The Forgotten Princess Comments

  • Tabitha Nichols

    when do you update?

    02/28/2021 23:54

  • Mary Hogan

    I'm out don't like her cheating not very queen like

    02/26/2021 00:49

  • Vicki Trewella

    Oh WOW! Look out Noah... served you right for being such an Arse!😂🤣

    02/24/2021 05:33

  • KayKovo

    ammmaazzzinnnnggggg. I binged this all day today. I hope.things with her and Noah work out tho. I dont trust kanes motives

    02/24/2021 01:12

  • Tosha Scott

    I'm glad that Kane and Athena are getting to know each other. He at least has a level head and gave her solid advice. I hope Athena does not have to go back to Noah. He just isn't right as a mate for her. His sister is his excuse to how he has treated his mate, but he has never treated her like he should had. The way he put his human partner first and catered to her lies about the pregnancy, the way he exploded when he found out his mate was pregnant and threw things in a rage, the way he blamed her for thinking of his sister and how all the traveling which could undoubtedly be dangerous and thought of keeping her safe, but he felt like it was wrong and started shutting his mate out, to how when he got to a pack he made her wait while he made himself seem to be the important one and taking her children like she was just a tool and he had no use for her anymore. Mate bonds are not supposed to be like that. So hopefully Athena can move on from that and Noah can let her go and do whatever he wants. Maybe even find his own happiness.

    02/23/2021 16:33

  • Ashley Sweet

    Was enjoying the story but I'm not a big fan of books where the main character is constantly put through trauma and heartache so I'm all done. Would have been nice if she was just allowed to have a happy life for the most part.

    02/23/2021 14:29

  • Linda Hughes

    I think Noah and everyone else has had a spell put on them and that's why they are acting the way they are. The goal is to make her feel alone and hopeless so she won't take the throne. But she will prove them wrong. Hope she doesn't give up on Noah

    02/22/2021 21:39

  • Melissa Nix

    I'm really glad that she found out that

    02/22/2021 09:07

  • Tosha Scott

    I'm glad Athena made it where she needed and while her leaving Noah behind is still fresh and having just brought her twins into the world I have hope she and Kane get close and he is everything to her Noah clearly couldn't be. I just can't see a happy ending here if it's with Noah. Kane at least can show he is sincere in apologizing and isn't looking down on her for being a woman with power and although they just met is helping her without any motives and has been more open to her in the very brief time then spent together then Noah had been from the moment he knew she was his mate. I don't know what you will have become of Noah if things progress for Athena and Kane. Hope you write more to read soon. :)

    02/19/2021 13:50

  • Peyton Cheesebrew

    does anybody know how often this updates?? I'm LOVING this story lol I'm glad athena left Noah finally, I do a lot of maladaptive daydreaming and I wanted to say a whooooooooooooooole bunch more than athena did but, then again, I'm ghetto 😂😂

    02/19/2021 01:30

  • Allicia Beckett

    I’m really enjoying this book and patiently waiting for new chapter updates!

    02/17/2021 06:45

  • Elsa Rodarte

    this book has lost me already. maybe the slow updates but there’s stuff I’m not getting

    02/13/2021 02:56

  • Tosha Scott

    I'm happy Athena has risen as the queen she is meant to be instead of being submissive. She has the royal blood and powers. I'm glad she spoke out and let them know that she is in charge and let Noah know his transgressions and even if he realizes it now he still does not deserve her. He only acted as if he tolerated her rather then being a mate. She had more poise and released him to be able to do as he pleases which he has anyway. I understand him being upset about his sister, but it does not excuse his behavior. He has never been the mate he should have been even at the very beginning when he claimed he had been waiting for his mate and that even though he was in a long term relationship with a human that he set terms that if and when he found his mate he would claim her. Then the whole fake pregnancy. Finally when Athena went to him to confess their one time resulted in her being pregnant, her heritage, and needing help his actions were not as he voiced about wanting a mate and heirs. As far as Charlotte goes, I can't believe she has abandoned Athena. Athena was a great friend to her. Guiding her to her mate, allowing her to stay with her after her ex cheated, and only to be abandoned by her time and again. I hope who athena finds in the largest American pack is a partner to help her rule since everyone else is not worthy and on power trips as though they are the ones who are royal born with royal blood. #teamathena

    02/12/2021 14:39

  • Reader-232274

    I do like this story, but there’s so much drama & zero bright spots. I need some kind of happy teaser to keep me going.... Also, I don’t understand why everyone hates her. Her mate shouldn’t be able to keep from being there for her... This story has a ton of potential.

