The Forgotten Princess Comments

  • Jenna Mc Augustine

    z8b3 very good start. can't wait to see if she finds her mate.

    04/13/2023 03:15

  • Linda Strandquist

    z8b3 wow the was quite the start. Wonder who is the car for her to have the instant reaction.

    04/13/2023 03:04

  • Jan T

    z8b3 #z8b3 interesting plot and captivating introduction. it's good that it's a completed story so I can binge read

    04/12/2023 23:56

  • Bizzybee🐝🌸

    z8b3 I’ve added it to my library and it sounds promising just from the description

    04/12/2023 23:52

  • Claire

    z8b3This seems like a story I would enjoy reading and can't wait to see how it ends up. Can't wait to see if she finds her love her mate and how she rules.

    04/12/2023 23:15

  • Ashley

    z8b3 It seems like an interesting story I will have to add it to my library to read after I finish the many other books I am currently reading.

    04/12/2023 22:59

  • Sammy

    z8b3 Will come back to read once the story

    04/12/2023 22:57

  • Michibeba

    #z8b3# from the little I have read this seems like a very interesting story and am looking forward to coming back to it once it is complete

    04/12/2023 22:36

  • Lexxxxx

    z8b3 so far I like it. lots of detail going into the description which is nice. curious about it to read more

    04/12/2023 20:12

  • Merle Langevoord

    z8b3 it is hard to keep reading, because the story develops a bit slower. or I'm just having allot of trouble with my dyslexia. i wil come back to it in a few days

    04/12/2023 19:36

  • Megan Phillips

    z8b3 The introduction for this story is well written. makes you want to find out more about the characters.

    04/12/2023 18:51

  • Sue Flaherty

    z8b3 So far so good, loving it. I'm adding to my library to finish reading it. Wish I could write like this.

    04/12/2023 18:23

  • Amy Seibert

    Example: Z8b3 The book is really well written. I get super interested in female domination books as she is the one trying for her throne and not a male. love it.

    04/12/2023 17:36

  • Gemma Butler

    z8b3 This book sounds interesting. Good book introduction. I’ve added it to my library to read later

    04/12/2023 16:59

  • Maria Cecilia Reyes-Meliton

    z8b3 This story looks promising, but is a bit too slow moving. It drags out so much that I have to force myself to keep reading.

    04/12/2023 16:54

  • Bianca Bratu

    z8b3 I love this story because it is so well written, the plot and the characters that complete eachother so wonderfully. I will continue to read it to find out what happens next

    04/12/2023 16:17

  • Reader-243066

    z8b3 I already love it's well written

    04/12/2023 14:34

  • Sharon Dsouza

    z8b3 i started reading it, it looks like a promising story and will. continue reading it... just love these book suggestions!

    04/12/2023 14:12

  • adlyn

    z8b3 I really like this type of story. Athena is ideal and watching her story develop is my kind of thing. Yes, I recommend this book wholehearted.

    04/12/2023 11:28

  • Marilyn Livingston

    z8b3 Hooked! Shifter romance isn't usually my genre, but rhis is so well written I'm drawn in.

    04/12/2023 09:11

  • C. Anne Augustitus

    z8b3 I started reading this and soon couldn't stop reading, great story so far, reads well, highly recommend it

    04/12/2023 09:00

  • zira

    z8b3 i like how the story goes...its uncomplicated and well written. sometimes reading needs this kind of books.lovely

    04/12/2023 08:11

  • Selli Dang

    z8b3 I read this book a while ago and once I started I couldn't stop I had to read it all. it's not too long and doesn't drag one, definitely give it a try

    04/12/2023 07:13

  • John Robinson

    z8b3 The descriptions in this book I love especially Athena's eyes. Interesting story so far what to know what happens next.

    04/12/2023 06:51

  • Debra Sykes

    z8b3 just read intro and I will be saving the book to my library looks interesting

    04/12/2023 05:34

  • T Malloy

    z8b3 I can't wait to start this book it seems really good already n I'm curious to see what happens next

    04/12/2023 05:00

  • Veronica Bullen

    z8b3so far it's been a good book not to many writing mistakes ,good story line in my library now looking forward to finishing it

    04/12/2023 03:36

  • Julie Mejia Zertuche

    z8b3 just started this one and pretty good so far, I really enjoy all the stories with werewolves

    04/12/2023 03:35

  • Janaki Kollepalli

    z8b3... interesting start with a lot of intrigue and mystery... so far so good... let's see what the book is ahead

    04/12/2023 03:34

  • Me Myself

    z8b3 it is an interesting book so far. the writing is decent so far so good.

