Alpha Kane (ALPHA KANE BOOK 1) Comments
Bella Jersey 2
6: yes this sounds dangerous rendition to watch
09/04/2023 07:41Bella Jersey 2
3: I’m loving Astrer she is just to cool. any man who doesn’t know your worth is unworthy of your thoughts. I will remember those word forever
09/04/2023 07:41
The Oreo
so is he a wizard?? sorry I'm a little confused but it's amazing
09/04/2023 07:40
Reader-343252
it was an overall good story plot but the author was all over the place..there was no flow to the next chapters and then the Halloween chapters..wth it made no sense to write it!!
09/04/2023 07:40
mystique9925
Very talented writer, great carachters that will grew to your ❤️ very fast.Mix of supernatural creatures pack nicely in amazing story. It will get you hooked for sure.😊
09/04/2023 07:39Mahek Hussain
I haven’t read it all yet but I can say that the first scene that was sent to me was great and it had beautiful imagery! Can’t wait to read more :)
09/04/2023 07:39Sherri Williamson
The prologue caught my attention. You have an alpha rejecting his mate, that we the readers, are assuming is a female. I understand you are writing in first person character, but we don't know for sure. Then we go to chapter 1, where the character is in a cage fight. But we do not know, until mostly toward the end, that it is (we still assume) the female. Then we get to chapter 2 and suddenly everyone is in college. But how many years has it been? Because in the prologue they are still in high school. I think you should write a new prologue, explaining more about the characters. Especially the female that the story is coming from. I am liking the story so far, but I think it needs a little straightening up (characters and timelines), and a little revision of the beginning.
09/04/2023 07:39
Bukie Tovia
So far I'm liking the book, it's interesting and doesn't give all the story in one chapter, leaves you with questions that engage you to read further.
09/04/2023 07:39
sacrycute❤️
The story is so great! The plot the the characters are so honest like yeah men! The author is also generous! Sharing this story! 🤩😘😍
09/04/2023 07:38Daniela Castillo
The book so far has sucked me in. I like seeing a different approach to mating and rejection. So far this book has bought my interest.
09/04/2023 07:38
Emmaline Fadaini 🦋
I'm new here tho
09/04/2023 07:38
Nuella Nimi
Nice story 👌
09/04/2023 07:37Ruth Hamilton
nice story I really liked it
09/04/2023 07:37alpha
you have done so well good job
09/04/2023 07:37lalarxse _
im also here to review so far it’s a worthy read
09/04/2023 07:36Orapa Perocho Roseanne
woah amazing
09/04/2023 07:36
Flawless
such an interesting story, I can hardly find time to comment 😉❤️
09/04/2023 07:36
Michelle B
I don't know who's the bigger idiot, Ember for trusting Ian enough to face a troll and not questioning knocking on the sidewalk, or Ian for stealing from one and then admitting it in front of said troll. Even still, well written so far.
09/04/2023 07:36D. K.
I really like book 1 and am looking forward to more!
09/04/2023 07:36Favour Miebi
nice one
09/04/2023 07:36
Krisandra Ward
I'm only a few chapters in but it got my attention since the first character. Characters are well thought out and portrayed. And a exciting story line.
09/04/2023 07:35
irumi
Fast paced..intriguing plot ..one of my favourite trope.. I like it :)))
09/04/2023 07:35
GirlyGamerForever3 Gamer
wow I didn’t know your work made it this big! I’m so happy for you two! crogratalations!
09/04/2023 07:34Aleeyah Khemraj
I was asked to review this and it's just amazing over all the werewolf stories I've read this out stands them all keep up the amazing work
09/04/2023 07:34Malissa Shepard
this is such a good book!
09/04/2023 07:34Juzmake
ilove this story. I do not regret that I searched for this story for a long time.
09/04/2023 07:34
Olivia_Taco
Welcome to my school This isn't highschool This is the thunderdome
09/04/2023 07:34zodiacsigns
i really like it
09/04/2023 07:34Kell Eliz
I loved this. The betrayal, the twists and turns, it all kept me on my toes
09/04/2023 07:33
Dedra
I was asked to do a review of this story and I absolutely love it. It has a good plot, interesting characters and is overall a good story to read.
