The Luna Queen Comments

  • Catherine Kimmel

    it's called a loofah not a loafer.

    01/10/2024 03:54

  • Kathy Kinsley

    It is Sarah traveling with Frederick to the witches.

    01/14/2023 17:34

  • Aneesahs

    so here parents didn't come or weren't invited?

    01/13/2023 01:15

  • Bridg Davis

    is this book a standalone?

    12/22/2022 15:35

  • Reader-139197

    are we going to ignore the fact that Daphne Rosen is the name of a pornstar? lol

    11/27/2022 21:25

  • Rebecca Farmer

    awesome story!!!

    09/08/2022 07:54

  • Mez

    Joesph Major stole the blurb and content from your book. The book is called “The Alpha’s Pet”.

    06/24/2022 22:39

  • Jennifer Kaltz

    you have Daphne and Sarah name confused in the paragraph when they are close to the border

    05/23/2022 07:54

  • Lilo Lutu

    So far I love Dwayne and how he treats Daphne. it’s very romantic

    03/10/2022 08:28

  • Audrey Fairbourn

    so I’m guessing he didn’t sleep with the imposter???

    10/22/2021 10:35

  • Tonia Strachan

    petty much

    10/17/2021 14:18

  • Mariam Metreveli

    ahhhhhhhhh next chapter is gonna be good

    10/14/2021 13:27

  • Sandra Allen

    man I'm loving this Daphne. very high spirited and I'm only in the second chapter

    10/14/2021 07:15

  • Brooke Peterson

    Well Daphne was definitely something The Apna King was not expecting haha!

    10/14/2021 04:54

  • Heather Gulli

    my

    10/14/2021 04:49

  • Kika Conner-Ramirez

    nice

    10/10/2021 22:00

  • Mary-Ann Kutu

    used a few words wrong, but nice book over all

    09/30/2021 20:25

  • anna mclaughlin

    The alpha king: Is written so good I had a difficult time putting this book down Dwayne and Daphne are the perfect team perfect couple. I love how Dwayne chooses Daphne she's so different from everybody else she is a true Luna a true leader. She is brave and courageous put through so many trials she never wished to be the alpha Kings Luna.

    09/13/2021 10:59

  • Isabella K

    Punctuation should go inside of quotes. So if you did a search for “, and replaced with ,” it’d fix a lot of those.

    09/06/2021 07:52

  • Sandra Humphries

    interesting so far.

    09/04/2021 17:22

  • Megsh826

    the phrase is “count for something” not “account for…”

    08/29/2021 13:45

  • Megsh826

    Champagne not Champaigne. 🙂

    08/29/2021 13:41

  • Leena Dees

    is this the second book?

    07/29/2021 16:36

  • Yangi Dyanga

    this book is awesome 😎 and I like it 😊😊 thanks author for writing the book 🥰🥰🥰

    07/26/2021 15:15

  • SandyJR524

    loafer = a type of shoe. Loofah is a type of body sponge. when she’s in the shower scrubbing her neck w a loafer I so confused 😂😂😂

    06/16/2021 07:08

  • Bella Jersey 2

    dear lord better buckle up and have iv fluids on stand by and the kitchen ready to go

    05/30/2021 09:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh sweetie you can kiss you tip goodbye. I will give waitress the befit of the doubt. she could’ve been that way before the king walk in the door

    05/27/2021 12:17

  • Ta1sha

    oh man for sure the queen needed to be humbled she was just getting a little bit of a big head but I hope she can find a true friend. can’t wait to read what’s next. loving the story.

    05/26/2021 01:58

  • Ta1sha

    aww I love how he is treating her. still wanna know why her mom is terrible?

    05/24/2021 22:10

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what role will Fiona play?

    05/24/2021 04:32

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I human are extinct let’s slang time to ear some crow Dwayne

    05/24/2021 04:24

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I like Dwayne defended her. but Eric was clearly playing a game and he won. why did Dwayne stop aging?

    05/23/2021 09:41

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I know Daphne not ready for full blown sex. but come on they could explore each other’s bodies

    05/23/2021 09:27

  • Bella Jersey 2

    why is he purposely pushing buttons?