    04/12/2023 03:27

  • Stacey Stratton

    z8b3 sounds like a great story! I’ve only read the first chapter, but I’m definitely adding it to my library.

    04/12/2023 02:48

  • Julianna Elhoussan

    z8b3 I feel like this is a good story I just feel like there are some holes in story that I wish I knew

    04/12/2023 01:49

  • Wendy Wertman

    z8b3( sounds like a interesting story a human who gets a mate and is royalty makes a interesting plot

    04/12/2023 01:17

  • Jasmine Hurley

    z8b3 Just read the first few chapters and definitely adding to my library to finish. I like the main character so far and look forward to finding out more about her and how she’ll deal with the cards life dealt her.

    04/12/2023 00:48

  • Vicki usher

    z8b3# so another rejected second chance mate story that's what I thought but then I read the introduction. Give it a read.

    04/11/2023 23:59

  • GrumpyKitten

    People, please stop with the spoilers. It makes it to were others don't even what to read it....

    01/11/2023 03:39

  • Jessica Bean

    she told him to sleep with someone else when she took his kids and refused him to come with her. she didn’t even allow him to name his kids. she only puts all blame on him and does not take into account any of her own actions. she didn’t even talk to her mate for months and expected everything to be ok

    03/09/2022 22:06

  • Jessica Bean

    kane lied on very first day that he would not try something and yet kissed her and she just chooses to ignore her mate

    03/09/2022 22:02

  • Jessica Bean

    she is such a hypocrite and never cared or loved her mate and to sleep with someone else not even a week after giving birth is even worse

    03/09/2022 21:59

  • Tammy Huber

    I love this story. I would hope to hear the reign of Kane and her and how they deal out the vampire. second book on the twins.

    12/17/2021 23:13

  • Hope Michealson

    I've seen and read this book on 2 other platforms and each time the writer was different.

    09/11/2021 09:27

  • Tosha Scott

    OK. I've been following this book for sometime. I've enjoyed reading it, but I like for the gaps to be filled in. There is a lot of unanswered questions on why Noah ended up the way he did. His relationship outside of the mate bond? Why he cared about his sister as though he is her father, but shunned his own children? Did Athena truly heal Damon? There was little interaction between Athena and Kane with their trip to find the palace. How was simply sitting on the throne enough to get everyone to stop fighting? I know everyone was demanding chapters through your busy schedule outside of writing, but I feel lost at the end of this. I'd wait a month for one great chapter feel it unfinished. Hope you add to this. I'll loyally follow. thanks.

    08/16/2021 04:32

  • amber sweet

    so did you just stop wrighting the book??

    08/10/2021 18:27

  • Jackie_19

    i found this randomly, i dont know how but i enjoyed it. i feel like long ago i had a similar story shown to me in highschool about a girl named ava and she is involved in a supernatural world of vampires, werewolves and hybrids. She is in school and she feels like she doesnt belong while her emotions are becoming to intense for her as she as to deal with the struggles of highschool life and the people around her. A very good depiction of a coming of age story and finding her alpha It unlocked a memory i once had forgotten, and memories of the person who wrote that. i cant wait for more chapters!!!!

    08/04/2021 04:40

  • Emz Revell

    will you be writing anymore chapters soon?

    08/03/2021 19:30

  • Tahiti_650

    thanks for the update. I really hope Athena heals Damon

    07/17/2021 17:10

  • amber sweet

    why have you stopped wrighting? Have been awaiting new chapters

    07/11/2021 22:05

  • amber sweet

    update??

    07/08/2021 21:23

  • Jess

    Is this book still getting regular updates? Please say yes I really want to finish it.

    07/07/2021 17:44

  • Michelle F. Rivera

    Where's the rest???

    07/06/2021 14:33

  • Brianne Edwards

    I kind of hate where this went with Noah. that really sucks. I don't think I will finish it now.

    07/03/2021 14:49

  • Renae

    is there going to be another update?

    06/22/2021 19:18

  • amber sweet

    is this it or is it going to be another update ever

    06/08/2021 21:10

  • amber sweet

    when's the next update its been 2 weeks

    05/30/2021 20:56

  • Tosha Scott

    When will we get more uodates?

    05/03/2021 12:34

  • Tabitha Nichols

    did she forget she has powers?