09/04/2023 07:33
lil_cupcake_lover
I love Ian so far
09/04/2023 07:33
aires
plot seemed promising, but kinda messy writing/storytelling (not easy to follow) and not much character development. sorry 😔
09/04/2023 07:33kaykay23
wooaahj
09/04/2023 07:33Vasiliky - Maria Lyra
A very enjoyable story nicely written with an interesting plot and characters
09/04/2023 07:33kaykay23
thank you for stopping that mess Rick
09/04/2023 07:33kaykay23
🤣 I love Ian, bad joke though lol
09/04/2023 07:33Nicole Rogers
I love it
09/04/2023 07:33kaykay23
ahhhh I should've known 😭
09/04/2023 07:33Annamarie Becchina
i love it thank you for the code sorry it took me sp long to get on here and read it
09/04/2023 07:33JustKidding Shay
this book has been a good send. it’s mine blowing and creative that I can’t stop reading
09/04/2023 07:32Elesa King
im alittle lost still in the begining
09/04/2023 07:32Bukie Tovia
I love the way you write like your words, the descriptions are so easy to picture. I like Ian's character.
09/04/2023 07:31Reader-892089
although I haven’t had a chance to read thoughtfully and thoroughly yet, I can already see what talent as been showcased
09/04/2023 07:31my lioness
I am really loving this book ❤️
09/04/2023 07:31Yoan
love this story. it has a little of everything I like can’t wait to keep reading the next chapter
09/04/2023 07:31
Hollow World
Just got until ch 6 and yes, I'm hooked. Though the prologue flow kinda bugged me a little; that went a tad too fast from my POV, the flow of introducing the meeting with the mate was somewhat rushed. However, I love the subtle details of the characters that pops up every now and then, like the thing that MC likes to bring with her everywhere, her skin tone (oh, she can be white, black, tanned for all i care), her name (her full name isn't often said during the 6 chap i've read), and many more. A job well done, I have to say :)
09/04/2023 07:31
Jesscarrot
Honored to have been sent this, so good!
09/04/2023 07:31ZiZo ELF
Hi i love u book
09/04/2023 07:31Sharika Haque Mumu
has there any other option for reading this book?🙂
09/04/2023 07:31Faith Adams
Just started and I’m already hooked !
09/04/2023 07:30Arpita Mondal
added to library already.. I'm waiting for more from you dear.. u r a amazing writer
09/04/2023 07:30RelentlessWords
I thought she were fighting long before she were rejected by kane? This story needs a proper time line. It jumps often and can be confusing. But I like the plot. Tidy it up, work on some sentence structure at times and it will be fantastic
09/04/2023 07:30Alkali Msoo
your work gets better every time. it's awesome. just a few more touches and it will be even more awesome
09/04/2023 07:30Alexa Tapia
I was asked to review this book and it’s soooo good the story is so addicting❤️❤️
09/04/2023 07:29
maricar gonzales
i must say this an excellent story and you're such a good writer...., Keep on writing more story.... God Bless You Now And For Always.....😊😊😊😊😊☺☺☺☺☺😍😍
09/04/2023 07:29Janet Godwin
very good so far
09/04/2023 07:29Arbeela Mustafa
very good, keep it up
09/04/2023 07:29
Saher Malik
My interest has been spiked after reading the preview you sent me but the content here is oolala. I am glad you asked me to review it for you. Can’t wait to start reading.
09/04/2023 07:29tree #2
wow!
09/04/2023 07:29Dsmp Spot
This is the same title as another authors book.
09/04/2023 07:28Mariska Kuhn
The prologue only introduce the Alpha's son. And his mate as a person falling into his arms which he rejects. In the first chapter the person fights a male, and they call the first person the Alpha in the cage, but in Chapter 2 the first person is talking about themselves as Nerdy. Then Kane got the person up against a wall. There is still no indication that the first person is male or female. They haven't been properly introduced to the reader.
09/04/2023 07:28Alicia Shannon
is the second book out yet I loved this story.
09/04/2023 07:28Jona Cahilgan Fabillar
👍🏽👍🏽
09/04/2023 07:28Kylie Mason
I want to keep reading but I cant
09/04/2023 07:28Tecla Muthoni
Hey I really liked the few chaps you sent on wattpad.The story is totally amazing
09/04/2023 07:28skye and min
I love it so far good job keep it up
09/04/2023 07:27Min Yoongi
Damn, I'm reading this rather than doing my homeworks.It really shows how amazing this story is.
