The Lone She Wolf Comments

  • Cara Keane

    grammar is dreadful and the 1st few paragraphs repeat ☹️

    04/30/2022 10:36

  • Reader-522027

    story wasnt bad but the grammar was shocking.sometimes didnt make sense

    04/26/2022 12:20

  • Crystal Akers

    this is a great book I'm on chapter 10

    04/25/2022 14:05

  • Laurel McGilvery

    horrible book. lots of editing and grammar mistakes. Who cares about the gross anatomy details? Not sexy just gross.

    04/23/2022 22:55

  • Michelle Tosh

    I never finished the first 2 chapters, this writer was far to obsessed with the she wolf's pussy and ass it was a constant thing. shame started out as a potentially good book

    04/15/2022 11:19

  • Elle Rose

    awful Grammer and editing mistakes

    04/04/2022 06:45

  • Susanna Piipponen

    The comment section is not only used by author to read flattering opinions. Other readers use it to estimate if the book in whole (plot, writing style, characters) sounds like a good "waste" of time. It's a bit comical to read how people should only express "nice" opinions or restrain giving critical comments just because "writing a book is very hard". This book does sound like having a good plot but what I've read from other readers' comments I'm not tempted by its writing style. So I'm grateful for those "ungrateful brats" for giving me an information that helps me save my time for something that sounds to suit better for me.

    04/04/2022 04:07

  • Andy Hughes

    The author has said that they'll be editing this, their first story. I'm keeping it & waiting for them to be done as I feel there's a really good story here.

    03/28/2022 17:41

  • Pída El

    I’m hooked straight away. writing a book is very hard. I cannot believe all these ungrateful brats. I love your imagination author. keep up the good work ❤️

    02/27/2022 08:21

  • Mary Caldwell

    Do the people making nasty comments actually enjoy and understand the concept of Erotica and Fantasy or they just to simple to grasp it or have any imagination at all? COME ON PEOPLE GO READY A BIOGRAPHY OR SOMETHING THEN

    02/27/2022 07:51

  • Tania K

    Has this book been edited yet? I’d like to read it but there’s so many grammatical errors in the preview. Just asking

    02/27/2022 04:42

  • Leona Smith

    if you guys can't say anything nice you shouldn't be saying anything at all! By the way it has a warning at the beginning that says it contains sex I don't understand why people are still reading it if that bothers you....

    02/27/2022 04:22

  • Jenny Fritsch

    ok we get it...she's hot you don't need to say it every other paragraph plus if someone is starving..guess what having"big beautiful boobs/a nice ass" doesn't work since it's fat and if someone is really dying of starvation...poof away everything

    02/25/2022 04:18

  • Ashley Hersh

    yeah I only got half way through the second chapter. There NEEDS TO BE A RAPE TRIGGER WARNING!!!! Also, too many errors and kinda hard to follow. And who the hell hides under the bed when their parents get a bad letter?!?!

    02/02/2022 02:49

  • Peggy Frederick

    I love reading this book. Keep up the great work.

    01/22/2022 20:19

  • Lisa Wells Jarnagin

    Im loving this book so far

    01/21/2022 10:30

  • DDalangpan

    Doesn't he already know her name? why does he keep calling her young she wolf?

    01/21/2022 02:19

  • DDalangpan

    She's like a toddler, her way of protesting is by throwing herself on the ground. Story seems like it's just dragging on....I've lost my interest.

    01/21/2022 01:24

  • DDalangpan

    It's "shaking like a leaf" not leave, and mop...not map. Too many grammatical errors. And we get it....she has big boobs and ass...no need to keep repeating it.

    01/20/2022 22:54

  • LIANA ORTEGA

    sis I haven't read ur book but keep on trucking u got this just get a better editing program!

    01/19/2022 22:50

  • Ako Si Akai

    I've lost interest already. it described everything in great details

    01/19/2022 09:47

  • Annette Dale

    I’m sorry but your a good young author keep writing! some people are just overly critical and cranky!! i like the little sexy smutt , so go ahead and keeping writing!! I’ll read !!

    01/17/2022 23:43

  • Heather Rubey

    every scared is spelled as sacred.... totally different meaning!!! pulls you out of the story

    01/16/2022 11:15

  • Heather Rubey

    lost you

    01/16/2022 10:24

  • Heather Rubey

    SAY that. the present and past tense has to be corrected!!!!

    01/16/2022 10:15

  • Heather Rubey

    it is a mop not a map that is so pulling me out of the story every time...ugh

    01/16/2022 10:13

  • cjjames

    The grammar is awful. The story is very hard to track as well. Sorry, I can’t read this, it’s that bad.

    01/15/2022 17:34

  • Reader-882

    the author is either actually a 12 yr old boy or wants to be one ….I want to like the story line but the vulgarity is ruining the whole thing.

    12/25/2021 19:33

  • Heather Ellis

    lots of repeating about larg firm breast and her butt and vagina...like really how old is this author? sounds like a 16 year old!