    04/22/2021 01:31

  • Charliek

    It kind of bothers me that she never mentions feeding or really caring for her newborn babies. what’s the point of bringing them if they just get left in the car. Then after she shifted into her wolf to save Jordan she would be naked when she turned back. the only dressing that was mentioned is wrapping her leg up.

    04/17/2021 15:33

  • Tosha Scott

    I hope Jordan is ok. Athena definitely isn't playing. She has grown so much. She will definitely make a great queen and so far Kane still seems like a great mate for her. I'm looking forward to how they progress. I'll say it again though I'd still like more on Noah's POV. Something to clarify what's been going on in his mind from his first meeting Athena. I feel it's all unanswered questions and need the closure even if he continues being written in. His actions have been nothing short of hostile and bizarre.

    04/15/2021 14:07

  • Bella Jersey 2

    that was so sweet I think she’ll be an awesome mom and Queen

    04/13/2021 04:52

  • Bella Jersey 2

    awww

    04/13/2021 03:18

  • Rose Cole

    great so far

    04/10/2021 21:03

  • amber sweet

    when is next update??

    04/09/2021 04:58

  • BrinleeJo Jo

    when is the next update? love this story

    04/07/2021 01:30

  • meredith jones

    I don't see Noah as bad. I think Athena is a brat.

    04/06/2021 00:16

  • Ck carder

    Wait...when did she get dressed?

    04/03/2021 18:25

  • Tosha Scott

    I feel for Damon. He has been through so much because of the love he has for Athena. I hope he can open up to her and something can be done to save his wolf lineage. Athena didn't tap into her powers to save him only for him to struggle and change. Thank you for the small bit on Noah's pov, but I'd love to know if he has always been this greedy and self absorbed even in his Claudia days. It would help to know if my hatred for his actions is warranted. It throws me off that he was more accepting of a possible child with Claudia and his supposed air and his fatherly/brotherly love for Sophia. Yet he has no ounce of love for the children he helped bring to life with Athena. Also what happened to his beta and Athena's friend? Finally what is up with Kane's Gamma. Please update soon.

    04/01/2021 16:13

  • Diana Powell

    it is too long between updates you start forgetting the story

    03/30/2021 19:15

  • Tosha Scott

    Good for Athena taking that last step and rejecting Noah. So happy she is finding Kane to be her second chance. Was so worried that it was going to be the gamma. Wondering if there is a reason she was drawn to him. Maybe he will play a role when she finally ascends to her place on the throne, or maybe he is family lost to her. Would still like to see a few chapters from Noah's perspective for closure. I want to know what lead him to act shady from the start.

    03/29/2021 03:20

  • Trish Krips

    I’m so happy he is her mate! I hope he continues to treat her right like she deserves

    03/27/2021 15:43

  • Tosha Scott

    Thank the goddess that she wasn't feeling the mate bond with the Gamma. Although I wonder what the connection is there? Is it someone she knows or is related to or will she have a connection to individuals who she could trust when she gets the throne? Oh the possibilities. So happy she will have Kane after formally rejecting Noah. Side note, I would like to see a few chapter's for just Noah to understand him better. Whether he has always been like this or how he got to the point of being crazy. Thanks for the update. Please give more soon.

    03/26/2021 13:56

  • Allicia Anuszewski

    I am so glad she was able to break her mate bond with Noah and get a second chance mate! Noah may have been attracted to her and interested in her power from the beginning but it’s clear after the last handful of chapters that he only stayed for the power and doesn’t love her. Kane is way better for her so far. He has been genuinely helpful with her ascension, has kept her in the loop and with or without sex he is respectful to her.

    03/26/2021 13:53

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 25 I totally agree with never be an afterthought

    03/26/2021 07:13

  • Tosha Scott

    I wonder what Athena felt when she was grabbed by the Gamma. She has a reaction for a reason. It brings me joy that the mate bond has finally formed for her and Kane now that she has formally rejected Noah. I wonder still though now that she is closer to the throne and with a true mate if she will have bonded connections with others who will be part of her ruling council. I hope Damon and his wolf can fight off the vampire venom and he can return to normal. He has not had it easy and Athena would be devastated if her brother is lost to her. I understand Kane being wary and wanting to protect his pack, but I hope he realizes that Athena needs Damon close. Was so worried about how this was going to go moving forward, but I'm still glad with the direction the book is taking. Still would like to see a chapter or 2 from Noah's perspective to get an idea of what happened to him. How it lead to Athena justifiably rejecting him. Whether he ever truly took the mate bond seriously. Just closure in general.

