His Promise: The Mafia’s Babies Comments
Ashley
JUNE The introduction catches your attention and the storyline is interesting. I do not usually read mafia stories but this one might be worth taking a chance. I wonder why the female character is in danger, is it because of his enemies or because of her past. I will have to read to find out.
06/23/2023 18:55Awurabena Afriyie Asare
JUNE I love mafia stories a lot especially the ones they guys go every length to protect their family. I would say this book is a clear example of accidental love. That is when the couple did not like each other for some reason and fir peace to reign between both parties they fell in love. I hope this guy protects the lady from any external forces and enemies.
06/23/2023 18:41Janaki Kollepalli
JUNE... I am not a fan of mafia stories... but the introduction is interesting and intriguing... so if you like this genre... go ahead and read it... feels worth it
06/23/2023 16:52Brenda Kay
JUNE what a great chapter the author … it has me very interested in their style of writing I hope the next chapter are just as interesting, this is a book that I won’t be able to stop reading.
06/23/2023 16:32Rafael
JUNE. I like the introduction. the story seems a very interesting. I like that is a complete story. it seems to have many twist that is a plus for me. I will read it in the future.
06/23/2023 16:18Bianca Bratu
JUNE I have already started this story when I found out about it in a post. I really love the idea of this plot but I hate that even if he wanted to stand by her side and help her with the baby his parents and the world that he is part of always have to stand in their way and I really hope that in the end they will work out this difficult situation because I don’t believe that he could stay away from her and the baby.
06/23/2023 16:06Helen M
JUNE The introduction definitely has me intrigued. It is well written and makes me want to continue reading the book. I will be adding this one to my library for sure. JUNE
06/23/2023 16:01
Kitty-694016
JUNE. I tend to not read mafia books. this one sounds interesting though. Not sure why it matters whe her parents are , and hopefully that will be revealed. this does sound as if there is enough plot twist to keep me entertained. I will consider adding it to my long list
06/23/2023 15:58icuovrthere
JUNE this story seems good through the introduction, I'm not one to really read this type or subject, bit it seems to have solid editing and writing. However, if I were to start reading this and buy all chapters available- it's over $85.00 with the bulk buy discount. no thank you
06/23/2023 15:18
miss foodieeee😋😋😋
June-as not bad I'll add it to the library and read it as soon as am done with the other books but I feel like if the female could come out as a strong lead that would be the best but that's just my opinion without reading the book so no judgy 😁😁😁
06/23/2023 14:57Daisy Francisco
JUNE Interesting introduction,this is totally awesome book to read,there’s more intriguing and more actions on this book,love it already
06/23/2023 14:54
Amal Samir
JUNE, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next. The plot of the story seems interesting, mysterious and fun to read to see how the heartless mafia boss will be changed by love and how they will face their issues to keep their family
06/23/2023 14:17Jill Robinson
JUNE This is definitely the kind of story I would read and will be adding to my library. The description draws you in so you want to read more and reading the beginning has not disappointed, looking forward to reading more.
06/23/2023 13:45Hazel Honey
JUNE Somewhat interesting sounding plot, could be a nice read. hopefully the main characters are willing to work for the relationship. It can be difficult, especially when people come from truly different worlds.
06/23/2023 13:25Alice Pinto
JUNE this book seems really interesting! it isn’t the genre I prefer to read but I am intrigued! the introduction is good and intriguing. I love a strong feminine heroine and I think this is about that!
06/23/2023 13:16
Nims karunarathne
JUNE I actually read the first few chapters and unlocked a few more too. but damn this is a 240+ chapters book. so I’m wondering if I should continue to read this or not. but an interesting novel
06/23/2023 12:39Leré Saunderson
JUNE Ah hah! At last a book with a real life heroine that has never experienced anything in life until the hero suddenly appears. I like this book and will add it to my library to continue reading.
06/23/2023 12:24Michelle Ninerlady Cachu
I love this book.
06/23/2023 07:37maforikan mahosi
please when is the next update
06/08/2023 20:02Aimee Johnson
The book has a good story line but the change in 1st person and 3rd person starts to get confusing between Serena and Christian.
05/25/2023 01:10
Joele G
Sephrik this story has got me hooked into finding out how will it end
05/24/2023 23:00Kobie Stroebel
sephrik Interesting start
05/24/2023 19:53Emily
Sephrik interesting blurb but can’t quite get into the story
05/23/2023 22:00
Christina
sephrik. I love mafia stories. very good start. can’t wait to read more. definitely adding to my library.