    11/13/2021 15:24

  • jgma

    he lost me at “fleshy cunt”

    10/28/2021 05:00

  • Ria Payton

    I am tired of ripping other people clothes😒

    10/16/2021 14:38

  • Veronika Dickerson-baham

    I really wanted to enjoy it . but I can tell this was written by a man . kept talking about her big breast .. ugh

    10/16/2021 04:38

  • Reader-545241

    I wish she would just grow a back bone already

    09/29/2021 01:41

  • Bonib2

    I seriously think the writer has affinity for big breasts. He can't stopped writing about it. I hope you get an editor and proofreader soon as reading the story is a bit cringeworthy. I think I will hold off buying chapters for now as it has potential to be a good book once it is edited and re-written.

    09/17/2021 10:13

  • Joanne Cleveland

    I enjoyed the book thanks please right more

    09/15/2021 06:36

  • SandyJR524

    in case anyone gets confused…I figured out a Coburg is actually a cupboard. (a type of cabinet) Coburg is a city name…inAustralia

    09/12/2021 19:48

  • Maria Hadjioannou Georgiou

    Avery must tell the truth to her mate

    08/25/2021 12:13

  • Sandra Aguayo

    I just realized this book is the same as the deadly alpha it’s the same just different name

    08/12/2021 06:40

  • Sandra Aguayo

    I am currently reading this book it’s seems like a good book so far I’d like to know if you are going to update on the deadly alpha

    08/11/2021 03:48

  • Ivonne Lara

    havnt read the book yet but y is the male main character have the same name as a member from 1D?? is the author a Directioner??

    08/11/2021 02:41

  • Leah Danielle Pyhala

    This author has potential, but she really needs to invest in an editor. I don’t think English is her first language or maybe she’s very young. Sentences are choppy and words are misspelled. As a fellow author, I would HIGHLY recommend hiring a professional editor. The stories would be so much better!

    07/22/2021 17:48

  • Jay Squad

    the moment I saw those wolves I dont care if i didn't have any strength left i would have shifted and bolted

    07/19/2021 00:14

  • kbarr564

    why does everyone hate her so much and treat her so badly??

    06/29/2021 03:46

  • Suzanne Harpur

    Why is the grammar so bad? why do you call a leaf a leave and a mop a map do you not speak or understand the language you are writing in? And finally can you please try staying in the correct tense if its past then use that tense but if its present time you need to use present tense and PLEASE stop swelling on 50inch hair fat cunt large breasts and large ass it get very boring reading the same description of these assets over and over again

    06/25/2021 04:21

  • Bella Jersey 2

    good question were are we?

    06/03/2021 08:20

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I still do trust what’s going on here

    05/30/2021 07:58

  • Bella Jersey 2

    is Liam and her bipolar? one moment their up then their down. I mean make up their damn minds

    05/27/2021 12:47

  • Bella Jersey 2

    the door effectively was locked from the outside. I’d don’t me to be stupid but break a window and go for it

    05/27/2021 12:37

  • Amber Perry

    I think coburg is meant to be cupboard or cabinet! Coburg is a place (in Germany) not an item!!!! also dust should definitely say dusk. dusk being the time of day when the sun is going down turning day into night!

    05/25/2021 12:22

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I’m having real hard time. does she hate her body or like it?

    05/24/2021 05:23

  • Lozzig

    Seems like a great story but has lots of issues. obviously never been edited as there are grammar mistakes everywhere and it’s constantly switching between past and present tense. A lot of unnecessary mentions and descriptions of her nipples, breasts, ass, “fat cunt.” we get it, she’s hot. And stop talking about her nipples getting hard in random moments like when she’s dying on the cave floor. I’m liking the story so far, and the steamy parts are written very steamy, but it’s a struggle to read.

    05/18/2021 14:30

  • Bella Jersey 2

    Liam and Alex can’t be that desperate over one woman or is it I saw it first??

    05/18/2021 00:30

  • Bella Jersey 2

    he was hold her neck by his TEETH?

    05/17/2021 07:02

  • Bella Jersey 2

    only 3 days till full moon miss ivy is jealous as hell. it also looks like Liam’s money got spent on someone else. what was going on in the town square?

    05/16/2021 10:05

  • Bella Jersey 2

    maybe she can get away

    05/15/2021 03:13

  • Bella Jersey 2

    is he gonna rape her?

    05/15/2021 03:01

  • Bella Jersey 2

    you like to put your woman through the ringers in your book.

    05/15/2021 02:51

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I want to what the trials are

    05/15/2021 02:49

  • Bella Jersey 2

    who is she?

    05/15/2021 02:00

  • Bella Jersey 2

    there’s a seven day trial one down 6 to go

    05/15/2021 01:50

  • Bella Jersey 2

    the punishment is not over is it ?