09/04/2023 07:27Laura Mercado
so far I’m pretty invested. story flows nicely. I love it
09/04/2023 07:27Bella Jersey 2
chapter 2: woah she was much stronger than anyone thought. still don’t see how deserves to have her at all. he’s basically a bully. bully are evil deserve a horrible painful you know what
09/04/2023 07:26Rebecca Farmer
wow what an amazing story!!!
09/04/2023 07:26
Jana
I will give this a shot from reading the comments
09/04/2023 07:26Hope Elmore
I love how she embarrasses herself even more than just apologizing and going about her day😂
09/04/2023 07:26Silvana Maretha
👍👍
09/04/2023 07:26
favorite _moon_child
I’m definitely a fan of werewolf stories, and all though I’m on chapter two the details are amazing. I love the way it started out too you don’t normally see werewolve stories starting off with the drama between the mates and I love that. I’m looking forward to reading the rest.
09/04/2023 07:26SavageGummy
I love this book already! Tysm for introducing me to it!
09/04/2023 07:26LilithDecay31
I was asked to read and review this book and I adore it. I can create a clear scene in my mind as I fall deeper into the web of words that the author spins with each word! I can wait to keep reading!!!
09/04/2023 07:26Pippa Cope
I'm so confused
09/04/2023 07:25
Nama Gafasa
Alpha Kane is amazing,the plot is really promising can't wait to finish it. Ember's fire is one of a kind
09/04/2023 07:25Reader-698813
love love this story
09/04/2023 07:25YokoOno44
Omg I love this story so far starts off so amazing
09/04/2023 07:25
Izzy_143
I’ve barely started reading this story but I’m in love. Great job author, keep it up. 😊👍🏼
09/04/2023 07:25
Ulala Oye
dang this is amazing story!!!
09/04/2023 07:25Mm T
nice writing! it flows really well, and I love that! it also seems like an interesting plot. nice first chap!
09/04/2023 07:25Lynda Patterson Valdez
love it so far
09/04/2023 07:25Ronalyn Ebreo
okay im hear, someone ask me to review it and i love it❤
09/04/2023 07:25Shiella Mae Francisco Ada
❤️
09/04/2023 07:25
Giselle Stargazer
"calloused" is written wrong..
09/04/2023 07:25Giselle Stargazer
loved it already! im intrigued!!
09/04/2023 07:25Giding Banal Sarmiento
This is a beautiful, beautiful story. It reads like a fable. The atmosphere is wonderful just the way it is. even in those places, the meaning is clear, and the phrasing is beautiful, almost poetic.
09/04/2023 07:25Agustina Sánchez
I recommend it, great story
09/04/2023 07:25
Dazelyne
I was hooked from the start...
09/04/2023 07:25Ilze Johnson
The first chapter has my attention already. I hope Alpha Kane regrets his decision 😁
09/04/2023 07:25Kimberly Romo
I love this part
09/04/2023 07:25Joann Carreon
So I was asked to review this and they sent me a few few lines from the first chapter and let me say that as soon as I read the lines I wanted to keep reading right away and now as I am reading on let me say I love this so much and the story its self is really promising and I am excited to see what happened as I read on. Good job this is an amazing book😁
09/04/2023 07:25
Chante' Cumpston
i was asked to read this book and give my opinion. well to put it simply this book is not only an attention getter but it has a good storyline and the characters are really well-thought-out and portrayed I think and I've only gotten I don't know something like 20 chapters or so in and I love it this book is just one of those that you continually read any chance you get that you can't put it down it's really well written. i love it!!!🥰👍
09/04/2023 07:25
Notha Shoto
i was also asked to review ... and im so glad this person did ... You are a good writer man... above all.This was just amazing to read honestly 💖
09/04/2023 07:24
Lawal Mistura Adeyemi
Ahhhhh I am really happy i chose to read this story I don't regret it(*^▽^*)
09/04/2023 07:24Zorana Babic
it’s such a good written book! I’m definitely hooked and can’t seem to put it down!
09/04/2023 07:24RoseQuartz Serenity
hmmmm, alpha's son is interesting!? It's a new plot that the alpha's son rejecting his mate. I love it.
09/04/2023 07:24kaykay23
🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️🤦♀️ why is she being...ugh
09/04/2023 07:24