    05/23/2021 09:15

  • Bella Jersey 2

    damn straight it was like he almost trying to punish or kill her

    05/23/2021 09:01

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I think she needs a shot or two of wolfsbane

    05/23/2021 08:54

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I know somebody that’s not gonna reach 258 birthday

    05/23/2021 08:45

  • Bella Jersey 2

    yes cool friend Fiona

    05/23/2021 08:41

  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh boy who’s gonna tell her how the meeting should go?

    05/23/2021 08:32

  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh boy the stuck Lunas are not gonna like being kept waiting. it’s gonna be cool to me the cool ones

    05/23/2021 08:31

  • Bella Jersey 2

    why Dwayne go so cold so fast?

    05/23/2021 08:29

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I was waiting for this the stupid people did not disappoint

    05/23/2021 08:17

  • Bella Jersey 2

    make sure Sarah has her sneakers somewhere after the official stuff is done. it’s annoying ceremony but the core to know she is value and taken care of

    05/22/2021 23:28

  • Bella Jersey 2

    you know what I want to take a certain alpha and daughter down a peg or two. can’t wait for Daphne’s mom to see her in love

    05/22/2021 23:18

  • Bella Jersey 2

    it doesn’t sound like she wants to go back

    05/22/2021 22:51

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Daphne and Dwayne seem to like each other and will be one hell’va power couple

    05/22/2021 22:43

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I need explanation how is the bond made ?

    05/22/2021 22:41

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I know that’s what he thought be tell her he messed me all up

    05/22/2021 22:33

  • Bella Jersey 2

    damn right girlfriend get what you are comfortable in. it’s a shame Daphne didn’t have friend going to an ice cream Poler in limo with your friends sound cool

    05/22/2021 22:28

  • Bella Jersey 2

    you could just how uncomfortable she was. I hope shopping goes the way I want

    05/22/2021 22:21

  • Bella Jersey 2

    damn don’t you hate when somebody is right. I still think the king is to be disappointed or shocked. Daphne will not want to go shopping and such

    05/22/2021 22:14

  • Bella Jersey 2

    he just allowed him to go on and on dig his own hole. asked was that all he said yes. great now allow my guards to kindly escort you to the dungeons. OMG LOL

    05/22/2021 22:06

  • Semaj😋✌

    is it bad that I laughed when Dwayne said to case Roland's ear? (i'm crazy and weird I know but it was funny to me)

    05/17/2021 22:21

  • Semaj😋✌

    I love this book

    05/17/2021 21:35

  • Bella Jersey 2

    will Daphne meekly accept or is she gonna raise hell. can we find oh so future farther in law of the king. I want to see his face

    05/15/2021 05:57

  • Tenesia Tee

    this is book one? and the rise of the humans is book 2?

    05/14/2021 15:19

  • Bella Jersey 2

    she is gonna be exactly what this world needs. a good kick in the ass

    05/14/2021 08:11

  • Ta1sha

    very short chapters but I like the story and I am very interested to keep reading it.The main character is interesting.

    05/14/2021 04:05

  • wh0.Ash1

    Oh my God when she say “when I heard my name called I almost choked on my champagne in the first thing that came to mind was to make a “B LINE” for the door” lmoaoooo I died 🤣🤣

    05/07/2021 04:34

  • Reader-844186

    I love it so far 🤗

    05/03/2021 02:50

  • Kim haining

    I can't get over how this story portrays masterbation as "dirty". how delightfully 1930's

    04/26/2021 11:11

  • Shellian Mckenzie

    in the chapter titled baby bump you put Daphne instead of Sarah

    04/14/2021 12:03

  • Andrea Wesson

    Really liking the story. The characters pace so far is terrific & not just a meet, sexual interaction; then either Happy forever or loss & devastation.

    04/12/2021 15:10

  • Deb Warren

    Amazing book. In my top 10. Read it in one day I loved it much. could not put it down!!

    04/09/2021 08:48

  • A'smile Alexander

    3/16/21 started reading

    03/16/2021 22:58

  • A'smile Alexander

    I highly recommend this book. it is officially apart of my top 20 recommend reading list!!!!

    03/16/2021 22:57

  • Reader-164651

    I can’t unlock some of these chapters and it makes me not want to pay to finish the book even tho I’m hooked on it

    02/06/2021 21:16

  • Reader-164651

    I can’t unlock this chapter!!!

    02/06/2021 21:14

  • Melanie Smokenator Williams

    Dear Writer. I totally love this book.just the costs are getting high...