    03/25/2021 14:46

  • Tabitha Nichols

    I hope he is not trying to control her like Noah. up to this point I was pro Kane. hope you can turn it back

    03/25/2021 02:36

  • Millie Britton

    hey everyone. I have a chapter ready to go but unfortunately I have no wifi so I'm unable to update. I'll try to get it to you guys as soon as possible, hopefully the internet should be back up and running by the weekend, but I'm not going to make any promises

    03/23/2021 18:45

  • Ashley Mclagan Bonds

    team Kane all the way hopefully the gamma is someone who's supposed to protect her or long lost friend

    03/23/2021 17:12

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 24: I her behavior or leadership was inherent. Athena and wolf knew they had to do this. I love in the book even though it’s girl power. it’s not de man Noah

    03/23/2021 10:19

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 23: I know who the guard was and who is the princess protector

    03/23/2021 08:02

  • wolfcreeklady

    I really want her mate to be Kane.

    03/22/2021 15:23

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 22: I’m glad her parents are there. sad what happened to them but they expect it. I knew ascending throne was gonna be easy glad somebody clued her in

    03/22/2021 11:39

  • Vicki Trewella

    Ohh.. not the gamma! 😭 It has to be Kane! He's the perfect match for her!🥰

    03/19/2021 21:01

  • Tabitha Nichols

    not the gamma! it has to be Kane !

    03/18/2021 15:23

  • divarita blitz

    okay so Im redoing my previous comment. Noah did mess up. I still think Athena had her own issues as well. But Noah def messed up big time. I'm not sure about Kane still though.

    03/18/2021 13:31

  • Tosha Scott

    No.... Athena needs Kane. Kane needs Athena. I so do not want to find out that the Gamma is her mate. Venus even wants Kane. Please let there be a mistake. She has been through to much and has finally found someone who though uncertain temporarily has been helping her. Restoring her her faith. Protecting her. Kane has treated how she should have been treated all along.

    03/18/2021 13:04

  • Jenn McCoy

    oh please let it be kane and not the gamma she needs a strong male to back her. thank you for putting a stop to noah he didn't deserve her. so ready to see where things go from here.

    03/18/2021 12:13

  • Vicki Trewella

    YES!!! team Kane! 💖

    03/17/2021 21:12

  • Tabitha Nichols

    I want Athena with Kane!!! but I am curious where Noah wanted to take her and for what? I would ask that so, Athena and Kane can prepare.

    03/16/2021 16:10

  • Jenn McCoy

    Noah is only there for Noah he is so selfish. he clearly just wants power. he didn't even care about his kids. he broke the bod first and wants to act like he cares. he thinks she needs him get the fuck out of here. Kane is so caring towards her and the kids he helped name them. he has held and been there for her and the kids. I hope they complete the bond they both deserve eachother clearly they are second chance mates. I want them together so bad such a cute.powet couple. anyone that thinks Noah still let's make a list 🚩he was with someone else when they met 🚩he stayed with cunt that wasn't mate 🚩lied about coming back only reason he did was due to realize the lie 🚩cared more for sister than her 🚩treats like crap and ignores her 🚩 didn't care for her while pregnant 🚩wasn't there for birth 🚩didn't help or stand up for her at pack 🚩don't fight for her 🚩sleeps with another and breaks bond 🚩comes back for "her"(bs) not the kids he does not deserve her or to help rule when he can't even be a proper mate. kane on the other hand knows how to rule over large groups and has been nothing but kind. cant wait for more lol love that she electrocuted him lol

    03/16/2021 15:00

  • Tosha Scott

    Wow... ummm what can I say? First let me ask what exactly is Damon now and will he get through the changes? Now onto Noah. Seriously his behavior is now borderline insane. He has done so much wrong and used excuses for everything he has done. His ex, the fake pregnancy, his sister. Now he feels that he is entitled because he thinks it's his throne to take? He believes that Athena has no choice. Also how can he not care for his children after the tantrum he threw about his sister being left behind because he was raising her. The children are his and he brushes them off as though he never helped conceive them? What exactly is going on in that mind of his? How did he come to the conclusion that he gets to keep Athena and still do as he pleases? Just because she told him she needs her mate to ascend does not mean she would receive only one mate. He started the breaking of the bond and she finished it and hopefully Kane can be that mate now. I don't know what its going to take to get Noah to have a wake up call and take responsibility for his actions. I seriously can not believe he sees no issue with how he has acted and as Athena said he referred to them fixing the problem not him solely. Until he realizes where the problem lies he is a danger to everyone. Just wow.

