writing the story out and editing BEFORE you post it. There are places where it seems 2 different stories are being brought together. Names of characters are being confused and changed throughout. You seem like a young/new author who has amazing writing capabilities. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WORK ON EDITING AND STORY FLOW.
11/27/2024 17:08
Visitor
I love the story but I feel this book needs some proper editing. it seems as if the author is an amateur and needs proper guidance as to how to arrange his/her thoughts on the plot in a more cohesive effort .. it's a good attempt tho....keep working on it
11/27/2024 16:43
Sarah
Amazing Story!!!I am sooo enjoy the reading!!!!!Dear Dorita, If you are still writing, please let me know where I can follow your the news of yourbooks!!!😍😍😍
11/15/2024 06:42
Mary Schluter
nice idea and story. if there was a more cohesive and straight forward timeline it might flow better? its hard to tell if its been hours or years when the scene changes and also whose talking with so many pronouns thrown around since the sames can be neutral. one more note would be to describe better if something really was a dream or not or was just a kiss bc a wild night of passion doesnt equal a kiss but seems to mean thay here? dont stop 💻🖨🖥writing its very very intresting. the main thing to work on is keeping a consistent telling of the time line please. all the best 👩‍💻
10/22/2024 02:57
Tami Thomas-Dykhuizen
am I the only one missing the last part of Chapter 13?
10/14/2024 14:11
Ben Osezua
shout out to dorita for an amazing story 😘
05/18/2024 18:39
Visitor
❣️🔥 beautiful book Dorits
03/09/2024 17:29

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