    02/02/2021 15:28

  • Reader-259559

    I wish y’all would just put it on Amazon kindle and we can one price for the whole book

    02/02/2021 03:41

  • Kira Fheart

    i liked when places like this did a time. check to unlock chapters

    02/02/2021 02:32

  • luna

    they has to be another way to get coins not everyone can pay and many people want to finish

    01/07/2021 08:22

  • Angela Francis

    what is the name of the first book

    12/30/2020 03:33

  • Omoyemi Ogwumike

    That's just it! it doesn't make sense at all for u to be reading a story u like & then get hooked. They should make d story readily available in a book or soft copy and allow orders to be placed sensibly for it & allow it to be purchased! Av stopped wasting my time reading d books with no end! I dont appreciate this issue of purchasing senseless coins which never go thru!

    12/29/2020 14:13

  • Jerilyn Noble

    they do need to find a way to earn coins

    12/15/2020 01:41

  • Lisia Wood

    saying not available for purchase

    12/06/2020 17:34

  • Lisia Wood

    keep saying item is not for purchase

    12/06/2020 17:34

  • Lisia Wood

    how can i purchase chapter because it want let me...keep saying Error

    12/06/2020 17:33

  • LC9

    ok, so I’m bummed out!! I purchased so coins so I could finish this book and for some reason the app says I have nothing in my wallet. I emailed the company. If anyone has any suggestions on what to do please advise. I was really digging this book!

    11/22/2020 18:03

  • Jonelle Henrickson

    I am loving this story! May I please give some constructive criticism? I hope I do not offend... but she is in the hospital hooked to IV's. And medication will be given through that IV clamp and she would not have a separate needle for sedative. Just some medical knowledge for future reference. But baby, you have captivated me with this story. Thank you for your hard work just to entertain us!! ✌❤🌞

    11/19/2020 23:37

  • Bethany Clulow

    LOVE THIS SO SO MUCH!!

    11/10/2020 17:32

  • Cassia Lim

    I love how u respond to your readers comments that pretty awesome.

    11/07/2020 02:36

  • Cassia Lim

    Just a little help not that u need any though.Just dont drag your suspense that long cause some readers tend to lose interest. Like me,but I mean not everybody's like that so good work🥰🥰🥰🥰🥰😁😁😁😁

    11/07/2020 02:35

  • Sarah White

    lmaooooo we skipped over SO many steps of the birthing process love it 😂😂

    10/26/2020 17:59

  • Iz-746748

    Can someone help me and advise what to do in situation that all of my previously bought chapters are locked and all of my coins vanished? thank you in advance

    09/05/2020 15:53

  • Tiara Tiara

    May I ask for help to create an Anystories account, I'm a writer from Indonesia

    09/03/2020 01:33

  • Annette Purscelley

    loved the story 🤩 can’t wait for rise of the humans 😊

    08/24/2020 17:05

  • Precious Silinda

    I don't know how to buy the coins for the next chapter

    08/22/2020 08:43

  • Josey Byrd

    any one have any redemption codes

    08/02/2020 04:57

  • Josey Byrd

    I love the book as far as Ive read. i need to read more but i font have any coins or money 2 spend

    08/02/2020 04:56

  • Josey Byrd

    I love the book as far as Ive read. i need to read more but i font have any coins or money 2 spend

    08/02/2020 04:56

  • Josey Byrd

    I love the book as far as Ive read. i need to read more but i font have any coins or money 2 spend

    08/02/2020 04:56

  • Josey Byrd

    I love the book as far as Ive read. i need to read more but i font have any coins or money 2 spend

    08/02/2020 04:55

  • Josey Byrd

    I love the book as far as Ive read. i need to read more but i font have any coins or money 2 spend

    08/02/2020 04:55

  • Josey Byrd

    I want to read the rat but I have no money to spend. anyone no any redemption codes

    08/02/2020 04:53

  • Josey Byrd

    does anyone no any redemption coded

    08/02/2020 04:51

  • Sabrina Lopez

    nee reader ..great so far

    07/22/2020 14:47

  • THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑

    Heyyyy!!! So, I can remember a reader talking about how they would love a book about the vampire Lord and the witch head as well, even though I cannot find the comment now☹ Do you think I should honor the request?

    07/17/2020 20:20

  • Reader-969959

    is chapter 1 missing

    07/13/2020 14:45

  • Nastassha S

    I can’t download the next chapter. 😫

    07/13/2020 11:24
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