    03/16/2021 13:43

  • Daisylion

    I LOVE THIS DIRECTION like yes 👏🏼 a HUGE F U to Noah for being a lil a hole like not once has he had respect for Athena like not once has he ACTUALLY fought for their future together he worries about what he has to do he doesn’t even care that she’s feeling him move on AND she’s taking care of your two kids on the road?? like what kind of father and mate are you?? like you know what needs to be done and instead of helping you’re gunna do what you’ve always done and be a coward and run away and get all butthurt and go put your D in another P just for giggles or what?? like ugh I can’t stand him. BUT I LOVE KANE like yaaasss honey!! ask me what ever and I’ll do it !! like he’s ALL OVER IT NO QUESTIONS ASKED ON THE SPOT😩 I love him I ship it 1000000%

    03/11/2021 22:03

  • Tosha Scott

    For anyone rooting for Noah his actions yet again prove he does not value the mate bond. All his posturing about loving Athena and wanting to be a family when Athena told him she was leaving with their children to seek the help she has needed and for him to stay and do as he pleases. Well doing as he pleases is his strong suit. He didnt even wait to see if he could get her back. Also all that time Athena obediently followed him to where he wanted and made little to no progress and she makes on trip on her own and has real help for the first time. She is being treated as her title and being included and personally Kane is the better option. The royal blood line won't be wiped out by Noah's ignorance if Athena and Kane commit to each other. I'm happy this book is going in this direction. I just would like a chapter or two from Noah's point of view to see where he is and what he is doing.

    03/10/2021 16:22

  • Jenn McCoy

    I want her and kane together he wants a strong partner an equal! noah never did he always put himself first. she tried but he has been pushing back sense the beginning. he clearly found someone else no surprise considering he never prioritized her first and had another while stringing her along in the beginning. Noah is not worthy! I hope kane is her second chance mate with the electric touch they had. she deserves to be happy they both feel somthing for eachother and clearly he is ok with her kids.

    03/10/2021 10:59

  • divarita blitz

    and she's now a cheater mark or no mark

    03/09/2021 18:52

  • divarita blitz

    they have to submit to each other. noah has been. he let her take charge in everything. he even let her take charge in leaving his sister and she has to understand he still is an alpha, a man, a brother and her mate. he has the right to feel and deal with everything too. she takes her sweet time in being pissy when things don't go her way and runs. BUT everytime she runs she runs into danger and causes problems. Kane spells danger.

    03/09/2021 18:51

  • divarita blitz

    sorry but they both were an ass not just noah. neither talked things out. I don't like or trust kane in the slightest. noah needs to go get his mate. and the things Damon spoke to her in the diner were true.

    03/09/2021 18:46

  • Tosha Scott

    This is better for Athena. She needs someone who is going to work with her and for her. She is a royal and needs to fulfill her legacy. I don't understand how she ended up with someone like Noah when it should had been someone like Kane all along. Kane clearly can relate more with her. Although she had adopted parents and brother who loved her fiercely and made her life filled with love, she had to conceal her identity and will never know her bio parents. Noah never had to struggle. Kane has since he lost his parents and yet he still built his pack from the ground up and has more honor then Noah will ever possess. I know Athena will undoubtedly struggle to accept Kane especially knowing Noah is still out there and is also the father to her twins, but I hope after all her trials she is yet to face on her journey to the throne that she can find happiness and more then anything I hope that happiness is with Kane. Noah would be her downfall if allowed to be king and the royals could all be killed for good. He will never amount to who he could had been had he not chose the path that led Athena to flee from him on multiple occasions. Looking forward to more updates soon.

    03/09/2021 16:21

  • Vicki Trewella

    Oohhh YES! Athena! you go girl... he's a much better choice than Noah..💖

    03/09/2021 00:24

  • Ashley Mclagan Bonds

    I'm very much enjoying the story so far, I can't wait for the next update 😍 🤗

    03/08/2021 17:35

  • Trish Krips

    Do they have a mate bond? I hope so because she deserves happiness not the way Noah treats her.

    03/08/2021 01:37

  • Jenn McCoy

    yes! clearly they have a mate bond! Noah has been an ass to her and she told him it was over that she was gone he didn't deserve her clearly he only wanted what came with her. not caring or present while she was pregnant nor there when she had the kids even after he was not the one caring for them. he is not a true mate. he's so stuck on not seeing his sister so let him go back and care fore her but kane has been caring and understanding sense she arrived and both had feelings off the bat then the touch with the mate bond I say go for It screw Noah!

    03/08/2021 01:33
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