    05/14/2021 07:05

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I do think you describe breast, nipples, and ass to much. unless it has some meaning in sentence. it’s just taking up space

    05/14/2021 07:04

  • Wcha

    why does it keep describing her body in that way and if she was starving and living as a wolf for 2 years I would think she be malnourished

    05/13/2021 20:59

  • Bella Jersey 2

    brave woman you go girl you earn my respect. we still have to find out why she loaths herself

    05/12/2021 03:38

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what’s gonna happen next

    05/10/2021 06:46

  • gabriela dibala

    I really enjoyed this book! thank you to the writer!

    05/09/2021 07:00

  • gabriela dibala

    I want to slap some sense into Avery!!! tell the truth! she was a child, and if Liam can’t understand that then he can go to hell and take his mommy exgf and herbal doc with him!! so my f exgf had a miscarriage was it natural or did she take the herb she wanted Alice to give Avery???

    05/09/2021 00:52

  • Bella Jersey 2

    calm went right out the window. maybe you some valuum in that hut

    05/08/2021 01:21

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I like the doctor

    05/05/2021 22:49

  • Bella Jersey 2

    didn’t Liam give her to Alexander?

    05/04/2021 03:08

  • Bella Jersey 2

    i don’t know why she fight to live

    05/04/2021 03:00

  • Eden

    it’s getting annoying to read her say that she has fat cunt, big ass, and huge breasts. Its like she’s saying “MMMM I have big fat juicy mommy milkers 🤤😩”

    04/30/2021 17:43

  • feedmebooks13

    it’s weird to keep saying her hair is 50 inches long, no one would measure to find out ... it’s better to simply say “her waist length hair” or some other bodily measurement and it would have the same effect. when I read it as 50 inches I automatically think that I should grab a tape measure to see physically how long that would be.

    04/29/2021 05:16

  • Bella Jersey 2

    I’m really enjoying this story and finding out why this girl thinks so low of herself

    04/29/2021 04:40

  • Bella Jersey 2

    oh god what’s gonna happen

    04/29/2021 04:33

  • Teri A Lyon

    Did anyone proofread this book? it's really hard to follow when changing the wording in your brain. Other than that, is a good story.

    04/27/2021 22:20

  • Bella Jersey 2

    sounds good to me girlfriend

    04/27/2021 21:35

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what the hell is going on?

    04/27/2021 21:28

  • Bella Jersey 2

    this is literally disgusting. I’ll still read but hate him

    04/27/2021 21:23

  • Sage Glidewell

    this is really rough to read. an okay story but needs a ton of work

    04/27/2021 00:34

  • Bella Jersey 2

    what is in the letter?

    04/24/2021 09:27

  • Raj Kanwar

    okay

    04/24/2021 02:26

  • Anna Sveda

    does the grammar get better?

    04/24/2021 00:40

  • halima adam

    do we also get points for comanting ?

    03/04/2021 15:52

  • OLIVIA125

    I want to let you know I am following your page and answer my message lol 😆

    03/03/2021 17:52

  • OLIVIA125

    I love this novel; You have wonderful stories. Also I am mad at you for ending the Wolf without a name like that. you are heartless😧😳

    03/03/2021 17:50

  • dr.penguin

    this is so rough to read the repetitive adjectives make me cringe its poorly written

    03/03/2021 16:14

  • Kalynn Kowitz

    you should consider not repeating the same adjectives over and over again.... we don't need to hear about her large, firm breasts 50 times.... especially when she's just walking or crawling somewhere

    03/03/2021 15:48

  • Martha Oakley

    what's a couburg? In America we call them cupboards. Are you from a different country? or is English a second language? I'm not trying to be mean I'm really asking? As there can be a lot lost in translation.

    03/03/2021 15:19

  • Martha Oakley

    I'm reading and it's a good story line. but poorly written.

    03/03/2021 14:58

  • Jazz Ford

    is your book only allowed on here? or am I able to purchase it straight somewhere else like amazon in ebook or paperback?

    03/03/2021 06:16

  • Susanne Karmacsi

    is this book finished?

    03/03/2021 02:52

  • Victoria Brinson

    why doesnt she talk or stand up for herself? I would not be taking that crap being called a slut but an old hag.. she needs a backbone! so frustrating. I understand she’s been through a lot but that should have made her stronger!

    02/10/2021 22:31

  • Victoria Brinson

    how did the old lady betray her? she is annoying!

    02/10/2021 20:28

  • Victoria Brinson

    so she hates her life and wants to die but when she gets into a hard situation, she wants someone to save her? hmm..

    02/10/2021 19:35

  • Edie Gyorki

    why is her reaction to everything to get naked and pull out her hair?

    02/06/2021 17:13

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    11/23/2020 12:35

  • werewolf boy

    I'm reading this novel😍 I shared it with some friends and they are loving it as well. *WONDERFUL STORIES** 👻HAPPY HALLOWEEN

    10/31/2020 14:08

  • Linda Hughes

    What a horrible mother!! She needs to be *itch slapped into next week

    10/30/2020 02:20

  • lil'momma25

    ugh I really hate how immature she is! I hate how no one told her anything about how you mark someone but how does her wolf not know the truth of marking?

    10/17/2020 03:07
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