    02/10/2021 01:28

  • Daisylion

    can’t wait for more I feel like this story just keeps getting better☺️ But also Noah needs to grow up js.. act like the Alpha you’re suppose to be and support your partner like she did what she thought was best at the time and there really wasn’t any other way to go about it considering you now have TWINS how are you Gunna travel with 3 babies???

    02/06/2021 23:51

  • amber sweet

    What I cant understand is why damon thought she was acting like a selfish brat. It seems Charlotte is giving her the cold sholder to when at the Alphas house? why Noah thought it was acceptable to treat her like crap because she was protecting his sister is beyond me

    02/05/2021 16:13

  • Cora Montgomery

    I hope she leaves their sorry asses they don’t deserve her anymore she deserves better and she should stop letting them push her around I have bad feeling he is going to do something stupid like that her babies and she is gonna go all bad ass on them all

    02/04/2021 23:00

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 21: I’m loving how Athena being a good Luna. she found stuff that was not clean and stuff not good enough for her pack. it’s not about redecorating. it’s about organizing things

    02/04/2021 17:47

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 21: I think Athena made a mistake at not trying to get Noah to share his burden about the meeting. something big is worrying her husband. this time it’s not about the babies or her powers

    02/04/2021 17:15

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 21: it seems like even though Athena is princess she didn’t have a lot of confidence. then she lived very frugally

    02/04/2021 17:12

  • amber sweet

    s o was it shoes or boots that he was wearing? just little details paint a clearer picture

    02/04/2021 15:10

  • Tosha Scott

    Noah has a lot of nerve. Athena is completely justified for her actions on leaving on more then one occasion. his empty promises from the beginning are implorable. If it weren't for her responsibilities I would hope she could get a second chance mate. he has not made any attempts to make her fee secure with him or thal he cares or feels the same about the mate bond and feels superior all of a sudden. its sickening. #teamathena.

    02/04/2021 07:15

  • Jenn McCoy

    wow go Athena! I agree with her he is being a selfish asshole! he doesn't deserve to sit there like he cares now when he hasn't given 2 fucks before they was born. I just hope he doesn't take them from her. He wouldn't be who he is without her. he needs to get off his high horse and be a mate and dad.

    02/03/2021 23:52

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 20: having all those new powers coming to you. then being pregnant too. that sounds hard for any woman

    02/02/2021 04:40

  • Armida Cudney

    Ahh, Come On. It's Getting exciting. please,please up date when you can.

    02/01/2021 08:08

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 10: Sofia is breaking my heart. no thena won’t be your mommy. but will love you just like if mommy was here

    01/31/2021 00:29

  • Ashley Mclagan Bonds

    I really hope Noah isn't doing anything stupid to cause her the pain she's feeling or worse her to loose the babies... I can't wait for the next chapters... please don't keep us waiting long

    01/29/2021 15:00

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 18: good idea surround with all the emotional support she’ll need

    01/29/2021 03:11

  • Jordan Willey

    love love love this book!!! I need more!!

    01/28/2021 22:56

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 17: her and Noah better fix their sh.it soon. I more powers come in and she can’t control it. then the siphoning their mom’s energy

    01/27/2021 11:29

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 16: there’s the mate that Athena needs to know and love

    01/27/2021 10:36

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 15: nice surprise most werewolf books the can’t change into their wolf. the reason being it will hurt the babies. you are not going that way cool

    01/27/2021 10:25

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 15: Damien was right again. Noah is the only one that can help her calm down and control her powers

    01/27/2021 10:22

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 14: what the holy hell is going on here? I guess they want their princess

    01/27/2021 10:11

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 13: I don’t agree with Venus when she told Athena to stay. Noah was going yes Damien would protect her. that would scare me too. does she need Noah? HELL TO YES

    01/27/2021 10:04

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 12: surprise you’re having twins! I think was right to bring her to Noah she really needs her other half now. I hope she’s not losing the babies

    01/27/2021 09:46

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 11: you power are really come on. I think her wolf had to prepare herself for the change. that’s why she went MIA

    01/27/2021 09:36

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 10: will Athena take him back accept his apology. then tell him he’s gonna be a daddy for real. when Caden finds out he’s gonna go through the roof

    01/27/2021 09:05

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 10: that is so disgusting she would do that to him. I know some woman do that but it’s just plain WRONG

    01/27/2021 09:03

  • Bella Jersey 2

    a request Damien is such a good guy can’t he get a second chance mate?