05/23/2023 21:10Shai Bell
sephrik added to library
05/23/2023 19:48Janaki Kollepalli
sephrik... I am not very into mafia stories... I don't know how to react to the introduction
05/23/2023 17:29Raen Jayda
sephrik. sounds like a good read
05/23/2023 17:01Daisy Francisco
Sephrik, This is interesting and quite intriguing too, there’s more on the story but I have to read more chapters to understand this book
05/23/2023 14:18Amal Samir
Sephrik, the intro intrigues you to read the book to know what will happen next between the two. How she will deal with him and his world
05/23/2023 13:39Alice Pinto
sephrik - i am not really thrilled with the synopsis and the beginning of this book. maybe I’ll give it a chance later
05/23/2023 11:42John Robinson
Sephrik - It looks like this book is in two parts potentially. I like the title of this book and has started well, looking forward to reading more.
05/23/2023 11:18Kim Irvine
g9jo I really am liking these book it such that she gone through what she when through but that so friend to love thing and they are so much a alike.
04/22/2023 01:14Linda Strandquist
g9f3 hope squirrel is happy as the story moves on. sounds interesting at this point. hope no one hurts her.
04/05/2023 05:23Jeniffer Barnes Hurt
#g9f3# "His Promise: The Mafia's Babies", what an awesome story. Anything with the mafia I'm definitely in. Such unexpected twists and turns.
04/04/2023 21:18
Megan Phillips
g9fs I do love a mafia story and so far this one definitely hits all the right marks.
04/04/2023 21:15
Reader-731248
g9f3 it is interesting so far. will be great to see how it develops further on.
04/04/2023 12:48Vicki usher
g9f3# so I am a sucker for a good mafia book and this one is no exception. Good storyline, i must see how this ends
04/04/2023 09:42John Robinson
g9f3 I like the title of this book and it has started well. It looks like it's two books or two parts maybe, anyway looking forward to reading some more.
04/04/2023 08:07Reader-314688
g9f3 sounds so Interesting and I want to continue reading it. I liked at the comments and saw he cheated!! how dare he I want to read to see how she reacts!!
04/04/2023 05:03
Jenn
Both books were great reads, I loved the characters!!
03/22/2023 19:29Judith Onome Oremegue
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01/21/2023 14:53
sweet Ali
yes I so to ❤️
08/25/2022 09:19
chavontheauthor
Hey everyone, author here! Book 2 starts from Chapter 2.1!
06/24/2022 12:12chavontheauthor
Hey everyone, author here! Many of you have been asking for the second book and I haven’t published it on all platforms because even though I am proud of my work, I’m not completely satisfied! However, there is a Vincenzo spin-off called Our Promise: Vincenzo Garcia which I will publish, so please keep an eye out for this.
04/29/2022 16:01Lois Harris
this is a good book can’t wait for your second book on this
04/24/2022 18:49Euclette Spence
oh my, I feel for her
03/17/2022 04:13Faybulous Bubble
when he cheated i felt do angry. i feel like he did that to me 😭 i need update
03/05/2022 19:11Maria Megalogeni
can’t wait for book 2. Do we know when it’s coming out?
03/05/2022 17:31Reader-582539
book 2 ?
03/02/2022 03:42
BluezCluez
enjoyed the book.. thank you author for a great story… i’m assuming and hoping that there is a 2nd book with how everything ended..
12/28/2021 10:56BluezCluez
good update i think beau is her twin
12/28/2021 00:57Jennifer Larimer
when will the next book be out?
11/18/2021 21:13
Shakes
I have finished the book and it's as if there was supposed to be a few more chapters. is gina the girl.he cheated with from the club? does she take the job and how does Christian work.with her? Will serena know the truth or be played for a fool? what? did Lucio deliberately hire Gina following the one night stand and hopes gina will enable christian to function better if she is in his life? If so what are his thoughts about serena and Christians relationship? what's the end game? argggghhhhh the ending is rushed and is not really complete.
05/24/2021 00:42Shakes
serena has managed to irritate me in chp 92 won't move until she sure about vince, risking everyone's lives. yet she is again cries when Christian goes back wanting him to return to her in one piece?
05/23/2021 23:41Shakes
what's up with chapter 62? is it possible to edit the top? or it's part of the read. gripping book by the way. though sometimes it co fusing when the name is meant to be gio and enzo is the one been mentioned. particularly when the drama happened. their are also grammar errors. however one can still follow the story and it's interesting.
05/22/2021 17:33
Sweets32
what’s the name of book 2??
05/15/2021 15:46
