The Luna Queen Comments
Reader-210867
I love the story but the spelling and wording check need to be double check is really annoying.
07/01/2020 03:49Sabrina Fernald
wow yummy lol
06/22/2020 03:46Lilithrevised
The story was very entertaining. I do wish that Daphne and Dwayne had addressed that Dwayne raped her a week before he was under the spell. Kind of a big deal in their relationship. The only point it's addressed was to say that he "ruffled her up" which is detrimental to his characterization. Throughout the whole story you worked so hard to create a problematic yet loving couple. That particular scene derails that effort. At the end, I can't believe in his love for her, and I can't believe that she's genuine because of that scene. Aside from that, the story was very enjoyable, and I fully intend this comment to be helpful and give insight to reader reaction, and NOT criticize your plot choices. Keep up the good work and I hope to see more from you in the future.
06/21/2020 07:03adejumo khadijat
love love this book just can't purchase coins to open another chapter
06/16/2020 16:25THE ROYAL LOUNGE👑
To all my beautiful reader, I am happy to say that the first chapter of Rise of The Humans is out
06/08/2020 15:14Reader-242981
same it logged me out and I logged back In my coins disappeared.
05/20/2020 02:01Shrutika Deshmukh
It is asking me to pay for the chapters which I have already purchased. why is that ?
05/18/2020 14:59Crystal Kostenbauder
can't wait till I get to read the 2nd book I really loved the 1st book
05/18/2020 11:41Christina Jaquez
is the 2nd book out yet rise of the human
05/18/2020 08:26Reader-505251
I can’t find the second book to this one ☹️
05/18/2020 00:04blazing star
can’t wait for more!!!
05/15/2020 11:08Nastassaja Lewis-Young
love the book so far but at this point I just want it to be finished before I lose interest. The suspense is too mucu
05/10/2020 02:54giselle caraballo
having trouble seeing new chapter
05/08/2020 01:50Katelyn Klevgard
Wont let me download Chapter 62. How do I send a troubleshoot?
05/07/2020 20:35Katelyn Klevgard
Having issues downloading chapter 62. What can I do?
05/07/2020 19:55Ebunoha Iren
how can I pay for the remaining chapters. I have tried all I could but it is still locked.
05/07/2020 07:24Irish Eyes81
love! lease keep updating!!
05/06/2020 20:24Gwenthy Bandah
best one of them......but don't have coins to continue.....oh well my loss
05/05/2020 22:46Khadijat Shaibu Adejumo
hmm cant get coins to read the remaining chapters so sad🙄😔😔
05/05/2020 09:08Stephanie Harrison
it's now telling me I have to repay for all the chapters I have already purchased 😳
05/04/2020 03:04Christina Jaquez
love the book so far
04/30/2020 01:28Reader-817689
I love thus story but I need it to be added to the last chapter has left off on a cliffhanger and I need to know how it ends
04/29/2020 13:08Lauren Coray
loving the story but the last chapter is left on a cliff hanger wish you could open another chapter please :)
04/26/2020 18:16Stephanie Harrison
dying for more than one chapter a day. I have re-read the book 5 times now waiting for new chapters. Loving it and can't wait for more.
04/24/2020 03:31Nicole McKinnon
I love this story, just wish there would be more than 1 chapter a day uploaded
04/23/2020 20:40cloudy
gosh! give me a guy like him!!! so strong, yet tender and caring! I’m a fan of their love
04/23/2020 15:07Noemie Nilsson
such a lucky girl! love the Cinderella plot!
04/23/2020 05:51