    01/27/2021 08:53

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 9: I get Althea reaction to Charlotte. she couldn’t get Jarred to wait? her best friend just passed out! then the other jarred is Noah’s beta keeping him close to Althea even though he can’t would be smart

    01/27/2021 08:52

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 9: it might blow up in her face but it’s the truth. I’m sure he was hiding somewhere when he was talking to Althea. when decides what he wants maybe he’ll be lucky and Althea and his baby will be waiting

    01/27/2021 08:49

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 8: I don’t how Claudia gonna handle competition. there a question whether the baby inside of Claudia is Noah’s. like said before the one in Thea is his. that child will inherit the throne when Thea steps down

    01/27/2021 08:40

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 7: maybe Claudia could be pregnant with Noah’s baby. I sure believe Thea is. only other I could think that’s effecting her is Noah a betrayal. he could of phone. then why the fu.ck did he come back? to rub it in Thea’s face? have fun with her whiny voice

    01/27/2021 08:31

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 6: question what’s to be sorted out with Jarred. I means he’s a beta to pack. char packs gets in a car and starts a new life

    01/27/2021 08:21

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 5: let’s Claudia home so she can go on with her happy life. then we can see if he’s rate to be mate to a queen

    01/27/2021 08:07

  • william boyd

    wow...just google play read text and let the voice read outloud the book for you chapter too the end..nice work would love too see that movie one day mark

    01/26/2021 07:47

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 4: get him a shirt hello I’m a di.ck

    01/23/2021 05:12

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 3: now that’s something as queen we can fix. dead end male in dungeon. we can put amy in the cell right next to him

    01/23/2021 05:02

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 2: LOVED this chapter so funny. he’s surprised she’s mad or hates him?! here’s a clue moron get the flozzy away from you

    01/23/2021 04:45

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 1: I be nervous too! all of sudden here she has to take the role on of being queen. then she gonna find her mate. will he be okay taking on the backseat? how come her mate didn’t notice her right away. I can’t wait till she gets payback on the mean girls. popcorn anyone?!

    01/23/2021 04:31

  • Bella Jersey 2

    chapter 1: Critique for me personally you spent to much on describing her dress, hair, and other thing. I see the necklace is important but the dress no. is she really putting decorations up when she’s in her beautiful dress?

    01/23/2021 04:27

  • Sharon MacDonald

    I love the story line. except you are using words in the wrong context. you say He's which is : He is . instead of His meaning it belongs to him.

    01/18/2021 04:45

  • Millie Britton

    thank you everyone for being so patient. the new chapter is up, I hope you all enjoy it. I'm sorry it has taken so long, 2020 and Christmas/new year was a complete shitshow, as I know it was for many people. I'm going my best to continue writing, but it's getting quite difficult. I understand you are all eager to read this story and I appreciate all your support, but you'll just have to bare with me, with when chapters will be written and released. I hope you all enjoy chapter 40, and I look forward to any feedback you may have

    01/14/2021 03:23

  • Kirstin Blyton

    when’s the update

    01/11/2021 22:44

  • Amber Jonaitis-Herron

    when will the update be? its been like 2 months since updated hasnt it? I understand u have other stuff to do but your readers that are saving their coins for you are kinda getting screwed

    01/08/2021 15:38

  • Cari Jansen

    when is the update finally coming it was supposed to be finished by the end of last year and it is now the new year. I would really like to finally finish the book. and I am running out of coins. please let me know when it will finally be updated.

    01/07/2021 07:08

  • Cari Jansen

    thanks for the information

    12/12/2020 02:15

  • Millie Britton

    Hello everyone, I'm really sorry there hasn't been an update yet. I'm currently working full time because it's Christmas. I am trying really hard to get the next chapter In a condition where it can be shared but I just haven't had the time to finish it. I hope you can all be patient just a little bit longer ☺️

    12/11/2020 20:54

  • Cari Jansen

    when is the update going to be posted you said it would be up by the weekend on the 30th of November but we still haven't seen it

    12/10/2020 02:36

  • Cari Jansen

    please could there be an update soon I am trying to save coins for it but it is really hard when they start to expire before the updates come out

    12/06/2020 20:52

  • Debbie Boston

    I feel for Sophia.

    12/01/2020 11:47

  • Elizabeth Fox Bramlett

    Will there be an update soon

    11/30/2020 19:15

  • Delecia Lyons

    Ppl don't understand that these Authors have other things to do outside of writing and entertaining ppl with more chapters

    11/05/2020 14:00

  • Linda Hughes

    I really like this book!! More updates please!

    11/05/2020 01:17

  • Victoria Richard

    any updates any time soon

    10/31/2020 12:25

  • Bethany Newsom

    why did A’s parents get such extreme consequences just bc of a slap to Stacey? That seems way too extreme...

    10/28/2020 13:23

  • Cari Jansen

    does anyone know when we are going to get any more updates and when they will be out

    10/27/2020 20:02

  • Megan Cauthon

    are updates sparatic

    10/20/2020 20:38

  • Tosha Scott

    I've stumbled onto this story and have so far enjoyed it. However I've been checking daily for updates and see known have been made. Will this story be continued and completed?

    10/07/2020 23:36

  • Linda Hughes

    It's a great story but we need updates please! We need the rest of this story

    10/07/2020 22:44

  • Debbie Boston

    love it

    10/06/2020 15:49

  • Mindy Freeman

    when/how often do you update?

    10/03/2020 14:49

  • Linarose Williams

    i love your book

    09/26/2020 08:15

  • Loretta Lynn

    does matt not realize that he already examined her??

    09/25/2020 15:13

  • Regine Velando

    i love your book

    09/25/2020 10:33

  • April Borchers

    love your book hope to read more update soon please thank you

    09/23/2020 07:18

  • Alice Gammage Jones

    I was hoping I could just go buy this book somewhere, but can't seem to find it anywhere else.

    09/17/2020 01:09

  • monya hassan

    I love you story smmm!!

    09/16/2020 07:49

  • Júlia C.

    I am in love with this story! 😍

    09/16/2020 00:47

  • Angie Valladares

    Have you thought of translating the book into another language such as Spanish? This book has its popularity in English but it could also have it in Spanish, imagine the millions of Spanish-speaking people who could love this book on wattpad or on another platform

    09/15/2020 18:17

  • Breana LePage

    please please please come out with a new chapter soon!

    09/15/2020 03:40

  • Jade Johnson

    not even a day

    09/14/2020 07:45

  • Rose Cole

    love the book so far, a little heavy on clothing details but unless I missed it, is she even marked yet?

    09/14/2020 05:35

  • Shelba Jane

    i am a voracious reader but cant afford to buy coins for the next chapters. do the next chapters come later if u cant pay???

    09/14/2020 03:03

  • AriLisa Smith

    soo how did she get pregnant???

    09/14/2020 02:57

  • Carmin Barker

    This story is truly amazing and well written!

    09/13/2020 08:06

  • Susan Patrick

    this is good! really enjoying it. I just want to hit claudia- the Luna, an tell her to keep her hands to herself,if she is indeed pregnant.

    09/12/2020 19:02

  • trisha oballo

    The story really gives me goosebumpsss. Keep up the good work! 😁

    09/11/2020 13:34

  • Amanda Caruana

    oohhhh this is SO good!! how often do you update I need to know what happens...

    09/05/2020 03:13

  • Frances K Jones

    I tried to buy coins is says an error has occurred...help

    09/04/2020 02:41

  • Venus Schronce

    why are all of my chapters locked again

    09/02/2020 19:36

  • Hano IsMe

    The hair part is what I always imagined doing ^-^ like, wouldn't it be so cool to put gems in your hair :D

    09/02/2020 17:03
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